Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18} - Page 83

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Posted: 13 years ago
Honestly, those bashers are just jealous, because the pace of this story is perfectly normal. Don't worry about it Shreya, you're doing a wonderful job and I've got your back! ;) IM THERE FOR YOU MY SHREYBEY! <3 So never fear! ;) mwahahahhaa! Love youuu! <3

So back to the udpate, DAMN THAT STUPID PHONE AND THAT STUPID ADITYA! He is such a cock block! -__- LOLLL Anna got too fat to fit in to that dress! :P Sucks for her! Arnav's reaction to Khushi wearing the dress was soo him *sigh* <3 These two buttheads, I love them <3 (:

Can't wait for the next update Shreya! (:

--Garima

P.S. I FORGOT TO COMMENT ON AMAN! AHHH he's my cutie-pieee <3 teeheee
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey! just read your FF in one go!!! it's sooo addictive and EXTREMELY well written!! Anna's real name Anarkali.. LOL 😆 can't wait for the next update! and plz add me in your pm list 😊 thx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Garima-

Honestly, those bashers are just jealous, because the pace of this story is perfectly normal. Don't worry about it Shreya, you're doing a wonderful job and I've got your back! ;) IM THERE FOR YOU MY SHREYBEY! <3 So never fear! ;) mwahahahhaa! Love youuu! <3


Awww you know I love you right? Even though you don't seem intimidating what with the pretty purple color of your font and all that :P
But I'm still glad you've got my back! Yay! Love youuu!


So back to the udpate, DAMN THAT STUPID PHONE AND THAT STUPID ADITYA! He is such a cock block! -__- LOLLL Anna got too fat to fit in to that dress! :P Sucks for her! Arnav's reaction to Khushi wearing the dress was soo him *sigh* <3 These two buttheads, I love them <3 (:

Haha, you should know by now that everytime they get close, I will make something or someone will always interrupt them 😈
Bwahahah would it be weird if i said I kind of feel bad for Anna? It would, right?
I WISH SOMEONE WOULD CALL ME BEAUTIFUL ! :( (random I know, but I do!)

Can't wait for the next update Shreya! (:

--Garima

P.S. I FORGOT TO COMMENT ON AMAN! AHHH he's my cutie-pieee <3 teeheee

Lol wait till Nabila reads this. 🤣
She's in love with Aman. :P

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow ! the chap. 17- 18 were superb
love how ur dealing wid the story
though i'm loving this jealous Arnav, but i do want tht "fake-girlfrnd-of Aman" MU to be cleared up soon plzzz, . n frm wht i read in some chap. u will try to hook-up priya n Aman ...ryt 😉
loved the reaction of Arnav ...cud only imagine how breathtaking khushi wud be appearing in tht RED-gown 😍

after this Aman MU ...then we can have a start to unveiling of Aditya's story 😊

plzzz update sooon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you for the PMs Shreya i was unable to comment on part 17 earlier, my stupid internet decided to die!

anywhooo i totally loved part 17 with the whole bar fight and arnav aman and sid becoming the heroes! awww khushi is so sweet for going to arnavs room and dressing his wound!
Okay shreya the whole scene with arnav making khushi come closer to him and get her phone was mindblowing! I was transported into a shahrukh khan bollywood moment there and i loved it!!
oh no which bloody idiot had to text khushi at that moment when she was so close to arnav! This aditya guys creeping me out and i wish arnav would bloody tell khushi why aditya was after arnav in the first place!
Muhahahahahaha... bwahahahahahahaha i totally love you shreya for making anarkali eat so much that the beautiful red gown doesnt fit her because its too tight! In your face anna! Thank you sid for such a brilliant idea khushi is looking amazing in her dress, no wonder her fake boyfriend cant help but steal a peck on the cheek!
hahah aman was scandalised because he was being hit on by anjelo the make up artist! wowww i loved the way that arnav stomped away after aman kissed khushi! It just made it so obvious to khushi that he was angry! I loved arnav at the end if the update! The way he couldnt hide the fact that he thought khushi looked beautiful!
amazing update shreya and im so greedy im praying that we get another update soon! I read your comment at the bottom of the update and im sorry that somebody has been bashing your FF. I love the pace its going because it just adds to the suspense of the story! Cant wait for the next update!
Rozina
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ah.. this story only gets better with each chapter!!! Loved it!! I am loving Sid more and more!! cutie pie!! And the growing attraction and jealousy in Arnav.. to die for!!! So wanted Khushi all dressed up in the red gown!! Thank you for the special treat!!

Dont bother yourself with the basher hun!! They just dont know how to appreciate a good story..! Just continue with your awesome work!! We love it!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear
awesome parts
omg anarkali??!! seriously🤣🤣
and the dress was too tight🤣
that dil toh pagal hai dialogue always gives me goosebumps☺️
yay im so happy khushi's wearing the dress😃 n thanks arnav for appreciating her beauty
thanks for the pmz dear
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey shreya !
I'm fan of yours, and I try to keep up with your works .. But I'm having my board exams, and the pressure doesn't let me spend much time online .. So I've been unable to read, like and comment on your posts lately .. I'm really sorry about that. :(
though late, I wanted to let you know my appreciation :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful, huh? 😆 And the dress is too tight for Anna now! That's what eating a chocolate milkshake and pizza together will do to you. 😆 Still makes me sick just thinking about it. 🤢 Hopefully The Aman misunderstanding will be cleared up soon! And I'm waiting for the Aditya situation to be cleared up too. (On a side note, my cousin's name is Aditya. 😆)

Please continue soon!
Edited by WiseGirl - 13 years ago

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