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smithasrk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

That was sad Lyraa😭 but beautiful👏

Thank You

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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Beautifully written! i loved how u wrote the holi scene ... emotions emoted through only eyes and no words u have given words to them..

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Sexy Sobti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

so well written loved it 👏

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Nadia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

i am not able to find the next part you have send the 12 page link

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WittyKitty

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Arrey, what one gadha did to these two!

You have expressed Arnav's anguish so well 😭

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489321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Wow, that was such a beautiful OS Lyra, the way you portrayed his emotions was amazing :)

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Ishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

ery beautiful OS.. You have portrayed Arnav;s feelings so brillianty.. Loved it..

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meera30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Beautiful! What a journey it has been since that night on the terrace. And you have captured it so well!

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medha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

aww..i loved it..so emotional!!d hope factor plays a key role here n its been portrayed very well!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

beautiful update as always...arnav's feelings were captured brilliantly
and the last line bowled me over

there is a next part?

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