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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww.Nanhi si jaan ❤️❤️
Very cute update! Plz thoda bada bada update karo :P
Thanks fo da pm..:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cool update !!!!!
Shakti teased him a lot n got successful to make him jealous 😉
His patience finally ended n how can he see or even imagine her with sum1 else n vo bhi prepairing for their date 😒
Not only Shaks but i was also enjoying his jealous reaction n his insecurity for her. More over than that he became a lot more irritated when he saw Yash calling her.😛
Shaks finally told him everything that she is doing it all for Pankit n Vivek, that blood ozing scene where Shaks did that authoratively was just brilliant.😍
Kunwar took sumtime to digest the fact that all is true.😆
yipppeee finally they r going out on their first date.
How smartly Kunwar cornerd every1 giving a silly excuse but making Shaks excited to go out with him.😉
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for next ...
Update soon ...
Thnx for pm ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
when will u be updating
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

when will u be updating



hey vaishali na...plss come on nams SS
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww it was awesome...

Jealous Amar...me likey :)

and he so subtly asked Shakti out on a date...hayyyeee...cant wait for next part now (hehe as usual)

thnx for the pm..n plz plz update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awweee...this ws a Fab udate dear !!!!
jus luved ur work to the core !!!!
the dialogues were marvellous !!!!

Amar- uh…. you dint have to, Shaks….. we could have gone out for dinner.

Shakti- (frowned) what?

She looked at him….. he looked totally lost….. Realizing what he had misinterpreted, she blinked and her eyes widened too.

Shakti- oh!….. I dint mean it for us.

He frowned….. he gave her a weird look, that she couldn't understand.

Amar- then?... who's your date? hehehe!!!🤣


also luved this part ~

Shakti- we'll meet in the parking lot.

Amar- cool….. don't make this nanhi si jaan wait for too long. (puppy look)

Shakti rolled her eyes….. giggled and left for her room.!😆


hehhe...they are damn adorable !!!!😳

so do update sooon nd do PM me !!!!😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
update soon tish
waiting eagerly for dinner date of arsha
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello everyone….. Without any more delay, I give you the next part….. enjoy.😊

Part 32

She had decided to go with him by herself….. then why was she nervous?... it felt like they were going out for the first time….. she hated this….. knew how all this could possibly affect their friendship….. Their bond….. As it is, it was getting complicated…… she still couldn't decide what was going on between them….. was it some sudden infatuation, they had developed because they had been away for those 3 months?….. school girls have crushes!!….. she was 27 for god sake!!... she had to get a grip on her head….. and most of all, she had to stop responding to him….. his heart wreaking smile, his mesmerizing fragrance, that sizzling body, his touches that send shiver down her spine... Argh!!... not again…… she groaned….. maybe she should take someone along….. or cancel the plan all together.

She walked up to the parking lot and spotted him, casually leaning on his car, with a big grin on his face….. all pretense of cancelling their dinner plan going down the drain.

He walked over to the passenger's door and opened it for her….. she smiled and slid past him, to sit in….. she looked up and their eyes locked….. she quickly looked down, fumbling with the seat belt….. he shut the door and joined her from the driver's side….. he started the engine and they left the premises.

They were awfully quiet throughout the drive….. neither one said a word….. the buzz of electricity strikingly evident in the silence….. which made both of them uncomfortable….. he decided to break the ice….. he looked over at her…... but as expected her head was turned to the other side….. God knows what is this girl's problem?... fir se bahar ka nazara dekh rahi hai?

Amar- so?

She turned to her head to him.

Shakti- so (frown)

Finally!!... but now he dint know what to say….. he went for the safe option.

Amar- music sunna hai?

He bent over to switch on the radio.

Shakti- No!!!

He looked up at her sharp tone and frowned….. what had got into her?... he saw her eye the player skeptically….. that's when it struck him, that she was remembering the time when he had put on the radio and Mr. Sonu Nigam (mujhe raat din) had haunted her throughout the journey….. he chuckled inaudibly.

She sighed with relief when he took his hand back….. she hated this player….. it was cursed….. ok maybe she was just over reacting….. but it certainly felt that way.

Amar- we are almost there.

Shakti- great!! (over eagerly)

He looked at her and smiled….. she couldn't wait to get out of the car….. the tension was so intense that a knife could cut through it….. believe me, she thought she had gone insane when she felt his body heat 10 inches away.

He parked in front of an open ground enclosed by drape fencings ….. it looked like a small village….. The watchman wearing dhoti- pagdi escorted them to the entrance….. young girls in saaris and ghagra cholis welcomed them with garlands, tikaa and aarti.

As soon as they entered their mouths hanged open….. the place was exquisite!!!... it was like a mini funfair….. there were pot makers, bangle makers scattered in different corners….. there were palm readers and fortune tellers with parrots roaming around…. There were small boutiques of various antiques….. there was a cow shed in one corner, that served fresh milk and milk products…… the buffet spread at the other corner with the alluring aromas making their mouths water….. there were girls dancing on thaalis with matkas over their head….. there were children singing and playing various instruments….. there were camels grazing grass in some other corner…. People taking camel and elephant rides at the back….. the sitting areas consisted of Patlaas and Khatiyas….. the place was packed…... it was one of the perfect tourist destination in Jaipur….. everyone was having a merry time.

Shakti- wow!!... this is so cool!!

A waiter escorted them to one of the Khatiyas.

Waiter- Sir-Maam, this is a buffet system….. you'll can move around and enjoy yourselves…… if you'll need anything, I'm standing right there.

Amar- thank you.

He left them alone.

Shakti- chalo pehele khuch khaate hai, fir we'll look around.

Amar- yes please, bahut bhook lagi hai….. I think I can smell some delicious Chicken masala.

Shakti- (roll eyes) yeh tumhare Punjab ka koi Dhabha nahi hai….. it's a Marwadi restaurant….. yahan sab veg milega.

Amar- oh no!!!... how sad! (sad puppy look)

She laughed and got up to check out the buffet menu…. He followed her…… She handed him a Thaali and they helped themselves with a nice hearty meal.

They sat down to have their lavish dinner…… surprisingly both were quiet…… must be the day's hard work and empty stomachs, that they had eyes only for the food.

Shakti- ummm….. this is yum!!!

Amar- hmm

She looked up.

Shakti- itna thanda hmm?

She noticed he had turned red and his eyes were watering.

Shakti- what?

Amar- teekha hai!

She giggled.

Shakti- bade aaye the Chicken 'Masaala' khaane wale….. yeh toh jaa nahi raha hai.

He just glared at her….. he wiped his eyes and continued to eat.

Shakti- ruku I'll get you something.

She got up and went to the milk shed.

She saw a sweet little girl serving drinks.

She smiled at her.

Shakti- excuse me.

That girl looked up….. with a big grin on her face….. she was so happy to get a customer, that Shakti felt like emptying the entire counter for her.

Girl- yes madam?... aapko kya doon?

She looked back at Amar, who was panting now….. he had already drank 2 glasses of water.

Shakti- umm….. unhe dekh rahi ho? (she pointed at Amar)

The girl nooded.

Shakti- bechare yahan ka itna teekha khaana hasam nahi kar paa rahe hai….. toh kya tum yeh saare glasses wahan bhijwa sakti ho?

The girls grin broadened.

Girl- saare?

Shakti- (smile) haan.

Girl- ji abhi laati hun.

Shakti- tumhara naam kya hai?

Girl- Payal

Shakti- thank you Payal.

The girl blushed….. Shakti smiled and walked back to her seat.

Amar looked up and frowned.

Amar- I thought tum khuch laane wali thi.

Shakti- oh god, patience Kunwar!!

Amar- do you even know meri kya haalat ho rahi hai?

Shakti- (murmured) and they call themselves Machos!

Amar- I heard that.

She just giggled.

The small girl came to them with a big tray of glasses.

Amar- yeh kya hai?

Payal- chaas, lassi, masala milk….. madam ne aapke liye mangwaya hai.

Amar- (eyes wide) itna saara?... ek kaafi hai.

He picked up a glass and drank the whole thing down….. the girl's eyes saddened….. she turned back to leave.

Shakti- ruko Payal….. yahan rakh do….. hum pee lenge….. thank you.

The girl grinned….. put the tray down and hopped- skipped back to the cow shed.

Amar looked at the girl then back at Shakti….. confused.

Amar- yeh kya tha?... and how did you know her name?

Shakti- turns out Kunwar, it's not just you who can charm girls (wink)

Amar laughed…… but he couldn't take his eyes off her….. she was smart, talented, breathtakingly gorgeous but above all she was a wonderful person….. truly an Angel….. so pure….. so divine….. and such a softie, totally contradicting her name….. if he wasn't in love with her already, he sure would have fallen right now…… Love?... that was the first time he'd even thought of it!... Attraction yes….. but the L word, that was a first.

She handed him another glass….. he blinked and shook his head, mentally slapping himself.

Shakti- how about we race?... the one who drinks maximum glasses wins.

Amar- you're on!!... right now with my tongue burning, I could down the whole shed.

He took the glass and gulped it down.

She laughed…… he grinned at her and took another glass….. Shakti joined him.

After some time, both were holding their stomachs.

Shakti- one more drop and I'll puke.

Amar- me too.

She leaned forward to wipe his white moustache….. their eyes met and lingered for a while….. a flush climbed her face and her gaze darted away.

She got up to look around the place….. he followed her.

One of the Pot markers called them.

Pot marker- aao madam….. Matka lenge?

Shakti smiled and shook her head.

Pot maker- aap ek banayege?

Shakti- (excitedly) haan!!

She sat in front of the wheel and dug her hands in the mud.

Amar kneeled at her side and looked at her….. a lock of hair was irritating her cheek….. she tried to push it away with the back of her hand….. he leaned forward and brushed it behind her ear….. his fingers lingering on her skin….. he could feel the heat creep below his fingers….. she blinked and looked down at the wheel, trying to concentrate on the pot making….. her hands were shaking so bad, that she couldn't get it right….. he came around and sat behind her…… he wrapped his arms around her and dug his hands in the mud along with hers….. he held her hands and guided her to make the shape….. she shivered….. he slightly turned his head and kissed her on the cheek….. he heard her gasp softly….. she shoved him back….. got up, washed her hands from a nearby bucket of water and walked away….. he sighed and got up….. He asked the pot maker to pack their attempt to make a pot, that was distorted from angles….. and promised to collect it on their way out.

Then he went to look out for her.

He found her trying on some bangles….. she turned around to look at him.

Shakti- what do you think?

She showed him the bangles hanging from her wrists.

Amar looked past her….. he saw a beautiful set of bangles in the showcase….. he pointed them out.

Amar- those look better.

She turned and asked the shopkeeper to show her the ones Amar had pointed out.

Before she could try them on….. he snatched her hand….. he took the bangle and slipped each one by one on her wrist….. their eyes locked.

Amar- (whispered) they are beautiful! (not leaving her eyes)

She blushed and looked down at her hand still in his….. she slowly took it back….. and cleared her throat.

Shakti- thanks….. so now pay for them!

She laughed and ran away.

He grinned and raked his hands through his hair….. Shit!!... I love her!!

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Ps- more romance in the coming part….. till then stay tuned….. will update asap.😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
an adorable one!! i want more romance! ❤️
i hope the next part is filled with romance... update soon!
dying to read the next part! 😊
Edited by Love_Kunwar - 13 years ago

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