MG ff Love Blossoms, THD 1,THD 2 UPDATING MAR-17 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
omg!geet got friends with maan...
and maan too gave in..
that was so lovely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Awesome update
loved the way geet pulled maan's cheeks and what a
cute explaination she gave him
loved the way she cried t avoid injections
please update soon and pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
part 6
nice part...
oh Geet is such a baby...
poor Maan but hes too affected...
cont soon dear...

PS - plz pm or post the link about the update in the FF daily updates thread dear...this is the second time am missing the update...
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2139829/ff-daily-updates-thread-2-see-page-5-and-60
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Blossoms 7




Maan starts his car ,his phone start to rings..

Maan in phone'.

Maan: Hello..

Person: ''

Maan: wat the hell,u saying'. For wat purposal I hired u'

Person:'',..

Maan:cancel all contacts wit tat xyz company'.mail me all the details immediately..

Maan cuts the call,his face expression changed'.Geet was confused to see him 'she suspected some problem'

Geet (st) : I thinks he is having som problem'.oh my friend ..but why he is very angry..i think the problem is big thing..

Maan was thinking abt it''.

Geet: friend'

Maan: '..

Geet: friend

Maan:''.

Geet tapped his shoulder,'. MAANNN

Maan cam back to sense'.

Maan: hmmm wat geet

Geet: that I should ask u'wat happen maan'r u ok' after tat call ur not fine'som problem?

Maan: hmmm nothing im ok

Geet: r u sure

Maan: hmmm.ok cum we wil go

Geet (st): I know maan u r hiding som thing' u r so tensed, keeping her index finger on her chin and thinking,hmm idea

Maan was seeing geet and thinks why tis girl is silent'

Maan: geet

Geet:hmmm

Maan:wat happen

Geet:nothing

Maan : geet

Geet : hmmm

Maan park the car at corner and turns to geet..

Maan:geet wat happen,why u so silent,I said I wil take u for ice cream'.then wat happen

Geet: hmmm nothing wit a baby face'

Maan ( st): drama queen.. now wats up

Maan:geet say som thing or I wont take for ice cream

Geet pouted her lips and said: ok then im going'

She tries to open the car..but before that Maan holds her hand and ask

Maan:geet wat happen'.

Geet:''..

Maan:geet tat s som office problem leave it'u want to go to ice cream then enjoy it..

Geet: ok but I wil ask u onething u should not say no'


Maan thinks (st):now wats is going to cum'.why she is saying like tis like she wants something from me'for tat only she agreed to cum wit mesee wat she is upto',maan was lost in his own thoughts..that he did't hear her calling him'

Geet shouted : MAANNN'to bring him to sense

Geet:maan pls

Maan:ok say wat u want

Geet: u should not say no

Maan:; hmmm

Geet:I want to go to temple pls u wil take me there pls my friend wit pleading face

Maan was admiring her

Maan : WAT

Geet:maan again wat came back to ur mouth..

Maan:u want to go to temple

Geet:hmmm

Maan: but why

Geet: I want to go tat s it'.. u wont taking me'wit baby face..turning her face to other side and seeing maan through corner of her eyes'''.

Maan thinks: oufff'.ok which temple

Geet:thank u thanku thank u thank u thanku'..

Geet was excited and to start jump in car by sitting''and hit her head'

Geet: OUCH'.AHHH

Maan got worried : wat happen'.its painingand he started to rub her head were she got hurt'.

Maan: r u ok'who ask to jump in the car'now see'.

Geet cuts him and said

Geet: CHUP BIKUL CHUP''.

Maan stares at geet'

Geet: wat tat dialogue belongs only to u'others cant say tat'..

Maan smiles at her and nodes his head and mummures to himself PAGLI

Geet: wat u said ahh

Maan: nothing

Geet:but one thing u noticed

Maan: wat

Geet :u were talking non stop'.

Maan : wat to do wen im wit u 'ur vibration tats why.. and smirks at her

Geet : wat im talking nonstophow u can say that..i only talk wit my friends that to minimal how u can say that im talking to much..and she go on and on

Maan cuts her in middle and said : geet stop stop take a breath and be clam be clam'. Wit teasing smile

Geet took a long breath as maan said and looks at then only she realize he was teasing her'

Geet: stop that again ur teasing me go im wont talk to u

Maan : ok ok im not'.. now can we go to temple

Geet turns her face to other side

Maan: geet

Geet: ok ok hmmm


They reached the temple

Geet: u know maan tis is my fav temple'every Friday I wil be here'very powerful god..my fav goddess.. om sakti maa'

Maan : hmmm

Geet: ok cum

Maan: no u go I wil be in the car

Geet: no u should also cum pls maan'

Maan in stern voice: no..i said u go

Geet: ok ok why u shouting im going

Maan:hmmm

Geet gets out of the car and before going inside'she knockes the car door'maan opens it

Maan : I said I wont cum

Geet : no maan not for that'actually I kept my purse in the bike itself so I should buy poojai plate that's why'before she completes..maan came out of the car and takes his wallet out and gives her 500rs note'


Shopkeeper she is 60 yr old lady friend to geet

SK ; geetu maa enn innaiku koviluku vanthuiruke' ( wat geetu today u came to temple )

Geet : paati naa enn friendkaga vanthen ( granny I came for my friend)

Maan was standing wit her didt understand wat she is talking..then geet says that

Maan: she is also ur friend?

Geet : yes im cuming here every Fridays naa that's why'.

Maan: hmmm.

Geet gets poojai plate and gives 500rs to her

SK: ennkita change illaimaa ( I don't hav change )

Geet : hmmm ok then I wil get it from next shop..


Geet goes to next shop and gets the change.that time som guys were standing in the shop sees her and gives a lustful look to her.. they seeing her from head to toe and commenting to themselves'but she didt see that,,..she goes and give the change to the shopkeeper' but maan saw that and boiling in angry'he wants to punch them right there and take they eyes who see geet'but control himself..he drags geet out of the shop and gives a angry glare'.


Geet: OUCH..maan leave me it paining..

She tooks her hand from his hold and starting rubbing

Geet: now wat I did wat happen to u

Maan:why u went to that shop

Geet: to get the change paa..why wat happen

Maan: why u need to get change

Geet: then how I wil give money to tat paati ( naany)

Geet: wats the problem why u behaving like this'wat happen paa

Maan: see there how they seeing u

Geet sees..she understand why maan was angry..she was very hapy'he was very caring for her'

Geet: leave don't bother them maan'they are like that only'they wont change'all males are like that always behind girls'stupid idiot..wat to do..i too som times think to kill them..but wat to do'.all the girls should face this things'

Maan: not all the males

Geet: hmm I know som are good like u

Maan: don't think too much..im not that good wat u thinking

Geet: no maan my friend is best human..for 2 hrs I was wit u but u didt cross ur limits' u didt talk any unwanted things'u r very nice , genuine, prefect'like my lord ram😆

She thought the things are going emotional so to change'.any how u r not opening ur mouth to smile also then how will u talk and talking s very far u'..

Maan: wat wat u said

Geet: oh no again' but ur 'KALLULIMANGAN(stubborn)'. AND SMILES

Maan: wat is that now u said som thing

Geet: leave it maan cum we wil go

Maan : hmmm'but suddenly'no no im not cuming u go

Geet pleaded : pls maan cum wit me naa pls pls

Maan melts seeing her baby face'

Maan ; ok

Geet: wow thank u thank u thanku thanku my friend

Maan: ok ok cum we wil go

Geet: hmmm

They went inside the temple'

Priest: vaamaa geetu'. Yar evaru.. ( cum my child who is tis )

Maan: don't say he is also ur friend

Geet: but he is my friend

Maan thinks: tis girl is really a pagal

Geet to priest :hello uncle evaru enn friend ( he is my friend)' uncle poojai evar periyil pannugangal' ( uncle do pooja on his name )

Priest : sari geetu ( ok ).. evaru periyar enn ( WAT HIS NAME)

Geet: maan

Maan thinks why she is saying my name to him

Priest : ok maa

Geet closes her eyes and pray to god: maa he is my friend.. he s very tensed..maa u solve all his problems and bless him maa'pls maa'


Maan was admiring geet and smiles to him


Maan ( st ) : today wat all happen,.. she made me smile..changed my life in few hrs'tis is not MSK but as normal man'no way I cant imagine I wil be like tis'but tis girl made tat..no one behave like this to me but she' is she really innocent or acting'no I cant think she is acting..but whatever, today im not MSK..who orders people and make them under my foot.. she is som wat different from other girls'and smiles to him


Geet opens her eyes and sees his smiling face..and smiles to him

Geet: maan pls maan don't take tis smile from ur face..pls its realy very nice to u'

Maan smiles and said: hmmm

Priest gave them aarti and prasatham'

They went around the temple.. and sat there for little bit and went to the car'.

Maan : now were

Geet : icecream but if u like

Maan : if I say no '. Wit teasing

Geet: then no need ice cream its ok we wil have it som other day..

Maan; no no we wil go today'

Geet: really

Maan:hmmm

Geet : thank u' then we wil go

Maan starts his car






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Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
wow..superb update.
love it,
geet is so cute.
love her
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

maan n geet frnds...dats good fr a change...


nice update...


loved it...


thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

thankoo very much for pm and wonderful scrap

dear office main inn dono ka aamna samnaa kab hogaa
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
hey kya wonderfull update hai
geet is so cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Love it graphics.
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