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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
its great! i loved Khushi's combe back
hpe you continue...do pm me if write 2nd part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Loved this, it was unexpected but was great to see khushi standing up for herself and throwing everything back in arnav's face!

'A man is only a husband when a wife accepts it and says it proudly to the world' wow great dialogue!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Tht was great loved everybit of it go kushi you tell him the meaning of the word husband so proud of kushi love how she stood up for herself and answered him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Oh Emm Gee!!😲

this part was phenomenal! it's like khushi gave Arnav a reality check in the exact way i've been dying to see for ages!😊

i really enjoyed the way khushi put shyaam-the-evil-snake-that-makes-me-swear-everytime-i-see-his-bloody-face down and showed him his real place... cheers for that! 😆

and i loved the way arnav felt the love grow in his chest as he heard khushi say that...

and when khushi stomped down his ego and told him that he was heavily mistaken if he thought that he deserved to be called her husband... 😲😲😲

i am speechless! it's like you somehow read my mind and wrote exactly what i wanted to read!

i was dying for her to tell him all that-- to remind him that he had no authority over her...

and the last line was awesome.. the way, despite all the misunderstandings, Arnav still felt possessive for khushi... the way he said my wife, my child...

I abolutely LUVVED IT!😃

thanx a lot for the pm and please send me another one if you write something else...


Edited by misslaugheasily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
interesting up date more please add me to pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: misslaugheasily

Oh Emm Gee!!😲

this part was phenomenal! it's like khushi gave Arnav a reality check in the exact way i've been dying to see for ages!😊

i really enjoyed the way khushi put shyaam-the-evil-snake-that-makes-me-swear-everytime-i-see-his-bloody-face down and showed him his real place... cheers for that! 😆

and i loved the way arnav felt the love grow in his chest as he heard khushi say that...

and when khushi stomped down his ego and told him that he was heavily mistaken if he thought that he deserved to be called her husband... 😲😲😲

i am speechless! it's like you somehow read my mind and wrote exactly what i wanted to read!

i was dying for her to tell him all that-- to remind him that he had no authority over her...

and the last line was awesome.. the way, despite all the misunderstandings, Arnav still felt possessive for khushi... the way he said my wife, my child...

I abolutely LUVVED IT!😃

thanx a lot for the pm and please send me another one if you write something else...



thanks soo much for the long comment. enjoyed it to the max!😳 so glad you liked it.
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
where is the next part?? waiting for it eagerly since it matches nowaday's track...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
ths is realy gud
hopeflly khuhsi wil ans arnav ans shyam lyk ths sme day
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
You know what surprises me? In February it was announced that Anjali is pregnant and now it is May almost June and yet she is not showing. I don't understand why this is, she should be showing by now, I mean even a little bump should be visible. You can't be four months pregnant and still have a fit body like come on!
& Hopefully Arnav gets his wish and Khushi has HIS child, his possessiveness is too cute!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
really love such O.S.
thanks for making them...
😊

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