Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18} - Page 62

Anarkali's too fat for the dress!🤣 I knew Khushi was going to be the model..and Arnav called her beautiful!☺️

i loved it!! and love the pace screw everyone who's complaining!!

Loved the update! The dress becoming too tight for Anna was FUNNY!🤣 My favorite part was when he says that she looks beautiful, I could just picture everything in my head.

loved the update he got so pissed when she told him it was aditya asr just don't know how to communicate loved how aman kissed her cheeks what is he up to that boy is just praying for his death poor asr still can't give a compliment love how the story is going unfolding nicely well written perfectly done

People are hungry for more, hey that's a compliment!
Abt the pace, it's just fine.
The writing style is good & good story too..

loved the update Shreya...the way Aman kissed Khushi while Arnav was watching, I'm pretty sure he knows something...and the last line, awww...loved it

honestly, I don't think the FF is slow paced at all...you're telling a story the way it should be told...explaining each scene with clarity...so why rush through it when you are perfectly capable of keeping your readers hooked at all moments...each chapter holds its own importance and reveals something new...I personally love the gradual build up...so keep up the awesome work

Wow!loved it!!i read 17 and 18 now.i dont know how i missed last part.i do check regularly.so now arnav knows its aditya. Anarkali,lol! I like sid,he is so nice and protective. I am getting addict to this ff.continue soon.

Shreya, I have a complaint, it was tooo shortt!!! :P :P
I absolutely loved both the updates :D

Those comments on the blog, they're anonymous for a reason... just take it with a grain of salt hun =)