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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: nikita_arsha
Pria, u know, the mere sight of ur PM makes me ecstatic. The moment I opened it, I was startled. Is it ending, sach mein...
But, after reading the epilogue and the subsequent post, I can surely say that I m proud of u sissy. I have been a silent reader of this marvelous piece of writing since its beginning. Thank u from the bottom of my heart for giving us these wonderful memories to cherish. We all r gonna miss u lyk hell but as u said probably for most of us ArSha don't exist now. Its hard to imagine them together. Theres a silly request from my side- Please dun PM me ur ArHi SS as I don't follow IPKKND. Sorry dear.
The ending can't b more beautiful. ArSha getting married, Shakti being 7 months pregnant nd eventually ArSha bcuming parents, ahh, brilliantly written Pria. If u ever decide to b a writer, pls send me the details nd I'll definitely purchase n promote ur books. It feels nice to have a frnd like u Pria.

Buhbye Pria bt do talk to me whenever u r free. Btw, did u visit Shakti's concert??? I had told Suju to tell u abt dat.

Thanks so much Nikita! Ur such a sweetheart! Really appreciate all the love and support!

And Im glad you liked the way i ended this!

Lol, if i do become a writer i doubt anyone will read my work cuz im not all that good! but if i write more on ArSha then I'll let you know!

And no problem we can still stay in touch :)

Aur haan, no I didnt go to Shaks concert. I knew about it but I was really busy that time with studies and stuff so I cudnt make it! But i'll definitly catch her sometime soon ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: lovely7010
Awesome...
all i can say is its perfect
loved the way u ended

thank you so much 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: d3_rox
Pria thanks 4 the PM...the story was like super amazing and super duper rocking...I really really luuuvvveeeddd each n every line of this FF...plzzz cum up wid another Arsha\Kriyaansh FF!!!!!
Luv u lods!!!!!!!!!!!:):):)<3<3

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Born2Dance
nooo...!!!!
u cannot end it...
when i so ur pm i was so happy bt vn i saw dat it was a epilogue... i was broken...
never mind...
ur update was as alwazzz FABULOUS...
luvd d way u showed der luv fr each oder...
still cant belive u r ending it...
please continue if possible...
bt must say that i was an awesum way to end sumthin so beautiful...

Sorry that I had to end it but it had to happen sooner or later! and there wasnt much else to incorporate so i thought it was time to finish it!

but im glad you loved this FF so much !

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! r u serious
u really ended dis FF...or i m dreaming...plss pinch me...n plss tell me dat dis is dream nt reality

*sigh*
*sigh* as u said all good thng come to an end bt still i m nt blving...awww pria i m really gng to miss ur ARSHA FF
i knw dat u r gng to write another too b again dis FF is sumthng different...u created magic wid dis FF wen u strted n 4m strted i m soo attached wid dis...nw i m feeling soo bad *i m nt want to cry*

okhhh!!!! coming to ur update or epilouge *sigh*
dis is da perfect ending...although i dn't want ending...bt again it was perfect
kunwar n shaks married...n shaks pregnant...n he is taking care of her wid so much love n affection...dats was sooo sweet
n wen shakti is in OT n kunwar was worried...aww he is such a caring husband...n dere sweet little baby...n kunwar's reaction aww...i loved it to core

n pria thnkew soo much 4 giving us such a marvellous piece...n entertaining us...i m really gonna mish ur FF...bt again i want to say plsss koi mjhe bolo ki ye drean h
luv uu dear

Aww Shaffy thanks so much for all your appreciation!

i too am sad that this ended since it was my first writing piece on IF!

dont cry dear! I wont stop writing but this just needed to end here!

love you too shaffy! thanks again darl!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: aria009hera
me ijj late...

Shollliii...!!!

Stupid job.. takes the timing out of everything!😡

Chalo m glad u posted this.. coz seriously, it was sooo BEAUTIFUL!!! like sach mei.. i knew she was pregnant the moment she started cribbing for icecream *pretty much the start of d chapter.. hehehehe*
But even knowing dat dint spoil d rest of it... lobhly lobhly epilogue baby.. U know i never really imagined dem having a son.. Like some months back wen i USED to believe in so called ARSHA, I always used to think they ll have a daughter.. but u painted such a beautiful picture of dem having a son, that it just warmed my heart!!

I am sooo looking forward to ArHi SS!!!

And yaaayyy!! ur graduating!! I know its hectic rite now.. but i ll wait patiently for u to get free!!

Love U Pria!! And thanks for the shweet note!!! U know ur a fantabulous writer! And as always, i m gonna continue stalking ur works!! hehehehehe!! 😆

aww Anks! I shud thank you for all ur support! u were one of my motivations! After all our great minds almost always thinks alike 😉

Really?! U see them with a daughter? Honestly I cant see them with a girl! I always feel that it shud be a son! Maybee its because I see ArHi with a daughter!

I'm actually looking forward to writing the ArHi SS! I even wrote the prologue but I still havent decided exactly what i want the storyline to be!

Hurray Im graduating! 😆 cant wait to get some free time!

Love you Anks! And yea keep stalking! It makes me happy!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: kvarsha
wowww its an mindblowinggg updateee...
my dream cmeee trueee while reading ittt...

shaks pregyyy wow awesomeee i never imgined ittt...

buttt its awesomeee one loved ittt❤️... w8ng for ur work on arhiii😛

thnks for pm..😃

thank you so much!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: surbhi_d3
I didn't expect this to end so soon. I mean we were still tuned to the hospital scenario when Shakti was recovering and when I received your pm, I expected a normal update. But, then comes a shocker. It's en epilogue. I actually felt really sad that you ended this soon. I know like you mentioned in the reasons that you seemed to have lost your inspiration and didn't wish to ruin the story. So, I guess it's justified. However, I hadn't expected the end so soon.

Coming to the epilogue, it was brilliantly written! I loved every bit of it. All the dialogues, especially, they were very effective. It starts with Shakti demanding ice-cream for breakfast! :P and Amar has to give in since he can't see his sweetheart crying. Shakti is pregnant and all this is a part of her mood swings. I loved the way she teased Mukti that you can go ahead with the setting with my husband. Next, when they are ready for the party, Shakti feels really conscious and calls her an elephant and a huge whale! :P I really loved the way Kunwar comforted her. Lastly, the scene when ArSha become parents and the way they hold their baby boy in their arms. Truly, 'Start of Something Beautiful'

I loved the way you ended this, I don't actually want to use the word 'end'. Reading this FF had become like a ritual and now when there won't be any updates it makes me feel really sad. This was my first ArSha FF and undoubtedly you and your writing made me love ArSha even more.

Good job! You are an amazing writer Pria.

I love ArHi and I am pretty excited to read something on them from your side. Do add me to your pm list and start that SS really soon.

Love you girl! :)
Do come up with a sequel to this FF, if possible. I love this very much. Will miss reading it a lot! :(

Thanks for the pm

Thanks Surbhi! I too never thought i would end it so...abruptly but it just felt lie i would end up dragging the story if i continued it!

Glad you liked how I ended the story. I was really hoping it reached out to everyone! Nice to see that it did!

Thanks so much for all the appreciation dear!

And yess i'll get to work on the ArHi SS as soon as i can! So stay tuned!

Sequel?! I dont know...maybe after sometime i can think about. Like a SS or just an OS! But i'll think about it :)

Thanks again!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh
u know i had always dreamt of some1 writing on two lovers wid the lady being pregnant and her husband and her family by her side..(.time immemorial since i saw hum-tum where in the song sif imagines rani and himself.)...the pack of emotions,every single little moment...u fulfilled it for me...its the most beautiful epilogue i have ever come across...ii know its not the end ...its seriusly the start of something beautful...hats off...m speechless...

thanks so much shweta! I'm so glad you liked it! That is really sweet of you to say it was 'the most beautiful epilogue'! Thanks a bunch 😃