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yusam

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Posted: 13 years ago

OHH.. SOO HEART WRENCHING... LAST LINE MADE MEEE CRY.. WA AN EMOTIONAL TURMOIL...!!

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Ishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

This was great OS.. I read the ending one OS first and as much sad I was, you were right.. We don't always have happy ending and what u wrote was practical..

Read your second "not the ending" loved that as well..

Thanks for the PM

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samko

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Posted: 13 years ago

omg

u just made me cry and laugh at the same time

superb fantastic outstanding work

just ausome

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Sexy Sobti

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow i loved it beautiful...👏👏

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honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautiful ending...Reality kills...first time an OS that brought me to tears...awww...loved it !!!

off to ur alternated ending...we love to live in world of dreams I guess !!!

Amaing os darlingg !!!

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--drama_queen--

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Posted: 13 years ago

when i read part 5 ( the first part,page 47) i cried so much nd Lolz i nearly screamed at u...but now when i readed page 48... i am ssososo happy now... tht i would come in thr nd kiss you... plz plz plz continue soon.

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honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

ok after the tears...we all smiles now...yipeee his Khushi is back !!!

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Ilahi_mera_Jiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved your os

the emotions are prefectly described..!!

Loved the alternative ending and the tragic one so heart-wrenching!!

👍🏼

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Tejal Felicia

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Posted: 13 years ago

I have goosebumps! 👏This surely can't be the end... Waiting... 😊

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velangini

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Posted: 13 years ago

aww it made me cry😭

nice ending though,awesome update👏

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