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Addie07

@Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: naddiya26
i am not able to find the next part you have send the 12 page link

did i??? 😲 sorry sorry naddiya swthrt...

there is no next part... 😭

that was it😳

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@PepsiGirl101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

AMAZING!!
That's right Arnav just let your feelings take over! Man you need to understand she's innocent. Can't blame you though..you're too cute ;)

Awesome writing again! I read this OS like 5 times because it truly captured Arnav's emotions essence! Gotta go but will keep refreshing the page to see if you update ;)

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@Richie-Rich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

I know there was so much angst throughout the OS, but it was the last line that stung me the most! :'(

Beautifully written Lyraa! :)

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Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: MrsRaizada101
AMAZING!!
That's right Arnav just let your feelings take over! Man you need to understand she's innocent. Can't blame you though..you're too cute ;)

Awesome writing again! I read this OS like 5 times because it truly captured Arnav's emotions essence! Gotta go but will keep refreshing the page to see if you update ;)

that was the only part hun... normally i have never continued my one shots the scene was from the show.. i just wrote down feelings,,,

thanks for the comment😊