The Shower Scene As It Could Have Been!

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souryadeep

@Sanaya-hi-Rani

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

cv s should have shown this...a 1000 times better scene

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hyde2004

@hyde2004

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

]WOAH!

*Seeti maar scene*

Kya baat!

And the licking the water droplet off her lips...holey moley roley! I could imagine it all - so frickin intense and sensuous!

AWESOME JOB! :

SOO SOO sweat and passaionate one . i really wish they could hire u. for a fentastic passionate script awsome👏👏

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Actually ,i liked yesterday.She was disturbed after the physical proximity and that's progress,right?

But this ...this was even better and definitely more dhak-dhak inducing .

First time I've read an os by you ,really really enjoyed it .Will be looking out for more now.

Thanks .

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Shaz

@Barunkidewani

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

WOW LOVED ITT...😳 really very niceee...👏😳

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RASMI

@-carpediem-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Oh god...truely Cv's ruined that scene..loved it smitha..it was awesome..

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Fantastic!👍🏼 We should have scenes like these...and the bathroom too😃 fit for a tycoon

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Damn! Y cnt d cvs show such faint & drool-inducing scenes!! Loved his effect on her,cz it had an effect on me too(i was imagining while reading,u knw :p) ;)

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ashna27

@ashna27

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

they ruined way too many scenes...this was perfect :) always enjoy reading your stuff:)

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: monsi08
WHOA !!!! Simply loved it...

Thanks for making ASR's bathroom seeming like the one that a business tycoon can have .. and not the one looking like a public washroom... 😆

And yeah... Jab personal property(ASR) itni HOT hai to Public Property(Sallu Miyan) ki kya zaroorat... 😆😆😆

Exactly!

wonderful story... filled a void that had been in my chest ever since I saw that turrible turrible scene yesterday. thank you!👏👏👏👏👏