You'll be damn angry at me and you have all the right to be so coz I've hardly commented on almost 7 chapters!! I'm so sorry but the Uni ppl are sqeezing me out n I rarely get free time!! Finally today I got my study holidays, and the first thing I did was log in to IF and read out everything I missed out in the past one month!! One damn month!!
Wouldn't want to vent out here..LOL.. *holds ears* Sorry..
Of to reading the updates...
Chap 3:
"What a Lordy Lord" That line by Khushi was superb. Khuhsi and Payal have different wavelength's of thought!! While the castle mesmerises one, it petrifies the other!! What a contrast...!!
Chap 4:
Khushi is Khushi...if allowed she would have collected everything in the orchid..LOL!! Khushi enters into the Castle of Raizadas..Whoa!!
Chap 5:
Lady Anjali seems to be a very dignified yet polite woman!! I love the way her character's been given an intro!! She falls straight into his arms...epic!! She did have the guts to say she would look wherever she wants..I just can't stop saying wow!!
He couldn't touch or hurt her physically but he did more than that!! By ripping of her dress, he's ripped her soul!! And calling her a beggar...crossing all the boundaries of humanity itself!! But the thing to ponder upon is why is he like this? Is it his dark past that's turned his heart stone and his eyes cold, because no one's born a heart without feelings..!! It's the circumstances that groom the nature of a child and certainly here with Lord Arnav!!
Chap 6:
Payal's mom is a woman with a golden heart..She not only accepted that child but even thought abt whether that child would be able to accept her as her mom!! Her noble intentions are to be praised for..She's her Princess...Aww..that's heart-touching..loved the way even Payal accepted her and the bond that exists b/w them!!
Chap 7:
The mere mention of his name terrified her!! It shows to what an extent he'd scathed her!!
Chap 8:
What a chapter!! Opened new boundaries, showed the other side of the character's, introduced new emotions!! Amazing!! You've stayed true to the character of the Arnav we knew intially and infact have done complete justice to it...
Chap 9:
Arnav's words like Anjali stated are true but very heart-wrencing!! Imagining a person saying that he has a cold heart...it would takes ages and ages of pain, hurt and agony that could get a person to utter such words!! Again I loved the irony of this line -"And every wish of mine is for him who never believes in them"
Beautiful updates so far :) Loved reading each one of them!! The splendid part of it is the way the characters have been introduced and being developed! My heart truly goes out to Arnav because there's depth in his emotions not that it's not with Khushi but Arnav's pain and distance kind of gets on to me that I cant help but feel sad!! Not that being an anti-feminist I'm defending Arnav's reactions, what he did with Khushi was absolutely horrible but that's way he's been moulded into (I've used 'not' so many times..I'm not gonna use it..Oh god!! again..!!) So in short I'm in love with the story :D
Well I wouldnt ask you to update soon coz I know how difficult it is set time aside for it but yeah I'm definitely eagerly waiting for the next :)
Cheers,
Sia
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