Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18}

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beccky

@beccky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#801

wow... amazing update...🤗 i m amazed 😆

damn dat aditya... 😡

is he following her and is he in new york already OMG...!!! 😡

loved it when aman gave her a peck and arnav fumed.. 😳

J for jealous.. 🤣 🤣

finally he sed it... she looks beautiful.. directly looking into her eyes... ☺️

and anna ka toh kya kehna.. she broke dat full length mirror seriously

🤪🤣

OMG cant w8 for the next update.. 😍

neway bout the basher... tell dat stupid anonymous dat its silly to write something like dat.. and who the hell is he/she to tell u how to proceed and in what pace in the story which you are writing... B*tch...!!!! 😡 😡😡😡😡

and you dont worry bout wht that random anonymous sed let it be...

we fans are thr nah... 😳😳🤗

i toh dont have a prob with how the story is gng on... 👍🏼

told u how i read it in one go .. m already addicted.. its not a slow paced its perffeeccttt...⭐️

simply best... and yes.. you are right

can't just have Arnav and Khushi jump each other after six chapters...

okay so...we all are very patient reading ur ff... and loving it to the core... 😎

dont get offended by some silly random basher...

chilll... 😳

okay update it soon... 😛

beccky 😳

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beccky

@beccky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#802

just one question...😕

is aditya anjali's ex- husband or something...

u sed (kushi's POV)

the baby's eye... khushi's seen them somewhere..

is he the baby's dad..????🤢

dunno m i assuming a lott.. i guess...🤓

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#803

heya shreya...

awesome update dear...

atleast arnav knows about the messages...maybe he can protect her in future...

lol the dress dint fit anna...guess the pizza was a bit too much...

and it fit khushi well...lol
and sid said he woulve asked her out if she wasnt aman's gf...haha..

loved arnavs last dialogue..

beautifully written...

many thanks for the pm..:)

continue soon..

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700983

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#804

wowww

loved trhe update jaan :)

anarkali LOL 😆 n OMG that was some sick kick ( ahhh that rymes )

oh yea im always patient n i lyk every single part even though some ppl dont n tke your time in writing as it wont mke me mad :)

thnks soo much sweety 4 the pm :)

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#805

great update loved how he said she looked beautiful thought he was going to rude

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reveller

@reveller

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#806

Woohoo Khushi's wearing the dress! Anna's such a pig haha. Arnav's reaction to her wearing the dress was great! First trying to act indifferent but he couldn't control himself for long, loved that!

Aw I love Sid, he's too cute! Aman and the make-up artist haha! Yay he keeps bringing out the jealous side in Arnav and we all love a jealous Arnav!

Am glad Arnav knows that Aditya is still after Khushi, can sense some intensity coming up. Can't wait to see his protective side coming out.

It was a great update and you're doing a great job, I love the pace its going because I don't want it to end!

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#807

Anarkali Cracked Me Up ;) Always Reminds Me Of That Song 😆 WHYYY Did The Aur Paas Moment Get One Haddi In The Middle ?! 😳

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Veena

@-veena.shona-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#808

ADITYA!!! GO DIE!!!! 😡 kya buri timing hai yar!! 😡

so ya, Khushi is d show stopper!! 😃

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Tejal Felicia

@smelling_salts

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#809

The story is going at a level speed. Don't be stressed just 'cos some people think they wish it was a fast pace act. This story needs to go slow and is developing just so well that I can't help but simply 👏.

Hope you will update soon. I wonder if you're going to tell us how Arnav actually felt when he looked at Khushi in that show stopper gown. 😉

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Raj

@GillRK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#810

firstly want to comment on ur read me bit...i was the 307th person to like this story...that says a lot about ur writing...as for the slow pace comments if they wer genuine readers they wud av left their names sooo plese ignore them!!!!

the whole beauty of this story is ur taking ur time and unveiling the story perfectly...i cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!! i luv how you keep us all on our toes anxious to read the next update!!!!

so please ignore all the small minded people...ur writing is incredibale and fatal attraction is fab to read :D

so THANK YOUUU :D