Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18}

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cadbury26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#841

loving ur ff its fantabulous keep goin ...

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Ain

@OnepoundChic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#842

ROFL anarkali!!!!!

loved khushi!

arhi scenes were completely awww!

i hope its not a dream!

well done with ur story! 😳

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Uswah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#843

OK its nice update...first he call her close d close d damn then Aditya SMS wrong timing ...now i eager to know about Aditya wht he is upto...but first thing actually who he is...big ? Lamo tht Anarkali dnt fit in dress...well we know tht dress only meant for Khushi ...d she def stole everyone heart when she walk on wramp specially Arnav tu gaya ...oh i like tht Jealousy thing he feel when Aman peck on her cheek ...lol Evil Laugh*
About hate coment i can say only one thing u did fab job with this story d Aditya suspense made it more intresting d i dnt feel to need all Lovy dovy scenes btw Khushi d Arnav ...they need time for thier feeling to understand ...i dnt know about Arnav bcoz his chrac is still have some kind of mystry for me ...but Khushi def need some time for herself to rec thing wht she actually think or want from herself...so write it d way u wnt ... its one of my fav FF ...i always waited ur Pm for this FF

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Shivani Priyam

@Shivani_Priyam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#844

Who the hell told you that story is slow-paced? I am loving it more than anything else at the moment.😳 How impractical it would look if Arnav and Khushi were all over each other at the beginning itself. All I can say is stop thinking about these comments and keep writing as it makes everyone smile( Especially me. You make my day)

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 13 years ago

#845

ooo a fuming and jealous arnav...nice...glad he saw the message from aditya...the guy gives me the creeps...khushi must look gorgeous in her model get-up...

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suadvani

@suadvani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#846

I love your writing - and have said so many many times - every story flows at its own pace and Im appalled that people would anonomously write negative shit.. ridiculous! No body is held at gunpoint and told to read .. if you really dont like something walk away.. dont crap on some one elses hard work..

Btw - I love the progression, build up or characters, emotions and ever thickening plot.. and REALLY hope you dont stop feeding our addictions due to some insane people who wouldnt know good writing if it hit them in their faces!

Edited by suadvani - 13 years ago

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dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#847

A really Nice update Shreya!

bet, Arnav's having a hard time controlling his precious self!

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#848

U tell them ... Ur doing a fine job ... Evidence cumin from how many members comment.like and view ur wrk. So u keep on going.loved the update enjoyed reading about emotions before they take a name... Continue soon :)

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#849

I can't believe someone wrote on your blog. People are crazy and have too much time on their hands.

Just ignore it. You have enough of us who love you and your writing to move on. I hope?

Shelly

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#850

Awesome part!!!!

Also, I totally think that the pace you're going at is perfect, yes a bit slow, but it's not that big of a deal; it makes the story more realistic! Excellent job :) Love your work

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