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batgirl67

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Posted: 13 years ago

please say you will give us an update of when she wakes up????

maybe an epilogue???!!!!

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smithasrk

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Posted: 13 years ago

sad but sweet ending😭

Loved it

Thank You

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Posted: 13 years ago

woww loved both the endings... first ending brought tears flowing from my eyes 😭 baby khushi dancing ek don teen ... so cute... surely she became his khushi,his breath...
alternative ending brought a smile after reading fully 😃 his love is so powerful that it brought her back to life...
both parts are written so perfectly 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Sunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

i just read the 5th part the end...i am crying...i can't stop..it is hard to type cz tears r still blurring my eyes and trickling down my cheeks

the ek do teen song..i was sobbing by that part..baby khushi dancing...him whispering ""Both times..." he quietly added..."

just beautiful.i love that cz though heartbreakingly sad i so love how u have written it..am now gonna read the next part..

the next part is wonderful..waiting 4 the next update...

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Jasleen

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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautifully written!!! Loved both endings!!

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anodaksgfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

omg!!!

both the endingd got tears in my eyes..

beautiful!!!

too good!!

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Homeslice

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Posted: 13 years ago

GOD!!
Read all the 5 parts in go!
Awesome work Desi! <3

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sardeeeeeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was one beautiful update :)

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salsaly

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Posted: 13 years ago

both part 5 was awesome..

touching.. tears were flowing down when i read it.. i love it...

continue soon..

btw thanks 4 the pm...

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priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

wowww
nice and amazing
after reading it i was just 😭😭

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