SOLID SOUL - THREAD 2 - CHAPTER 30 / PAGE 49 - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow after a long time we got update
Nice updates
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow, update after so long...but i found something missing...sorry to say this, but the essence is not there


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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks for the feedback. Hang in there, rest is coming. Tying in all the lose ends

Originally posted by: anjs

wow, update after so long...but i found something missing...sorry to say this, but the essence is not there


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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for bringing it to the fore, I thought in season 1, I would have liked to have seen more of Shashi Gupta and Payal action. The potential of their roles was never explored. In some instances, we did get to see Payal as a strong character particularly when she takes ASR to task during the GH scene, her rejection of Akash's advances and proposal, and her defense of Khushi during unveiling of Shyam's truth. However, Shashi Gupta was relegated to the wheelchair.
Thanks again for the feedback, stay tuned more is coming.

Originally posted by: Archu61

I read both updates glad your showing payal perspective and hope she and her dad can help restrain the rest of the fly from overwhelming and manipulating Arnav and khushie. I think you shd make Arnav stay in the Us so he realise show khushie life has evolved .and learns to respect her pt of view .

Edited by akhilash - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
both updates are awesome am glad he knows a life time is not
enough to atoned for the sins he's
committed against her, poor khushi
having nightmares as well.
waiting to read more, how he will get
his family to forgive him( khushi and the
kids) do update soon👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
read it one go...wonderful story.. well written...
continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
So glad you have not forgotten about his story and are planning to update. This is the first ff I ever read and still to this day this Khushi and this Arnav are My favorites out of all the IPK based ff.

Khushi had such rotten deal from life and yet she was able to rise like a Phoenix from the ashes and make a fantastic life for her and her children. I always wanted more of a Perspective from her side on what she thought of ASR and the married life she lost out on. ASR also made a place in my heart based on his redemption when he outed Shyam and started looking for Khushi. His loneliness and hunger for his wife broke my heart. He managed to get redemption from me but what will it take to get it from Khushi? How will he heal the big gaping chasm in her heart. I want him to shower the sun, moon and the stars on her. And show her that she is his top priority in life...more than his sister for sure. The kids are soo cute...I want them to have a mother and a father...both.

Now for the two updates...I just can not forgive the Raizada's nor the Guptas and if anything, I want both families to burn in the fire of regrets at what all they all doled out to Khushi. It was downright offensive that All this time it is still Khushi who provided monetary assistancet to Guptas while Payal and Akash did not think of it. Heck she had not even visited...😡 And yet they are wondering about Mohit and have the nerve to question if she got into a scrape. Thank god for Bapuji. I do not Admire nor applaud Payal. Let me see what she does for Khushi going forward.

The part about ASR joining his family in bed was so sweet and funny. Her nightmare made me cry but his reaction was right...he needs to apologies by his words and his actions. Now more than ever he should appreciate what suffering she has endured that he needs to make atonement for.
Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally much awaited apology here.
Wonderful loved it.
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi,
thanks for the updates. They are good, but Payal's perceptives were actually long story in short form(The initial stages of the story.) Any way the story is moving forward in snail pace. Looking forward to see the decision of the solid soul. I would like to see Khushi hold her fort and not give in to emotional blackmail. Actually nobody has got the right to dictate her what she has to do.If ASR wants his family he has to shift to US and not the other way around
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update khushi has always being a servant for the Gupta tey have always used her innocent heart and never once have they every thought to think that they were the reason she could not succeed hell the own daughter never even thought about their final state but the child they always quick to say she is not their blood worked hard and made some thing of her self and sent money to them always taking care of them their daughter never thought to send money for them never thought to think about anything but herself so sad they have never appreciated khushi in their life arnav going to the bed and cuddling with khushi and the kids and loved that he saw her night mare and he so called family dare to even question about mohit this time the blood talk will make khushi damn mad they treated her like crap and still she loved them but she won't make joke with her kids no matter who it is and babuji showing his faith on his khushi payal i have never like her she had a degree yet she decide to stay home while khushi was forced to work as a servant to the raizada to make ends meet and so cute when arnav went down begging for her forgiveness awesome update loved it.






Edited by dumas - 11 years ago

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