OS: A walk in the Rain

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Anzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

That was so cute!! Loved it!!

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dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

It wasn't Cheesy a cheesy bit!!

It was Original! Loved it!

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nyxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Awwwhhh I lovedd it Vidhya!

You raise my hopes for the show, really.

Can we expect something like this one day? Them just walking...peacefully...in the rain (and OMG i love the smell of wet Earth tooo...like everyone else and yesss those rainbows as well)...and the ice cream!!

Beautifully written, and you depicted the scenery wonderfully, also that painting is a mastepeice, love the strokes of the colours and the blending.

Thank you for this treat :)

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bluetaj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

i like it..lil moments of life is all that matters and is so refreshing.

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arshi-forever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Aww that was so very lovely to read on a dull day like this in Sydney lol

Thanks for sharing 😊

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-Garima-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Awww this had me grinning like a fool the wholeee time Vidhya! :D

I love love loveee cheesy romance! ;) Especially the rainy romantic kinds! hahaha I enjoyed this OS very much! Their walk was very pleasant and their conversations were so adorable! <3 Keep them coming!

--Garima

Edited by -Garima- - 13 years ago

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

not what I was expecting...thought would be something more tongue and cheek...but I will take the moments in the rain...cos I luv the monsoons and the smell of the earth...where I am I have neither and if you go out in the rain you'd freeze you arse off...so the only way to enjoy is thru the writing...

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Loved it. 😃 It was so sweet, I would love to take a walk in the rain myself like that, provided I am hanging on to a hunk like that. 😉

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Marci

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Aww man now I wish it would start raining here, so I could take a walk in the rain!!!

Awww the mighty ASR likes to take walks in the rain, so do I!!!

This was absolutely Magical and Beautiful!!!!

I could visualize every scene from their bickering, to walking hand in hand together, to seeing the water, and eating the ice cream!!! Everything would seemed so breathtaking if it was actually a scene to watch!!! You write exceptionally!!! Loved the hints of satire, humor, and all out Arnav and Khushi being themselves yet happy to be in sync with each other!!!!

Beautiful OS again!!!

Edited by Harshiti4Lyf - 13 years ago