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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

lovely OS and really emotionally well written

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pc17

@pc17

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

What an awesome OS! Spot on 👍🏼

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ASADsweetZOYA

@ASADsweetZOYA

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

nice 1

thnx 4 the pm dear

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Shaz

@Barunkidewani

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

awwweee..Loved loved loved it...brillianttt...👏👍🏼😳

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justmememe

@justmememe

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Aw so cute. Wishful thinking on my part that something like this happens- I'm tired of their fights!!

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

I loved your OS.

My heart clenched when she pointed out how devastating it will be on their families when their marriage ends. (sigh)

Love Khushi's resilience--she is a character who truly inspires me with her spirit and her do-what-needs-doing approach to life.

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Oh my god Smita, this was fab.. I really want Khushi to think beyond the six months.. and i loved his pati's dialogue and her patni dialogue.. Thanks for the PM>

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asrksr

@asrksr

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Beautiful!really loved it!!you are an excellent writer Smita. So we have to wait till weekend to get next wonderful work,right?

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

:) how do you manage to write such beautiful things? gosh so short so sweet...

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vani

@vani

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Nicely said "Patni jo hoon". 😊 👏

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