Core of My Existence#3(AR Story) DISCONTINUED NOTE PG 124 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: DulceTentacion.

Beautiful Update Wifey! ^-^


😲 ILY 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Die_hardfan_KSG

I have been reading your FF from the very start but have not been commenting about your work. But i really want to say one thing, you are just mindblowing in writing. Your FF has really touched my heart in many ways!! It made me cry so many times 😭 and also made me smile. 😊

I just adore Armaan and Riddhima to the core. Just Love their relation, the way they understand each other. And i also love the affection Armaan and Riddhima have for their friends and vice versa. But the only thing missing now is Shashank agreeing to their marriage and accepting whole heartedly! Riddhima misses him but just doesn't want to accept it. 😊

Coming to the part which finally made me comment here.. Yay!! They are going back home!! Finally!! Loved the way how Armaan is taking care of her. Always knew how possessive he is and we finally saw it.
And precap is a bit shocking.. Looking forward to what will happen next!! 😊

And if possible please pm me also the next time you update. 😊


Hey <3 please let me know your name 😆 and I am so glad you broke your silence 😛 please keep commenting here because it means a lot to me..

I've always wanted to show a mature relation between AR. So you'll get to see more of that than the cute bickering, but yeah the bickering is part of their relation 😆

There is a lot in terms of good waiting ahead for them, but as far as Shashank goes, that is the mean ordeal they need to pass. He's been hard to them, left them at an important time of their life, for his own selfish reasons. So we'll have to wait to see how things related to him come around.

I am REALLY glad to see you comment here, please do comment even in the future.
As for pms please add me to your buddy list and I will surely msg <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: ARKJ_4EVER

Hey Ankuuu!!!! Hi this is so beautiful...amazing update!!!

Sorry for my late comment , i was busy with school n when i was here was only for some time...i just couldn't read quickly n leave awesome part only nah for this amazing, n beautifully written work ...sorry!!

Again coming to the update...wow!!! i mean from the start with Armaan, Rahul, Atul, Nikki n Muski...that part is so emotional, so many feelings, of Armaan able to express himself, the others numbness due to this amazing n beautiful feeling of happiness they felt for Riddhima n AR!!!!
U showed that so amazingly...Rahul, Atul n then Muski, Nikki...their friendship n bonding is out of this world just like Armaan-Riddhima relationship...i love Nikki when she told him to think a bit for himself, for them... 'Sadly toh melodramatic movies ke hero ki tarah banta ja raha hai..don't be so nice, Oscar nahi milne wala hai.."😆

Then when AR talks , that was soo nice n that slip of how he felt...hmmm..surely not now but Riddhima will surely find out about it...Well that part when she meets everyone before leaving is really awesome...she bonded really well with them...n that news of getting discharge after so long must be really make us so happy, i'm sure beyond that, as their patience, has started to pay off...Riddhima's confidence, their love, the hardwork...Really amazing part!!


Oh oh the precap...😲...well surely Armaan is right here cuz she shouldn't force herself, as it's just been a few days...n Riddhima her feelings are also not wrong...Interesting!

Cont soon
Take care

Muahhh
🤗
Pranishta


Hey Pranistha 😃

I was eager to know your views, glad to see a comment <3 thanks a ton
You've read through what I wrote so deeply I am glad you understood both their emotions.
Well as you said Riddhima will surely try to find, which is what the next update is all about, and the precap seems like a fight, but it is not one. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Ayesha87

First of Ankita a big hug to you for everything you do for us, despite he fact u were busy & all, you took out time & wrote such amazing & beautiful part for us 🤗


Honestly the emotions you have expressed of each relationship is beyond perfection 👏
Simply outstanding...loved the worry in friend's hearts for AR, adore the feelings armaan was going through & how his niki understood it so well...awesome 😛

The best part...ridz walking...it so feels like the best feeling ever, the smile automatically's comes on the face reading abt the change in ridz...i understand her emotions, but then again armaan is right, she needs to relax a bit & take things lightly 😊

Loved the bond u showed with each member in hospital... wonderfully shown 😃

Precap is bit scary, but im looking heaps forward to it...can't wait 😉

Thanks once again & u take care...god bless 🤗


Thanks for dropping a comment Ayesha, glad to know you like it 😃

Well whatever Riddhima is doing is for a reason, wait for the next one to know about it <3

Thanks a ton <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: cute_n_sweet

Ankuuu <3

Amazing update :D
Its a blessing to have such friends..They are family.I love the way u have brought out the beautiful bond of friendship between all of dem.The small gesture of Nikki calling Armaan bak shows the depth of the bond they share..:) Armaan Riddhima and their very cute interactions are so aptly n brilliantly written ..The way Armaan lets go off his feelings after like a very long time With Riddhima is somethg which will develop over the future as they begin their new life..new beginning...I m really looking forward for tht.Precap makes me feel tht somethg big is coming up..
Waiting for ur next update :D


Shreyaaa 😃

so glad you commented, even though you've been busy <3
I am so glad you liked the part. And you have it right, its now Armaan's turn to vent his feelings just like Riddhima has had he chance to do with hers, which is what the next 2 parts is all about.

TC <3 love
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Ankita.M


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Hey <3 please let me know your name 😆 and I am so glad you broke your silence 😛 please keep commenting here because it means a lot to me..

I've always wanted to show a mature relation between AR. So you'll get to see more of that than the cute bickering, but yeah the bickering is part of their relation 😆

There is a lot in terms of good waiting ahead for them, but as far as Shashank goes, that is the mean ordeal they need to pass. He's been hard to them, left them at an important time of their life, for his own selfish reasons. So we'll have to wait to see how things related to him come around.

I am REALLY glad to see you comment here, please do comment even in the future.
As for pms please add me to your buddy list and I will surely msg <3



Will be looking forward to the future parts!!

Sent you a pm and a buddy request! Do check it up..!! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Hey! Any chances of getting an update anytime soon? :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
First of all, I AM REALLY SORRY for the late comment.

The part was Amazing. Loved every bit of it.
Very Beautifully written.
Finally Riddhima is going back home. Sooo happy for AR.
I love how u pen down the emotions of each character, go in detail with every little thing.

The precap looks like a big fight is on the way. Hope it will make Armaan speak out all his emotions, vent out everything which he locked to himself in the past months.

I am waiting to read how Shashank reacts when he comes to know of Riddhima's recovery.

Eager to read ahead. Pls cont soon. Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Heyyy...i am sooo sorry for the late reply...i don't know but it seems like i am in a real mess these days...but that is no excuse ..
so i will go strait to my comment...

.the part as always brilliant...u know one of the best things about ur ff is its individuality which is blended with unity...each character is profoundly described and at the same time amalgamated with the story so effortlessly...because of these reason there is a beautiful continuity in the story line...its mainly an AR story but the way u portrayed each characters and their situation and emotions, the story goes beyond a boundary...

in this part also the way u showed the emotions of AR's friends is brilliant...good friends can be like pillar for anyone. I missed the way Armaan lacked his friends in DMG-2...its like they just snached every bit of comforting thing from him...i am sorry that i always compared ur ff with DMG but its just that ur Ff seems to fulfill the gaps and the wishes that i always wanted...it is another reason that COME is so close to my heart...when i read COME i always felt like it should have been in DMG...

Another thing i must mention is the way u portrayed Armaan's emotion when he called his friends ...it was so real for a character like Armaan...and the way Riddhima is getting impatient is also natural..is is just really worked up to get back to her life...i love the way Armaan is trying to cooperate with her..but there is a limit for everyones tolerance...so i am quite afraid with ur preview...

do continue asap...its been long...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Hey guys I know delayed an update again but my finals are on the 2nd of June and get over 5thI'll be free after that, so shall be updating surely after that :) Because I have vacations <3 Thanks a ton for supporting me even though I am irregular.

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