ArSha FF~Start Of Something Beautiful~Thread2~5/30 - Page 55

daammn dat was sad but really cool mannn plz dont kill her i wanna see dem 2 2geder pllz dnntt otherwise ill cry we dnt get 2 see dem nymre plz dont kill err waiting for next update and update fast ok

Totally unexpected . . . . 😔
the scene u portrayed on shakti & those goons scared me like hell . . . . I felt that I can't read anymore,,,,, 😭 I immediately scrolled to end & read that amar is holdin her . . . . . . Then I continued wid the boys scene,,,, & thankfully those bas***ds could'nt fulfill their cheap intentions... But the damage they have done is - they should be killed for 😡
amar blurted out all his anger on them & nearly killed that guy,,,, he deserved dat...
one qstn-- wth archie & dharmesh were doing wen she was stabbed?? 😉 or she was stabbed before they reached??
& ya,,, I knw U won't kill her . . . . . But plz usse agli hi update me thik kar dena... Vaise hi bahot updates se hum dukhi hai aur aaj to heart attack hi de dia... 😔
I knw its a ff,,,, but still I can't see her in pain... They are really a swtheart...

Pria... my sweetheart... firstly, welcome to the world of giving shocks.😉😆

As for the update... Ok, I won't lie…. it was eerie!! *shudder*….. it really spooked me out!!🤢... those f**king goons!!😡... wish he had killed them alright😡…. Don't do anything to Shaks, please😔….. I had my heart in my throat... literally😲

And yes, it was filmy😉….. full on paisa vasool!!😃... what's with filmyness these days😆….. sure it's running in the air😛…. Good, coz I love it!!😃

As always, it was absolutely beautifully written❤️…. And update the next real soon….. cant wait for the next.😊

Pria..beautiful update...😃

o god what is this ...

This really was a totally unexpected update! Those goons!! Arrrgghhh! How dare they even touch her like that! And I agree with anks, you love shaks too much to kill her :P ..so it defn was filmy but I really liked it! Abhi please meri maa humein bahut tadpa mat and update soon! Waise bhi we have our hearts in our mouth thanks to where you ended it, so pleae ab natak mat kar haan! :P

I ws shocked...

god dat was such an unexpected update shit man

DAMN SHOCKED!!:|
OMG!!did that juzz happen??
first...plzzz upDate sooonn!!!
an ur updatee... i don't know what to say..:#
i almost cried here...:'(
plzzz updatee sooonn
an thanx for pM..:)