MG ff Love Blossoms, THD 1,THD 2 UPDATING MAR-17 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
part 7
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for the pm dear




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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
awesome
loved how geet trusts maan n maan thinking about he changes in him
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great parts...loved they way pen down everythn..continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
awesome concept
read it one go...
love it
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Blossoms 8



Maan starts his car'.

They reach the ice cream parlour...they seated in corner seat..

Geet: maan wat is ur fav flavor

Maan: hmmm nothing special

Geet: why u r so boring

Maan WAT

Geet: oh kadavulae ( oh god )'. How many times I said not to say tat word'ufff

Maan: im boring

Geet: then wat which fav u want also u don't know..then wat u going to do after..

But the waiter cuts they conversation
Waiter : order sir..

Geet : chocolate Sunday, wat u want

Maan: BLACK COFFEE

Waiter leaves

Geet: black coffee'u like black coffee

Maan : hmm'yes..but don't change te topic, wat u said

Geet: wat I said

Maan: im boring

Geet : yes ur very boring

Maan : GEET don't say that

Geet: then wat..im feeling sad for ur wife..wat wil she do wit u'

Maan: im not married

Geet: thank god' one girl life is saved'

Maan: wat u mean that


Geet: then wat from so long im seeing u' u r not talking too much'temple u wont cum'.ice cream u don't know the favour..u r asking me wat kind of a girl' but I should ask u wat kind of a man u r,no fun,no smile ,no nothing ,u r the great boring person in the world'


Maan: geet stop it im not boring'.im like this...wen there is need I wil talk' not like u always nonstop nonsense'..many peoples are like me..but I didt see a alien like u who can open her mouth for 24 *7'.how u managing geet'wit a smirk smile


Geet opens her to mouth O shaped.. and give him a angry glare..

Geet: hello im not that much talkative..

Waiter brings they order

Maan: hmmm I know

Geet: wat u know

Maan : geet stop it see ice cream is melting hav it fast

Geet: hmmm yaa..i wil see u afterwards' and started to hav her ice cream.

Maan was admiring how she is having her ice cream ,licking her lips,,licking her hands'

Maan ( st ): oh god tis girl make me insane

Geet: maan..

"Maan"


Geet ( st ) : wat happen to him always thinking some thing I think he is thinking abt his problem..oh no.. I wil help to cum out of it.. and holds her collar and says geet u r so genius.. ( me thinking geet u r genius' bechare maan')

Geet: maan wat u thinking

Maan: ah ah no nothing'and start to hav his coffee

Geet:maan were is ur native

Maan: delhi

Geet : oh delhi my guru also delhi'

Maan: guru ?

Geet : ah my guru'who are they in ur home

Maan: my daadima. My sis anni

But geet cuts him and says

Geet: DAADIMA' wow wil she be sexy

Maan chocked his coffee

Maan: WAT

Geet : hmmm I hav seen in drastic hai subse parayi..in that my guru's daadima wil be sexy..thats why I ask.

Maan: oh geet not like that

Geet: why u are here

Maan ( st ) : why she is asking abt me..is she is traping me'


Maan: for business issues

Geet: oh u r staying alone

Maan: hmmm

Geet: oh no u r not missing ur family

Maan: not that much'wen im in my work I wil forget everything


Geet: but maan u know in my drasti serial..my guru also like u so workacholic.. but my drasti cam to his life and changed him'I love him so much'but I cant marry him .. u know why


Maan ( st ) oh god now wat she is upto'
Maan: why

Geet: bcoz he is married

Maan: wat geet u r mad'

Geet: wat to do mad'madly in love wit my guru..

Maan: u r always like this only'

Geet :wat to do manufacturing defect'I cant do anything..

Maan: manufacturing defect wat his this

Geet : I wil say that my fav word like for u WAT..

Maan :u r really pagal ladki

Geet :no im not' and shows her baby face'

Maan wants to pull that cheeks'.

Geet : maan u so cute

Maan: hmmm

Geet: maan now ur relaxed

Maan : for wat

Geet: nothing..we wil go

Maan pays the bill and moves to car'while on the way geet see beach

Geet: maan I want to go to beach see they ' and points him to look to beach..

Maan : no way we wil go geet its already late

Geet: pls maan we wil go I wont take too much time pls maan.

Maan cant deny


Maan: ok..but only for 30 mints

Geet: ok thanku my friend

They went to beach'.geet wants to go inside water

Geet : maan cum we go inside the water

Maan: no way our dress wil get wet and see the water it s dirty..

Geet: maan pls

Maan: no geet or else cum we wil'

Geet: ok ok'.and but geet thinks and runs into water'maan was shocked and run after her to catch her'but geet drag him into beach'they were standing in the beach..

"Maan :geet cum out"

Geet : maan pls relaxed and feel the water on ur feet'

Maan did wat she said he felt som peace'

Geet: now u feel better

Maan : hmmm


Geet took the advantage and spash water on maan'maan was shocked'then realizing wat she did'


Maan: stop geet stop it'

Geet:no way'..


she didt stop'maan suddenly hold her hand and start to spash water on her'. Geet tries to free her hand but maan grip was too strong,but she tickled him, maan loose his hold on geet 'geet took the advantage and start to run'. Maan chase her and caught her'they both were laughing heavily, when maan catch her,they lost the balance and fell on the sand and laughing and panting heavily'.

Geet: maan


Maan panting heavily: hmmm

Geet: u r feeling light

Maan: hmmm geet why


Geet : appada ( hairraba ) u r tension gone, for tis u should give ur property to me but at present u can give som thing else


Maan ( st ) : PROPERTY'. HE WENT TO HIS PAST '.. I WANT UR PROPERTY TOO'.. that s it he got angry.wat he thought to erase from his life again came back in front of him ,yes she is also came from same genetics GIRLS'

Geet ( st ): maan again went to som were shoutes at him'


MAANNN' and tapped on his shoulder..maan sees her hand on his shoulder and snap her hand'


Maan: STOP IT' STOP ALL UR NONSENSE'

Geet: maan wat happen

Maan: I said stop all ur dramas'.

Geet : maan wat happen to u..why u talking like this'

Maan: how dare u behave like this wit..wat u think of me..u know who im

Geet : MY FRIEND

Maan: friend damit..


Geet got shocked'and tries to speak..but maan cuts her and'

Maan:wat u think of urself'so smart this is one of the way to trap rich guys like me'


Geet got shocked and hurt by his words'


Maan: I know,u type of girls wat they wil do ,they wil say friend them love and sleep with them and trap them wit false pregnancy.. from that u can get money'.
Money... MONEY'MONEY' U girls other than money don't know nothing, but geet u don't want to do all this ,I wil give u wat u want , how much u want ..i wil throw on ur face but don't try ur tricks to me, u understand ,u cant cheat me


Geet was very hurted to his words ,tears rolled from her eyes , his each word pierce her heart..no one speaks to her in this way,she was speechless


Maan continues seeing her tears he got more angry


Maan: stop ur tears , damit stop ur false tears I wont fall for that..u girls are well known how to make a guy fool ,why u standing like this, oh u were shocked that I caught u'don't wory..take how much u want and leave me..dont ever show ur face again to me, why u standing after this much stil u want to continue ur dramas ok cum were u want to go hmmm.. cum geet why so silent u wil be going on talking wit ur innocent face now wat happen


Maan was not in sense.,, all he feel was this girl is disturbing from day one so to rid of his emotions he poured his desires but wen he saw hurt in geet's eyes he turned showing his back to geet and closed his eyes'


Hearing all this geet cant tolerate and started to shout

Geet: STOP IT JUST STOP IT PLS'.


Geet: wat u think of urself ,ahh wat u think, I thought u r good person, but u thought and ur words shows how low u r..


Maan turns to her wit full angry'


Geet: I thought u help me by taking me to hospital,for that concern ' I thought u r my friend..wen ur yelling in phone..i thought u hav som problem,so I took u to temple'and to cheer u I did all this,'I thought u are my friend so I felt sad that u r in problem,but u, I didt expect this from u maan'.

Geet stops wiping her tears :i thought u r my friend..but u spoiled that relationship'u know the meaning of friend..meaning of trust..meaning of affection,meaning of love,no no , im wrong in judging u,frist time I failed judging people,but this also a lesson for me.thanku for teaching me a good lesson,,'I wont forget this in my life,,,THANKU THANKU FOR EVERYTHING'. Ah I should give the fees for teaching'


Geet removes her ring from her hand and holds maan 's hand and placed her ring..


Geet: take this as a fees for teaching me a good lesson and for wat all u did today to me'.THANK U MAAN THANKU'. I pray to god that this is last day I seeing u in my life'..BYE MR.MAAN' BYE FOREVER'



Geet saying this runs from there leaving shocked maan'maan was very shocked and sad for hurting geet'and felt by her words, how much he hurted her'..maan staes at her ring that she placed on his hand and see the path she went'.








PRECAP: MAAN SEE GEET IN HIS OFFICE,'.



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Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
the update is awesome
in my view both maan an d geet are rt at their places
u know maan cheated befor by a girl that is why he said all
waiting for next part wt happen when he saw geet in his office
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
awesome part
maneet cute moments
i loved it
what u did at last
maneet fought..😭
poor geet..
has 2 spare maans gussa..
waiting for official meet..
may be another mu n f8 waiting there...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
omg!maan hurted geet..
But his past life made him spat those words..
Nw wat will happen??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
omg maan hurt geet very much i think their friendship is broken
next part jaladi update karo

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