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chsripriya

@chsripriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

sort yet so beautiful so heart touching very nyc update soon and thnx for pm me

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binx-D3

@binx-D3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Pria u stress sooo much in lifeee!! It was short but it was really really good. The perfect beginning to the party! I can't wait for the next part!! Typical shakti to fight her feelings for kunwar!
P.S : update whenever u can but pls don't hibernate for way too long :P
Love you! :*

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

u know u should get sleepless more often pria.. Dis was amazing! like seriously... i loved the way it was written.. The way u described their longing.. and their reactions on finally being in each others vicinity.. It was breath taking..

Okay.. On a serious note.. Go to sleep as soon as ur done wid d wedding!! Dhamkaaying u!! I knew u were gonna get a headache!!! Take care of urselves love!!!

I LOVE YOU!!!

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Nirjana

@Nirju99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

nice update,update asap n take care

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#445

thank god update toh by d way it was awsum and chota update tha agli bar lamba update chahiye plzzz

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#446

res,..

unres...

awesummm !!!!!👏

just magnificent yet sooo serene...⭐️

hayyye...luved the line where amar sensed shakti's presence...😳

the sudden jerk...both lukin in each other's eye...the sweet llhh !!!!😍

but itna chottta sa update ?😕

not fair. !!!!

next time you have to update a longgg one... !!!😉

so,update sooon nd PM me !!!!😃

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

it was awesome part...loved it very much

enjoy the wedding and take good sllep

we will wait for next part

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#448

that was too short...update soon na baba!cant wait 4 their reunion!!

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#449

It was a small update but a superb one.

U ve written it so well although u had a headache. U have brillantly described their first emotions when they met after so long. I could feel the tension between them.

Thanks for the update. Do enjoy yourself for the wedding. And a take a long rest after that (But not that long hahahaha)

Till then will wait for ur next update. I am so excited to know what will happen.

Take care

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#450

Besides having so busy schedule & killing headache,,, u managed to update 😲 . . . . . . & that too a lovely,, happy,, romantic & touchy update . . . . . Seriously hats off to u gal 😃
thanx for this scene-- amar can't stay away from her... No matter how much he suffered from so many months... But his love for her was still alive & got intensified seeing her in front of him... He could'nt control himself & poured his love on her with those small loving gestures . . . . . 😊
she too was craving for that love,,, the touch & love she missed from ages . . . . 😍 . . . . . . But she came back to her senses & might have realised that she would'nt go back to him as she thinks that he deserved better than her . . . Grrr 😡