Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18}

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Posted: 13 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: beccky
hey read ur story in one go.. its so addictive yaar..😳
u r an amazing writer... loved each and every character...🤗
and i love dogs too.. me missing sweetu 😆
and hey u stopped at the wrong time... well is she dreaming again..???🤢
i hope not,,,, CLOSER 😍
ANARKALI... lolwa🤣 🤣 🤣
pleeejj update soon... and do PM me!!😳

beccky 😳

Thank you, I am glad you're liking it :)
Added you to my buddy list :)

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Samiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#602

I always wait for when you'll update Fatal Attraction... loved it dear ... do update soon 😊

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Neha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#603

Another update so soon? U made my day!!

It was amazing!!

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-Devanshi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#604

Another update!!!whoopie!!!!yes i may sound like a 5 year old because this update was a surprise...i didnt expect it to be so soon!!!

Awww mahn...aditya spoilt the aur paas moment!!!argghhh!i know you are grinning evilly right now!!

Hmmm...aditya in New York...interesting turn!!!!...

loved Anarkali's tantrum!!!looks like she wont be going to the disco...okayy...pathetic joke...

I love sid!!!he is awesome!!!

Hahahaha...khushi's reaction was superb...you are kidding right??

you werent kidding!!i:D..

Okayy... I like aman...he is nice...but he doesnt have to act sooo boyfriendish!!!i know its not a word...i just made it up to make my point because i dont want him to be incinerated by arnav's glares!!

Yayyy...he said it!!!she is beautiful!!!

So the hero of the update was...SID!!I love him...!!!

Awesome update...waitng for the next one!!the fashion show!!!

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medha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#605

this update was amazing...khushi turning into a full fledged model!WOW...so now even sisd has started flirting...arnav beware!!!im so excited to see d jealousy...n wat is the mystery about this aditya...n honestly regarding ur note...i dont find it slow paced at all...thos is just d initial attraction...love cant happen just after 1 or 2 interactions...plz continue d story a u had thought of it initially...we all love it the way it is!!!

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Jador

@Jador

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Posted: 13 years ago

#606

Beautiful update! Everytime Arnav seethes in jealousy, I feel a wide grin spread across my face.

As for the note on the pace of the FF, I think the FF is going along well and your writing is better than good. Will be waiting for the next update.

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..Anita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#607

What??? this story is not slow pace...it is going at a perfect pace...this is my opinion

it seems like khushi is a model now and now sid has to beware of arnav

this update was really good

and i can't believe i actually read it before the pm...i am so excited!!!!

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ardy03

@ardy03

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Posted: 13 years ago

#608

Dis was a good update..especially d last part where arnav dejectly agrees that she looks beautiful..

One complain-i did'nt get my pm..i always comment .please do me the favour of commenting..:) thank you..

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#609

Awww.. is it me or is Aman doing things on purpose to aggravate Arnav? Poor Arnav!

Loved the update! :) I think the fact that it is slow paced builds up the suspense all the more. I for one dont mind it at all! :)

Not knowing about Aditya and Not having Arnav jump Khushi or the other way around can be frustrating :P But I'm sure you'll make it worth the wait! :D

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SillyPepper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#610

Hey Shreya!

I loved the update as usual n I hav never felt dat it s slow paced...I love the build up...And I m kinda getting a bad feeling dat Aman s double crossing by using this situation...Hope not!

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