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Not bad for a first! It was real heartening, Lovely. Liked the way you showed the internal battle in Arnav, between his head and heart. He wants to do something, to reach out to her, but he withdraws with a pressure on his thoughts. How long will this struggle go on? Kushi looked too tired over the thing she is not sure she has done and also because of the brokenness of her life as a raizada bahu in a room where she is not wanted. Arnav had the heart to order her to bed, at least. And what is he going to do now that the non-bhang state of his mind heard her confession? Do continue if you can, Lovely!!
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