ishq , junoon , deewangi ... promo ..pg 34 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
AWESOME ! LOVED IT ! VERY NICE PROLOGUE! DO CONTINUE SOON !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...

do continue soon

love rose😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kya baat hai saabji… us langdi ladki pe itna paisa kyun????

Yeh tumhe janne ki jarurat nahin … hamein whoh ladki aur uske bare main jitni bhi khabar hai sab kuch cahiye …. Dhyan rahe.. aaj ke baad nahin whoh .. nahin uske koi bhi baat is mandi main honi cahiye ….

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After some time a girl in white ghagra was brought to anathor car … she had her face covered ….. the sardar opened the door for her and she sat in the passenger seat …. While the sardar sat in the driver seat and they rode off from the mandi forever ….


After some time when they were in a deserted road .. the sardar saw that neither she was talking or was even moving a bit nor had taken off the duppata ….. he halted the car and turned towards geet ….as he moved his hands towards her ghunghat .. he saw that her hands had formed a tight fist in her skirt ….

He procedded and lifted her ghunghat and still her face was down casted and her eyes were looking down …. He smiled a little and said …

Tum duppata ko aache se pehenlo geet …. Aur pani pe lo … puri raat lag jaegi ghar pohanchte pohanchte …..

She looked at him for the first time in those hours and her eyes had surprise in them … he just smiled a little bit and turned his face sideways to give her the privacy so that she could fix her duppatta ….. after some time he turned to her and saw that she had fixed her duppata around her neck securely and was looking outside …. He handed her the water bottle and started to drive ….

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With the first ray of sun he turned to look at the beauty sitting beside him…. She had slept off sitting in the same way as she was sitting with her head resting on the window and clutching her skirt …. Unkown to him a small smile formed on his lips and he drove to his destination….

After few hours he stopped the car in front of a farm house … he turned back and shook geet …

Geet … geet … utho ……

Geet slowly opened her eyes and the first sight she saw was the face of sardar very close to her face and before she could control herself he screamed and turned her face away in an attempt to cover it by her hands …..

Sardar was shocked at the sudden scream but such a reaction was not unexpected …. He scolded himself for doing such a stupidity …. He went back to his seat and came out of the car… after some minutes when he thought it was safe to go near her he went and opened the door and asked her to come out….

By that time she had controlled herself and walked out of the car and came to stand by him….

Hum yahan kuch waqt rukenge and phir hum delhi ke liye niklenge ….

They walked into the farm house and the sardar pointed towards a room and said …

Tum whoh us kamre main jakar freash ho jao …. Hum log aadhe ghante mian nikal rahein hain ……

As geeet walked in to the room … the sardar went to anathor room and locked it from inside …..

He took out his phone and dialed a number …..

Hello dadi ….

Haan … hum log use mercy home main rakh denge ….

Hum log aadhe ghante mian nikal rahe hain…..

As he disconnected the call.. he walked to the wash room and took off his pagdi followed by his beard and then washed his face and wiped it with a towel to reveal a most handsome face….He went out and opened the backseat of the car to take out a packet of dress … and walked to his room when a man came to him ….

Maan sir ….

Maan – haan ….

Aapke liye kuch khan eke liye laun ????

Maan – nahin …. Geet ne kuch khaya ???

man – nahin sir ….

Maan – thik hai….

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Her life had taken an unexpected turn since two weeks … she was sitting on the bed when there was a knock on her door …. She walked slowly to the door and opened the door to see a handsome man standing there …. But neither the face nor the beauty had any importance for her …. As usual her eyes were down casted …..

Maan – geet … tum ready ho??? Hum abhi nikal rahein hain …..

She just noedded and

Suniye ……

maan was about to go when he heard a sweet voice but what she said shocked him …..

kya aap mujhe phirse kisiko beechen walen hain ?????


next ...

what will maan do???



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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
wow dear
first time u are showing geet as damsel dear
loved it...
so msk helps her
hope she stays in KM than mercy house dear...
and the question she asked is great dear...
waiting for the next part
eagerly
pls update soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
awesome
waiting for the next part
eagerly
pls update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

wow dear

first time u are showing geet as damsel dear
loved it...
so msk helps her
hope she stays in KM than mercy house dear...
and the question she asked is great dear...
waiting for the next part
eagerly
pls update soon dear...



well he he he...
you had asked one ...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
part 1
nice part...
so its Maan...
how does he know about Geet?
and why the disguise?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
awsome
plzzz add me in ur pms
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Brilliant...amazing...too good...
Amazing update... 😃
Maan was the sardar...earlier I thought ki that sardar was maan's employee...and has come to buy a girl for our hero...
Kya twist mara...
So dadi.was behind the whole rescue plan..
Poor geet..she does not even know her identity and was thrown on this world of crime... 😭
Thank god she was rescued...
Continue soon


P.s Me upset because I did not get a pm.. 😡 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
awesome..
but,whats the reason of maans behaviour..
feel bad for geet..
her question...just stabbed my heart..
how many innocent girls face such facts...😡

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