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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Puri--hi 😊

Congrats for the second thread of KAHZ👏👏👏--thanku 😃😃
Update was really gud.--thanku 😳😳 glad u liked it 😊😊
I know nothing cud have stopped Nandini from blabbering except Raj's kiss and she was so embarrassed infront of every1😳😳😳.--😆😆
.I never knew that Raj can b so courageous😆 bhaang cheez hi kuchh aisi hai😆😆--- 😆😆 dont doubt his courageness 😆😆😆 he is hero 😳😆😆 can do anything 😛😆😆😆
he was so afraid to face her in the morning😉😆😆--😆
Mr.Dixit is indeed a very troublesome man.he is hell bent on spoiling his daughter's happiness.😡😡--- yeahh needs a strong kick 😆
Raj and his family were really supportive when every1 strted blaming Nandini for something she hasn't done.--😊 yeahhh 😊
Where did she went??? I think she was really shattered with all the happenings.😭😭--- yeahh poor girl no wonder she took so much time in accepting love
I hope Raj will find her soon..😊--hope so 😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

loved the update..--thanku 😳
bechara raj kitna darr gaya tha..ki nandani usse gussa hogi😆..--😆😆 blame it on arjun 😆😆
.par vo bhool gaya tha ki ab nandani uski hai to vo uske kiss karne pe naraz kyun hogii😳.--😆 dats a valid point 😛.nandani was right agar vo naraaz hoti to raj ko uska special holi gift mil gaya hota
😆😆😆...--😆😆

mr.dixit aur rohan kab marenge????😡😡pandit ji ne koi muhurat nikala tha kya?😆---will ask the pandit ji 😆😆
they are really cheap..har jagah nandani ko pareshaan karne pohanch jaate hain..iss baar to sach mein hadd ho gayi😡😡...---exactly now its too much 😡
raj ne accha jhaada guests ko jo nandani ke baare mein faaltu bol rahe the👏...---- yeahh bina baat ke blaming poor girl 😊
i hope nandani apne aa ko koi nuksaan na pohancha le..hope raj finds her before anything wrong happens😭😭..---hope so
cont soon and congrats for the new thread😃--thanku 😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: KITTY&ME

yaar Puri..


waise toh u know dat m STML-- 😆😆 wonder from where u get that 😛😆😆

but as i remembered..

Raj-nandini.. were engaged in very beggining episodes.

and Raj was narrating this love story to his sister n sisters in law..--- Right 😊

and all these updates r flashback..--- yes

so fir ye engagement.. usme to ye sab ghatnaye nahi batayi thi..--- ahem ahem the engagement where FB is going on is second one after everything got sorted out 😛😊 just notice yaha engagement hui nahi hai 😉😉 no exchange of rings 😛😆😆...Mr.dixit interrupted here 😛😆😆

fir Raj ne jo intezam kia tha woh?-- 😛

m confused..

Raj ki family is so gentle..--- 😳😳

aur ab ye nandini kithe gayi..--mujhe nahi bataya 😛

chorhi munde ko chad ke jane ka to nahi soch rahi..--- i doubt 😛

so that Raj will not fell in any trouble??--may be

This one is cute 😳😳 my fav 😳😳 can i exchange place with kid 😳😳😆





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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Innocent_eyes


Hey puri..-- hi 😊😊
.many many congratz for the new thread...you did it so very well...tho m one of those who joined ur fic in middle...but m loving it...---thanku so much 😊😊 ...glad u liked it since u joined it 😊😊 hope it remains same till end 😃😃😃

Now coming to part..ohw itna acha ja rha tha sab kuch but achanak...-- 😆😆
So raj loses the bet n kisses hr, acha hai he lost wrna faida hi kia jeetnai ka...n arjun pulling raj legs tht ciz of ur kiss nandini is angry with u..bechara kitna pareshan hogya but happy tht nandini is ok with it...---- relief for hero 😳😳 wudn't have made nandini give him a holi gift 😆😆😆

Oh mr. dixit, y just he can't live his own life hr jga tang dalna zarori hai..--cant mind his own business 😡
.how can someone be sio crurl apni hi beti k barai main...acha sunaya raj naj sbko n as her father said pta nhi is nalaik ko itni achi ladki kaisai mil gai..to u.cle itni mehnat ki raj nai nandini ko mananai k liyai to manna,to tha hj na...but ye kiya nandoni is missing...hope he will not harm herself as raj was thinking...--fingers crossed 😊

cont soon
Do add my name in pm list too 😛--- sure 😊
Take care



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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Surya.Ravi---for u thanx 4 liking & reserving 😆
@golu_1677-thanx 4 liking & commenting 😃😃


Thanx to every1 who liked & commented on the part 😃😃... it really feels good 😳😳 to reply to comments 😳 & also thanx to all who pressed the like button 😳😳 ..guess this time thanx to every1 who patiently waited for UD 😃😃.

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Part 54


All went tensed & searched for her all the worst thots started running in Raj's head. He was more tensed for nandini' More than any1 else harming her he was scared of her harming herself. He knew how she had been sensitive & concerned abt all this ...It was something she always dreaded ...She had been too quiet all this while she didn't even reacted to Mr.dixit's presence…as she normally did.

Jai was also worried for her… he tried calling her cell…but no result…they had searched everywhere but cudn't find anywhere…with each passing moment everyone was more worried.

Nandini's nani(to Jai)—pata nahi kaha hai nandini?..😕. aise bina bataye who kabhi nahi jati…(apprehensive) kahi who bhi apni maa ki tarah…

Raj(interrupted her…calmed her)—aisa kuch nahi hoga aunty… nandini ko hum sab jante hai she is strong…who kuch bhi aisa nahi karegi…aap tension mat lijiye…(more than assuring her Raj was assuring himself…since he was worried abt same)

Jai—kahi who ghar wapis toh nahi chali gayi…😕 I think hume ek baar waha bhi dekh lena chaiye…

All of them rushed to their house …but it was completely vacant…

Jai(tensed) —yaha bhi nahi hai toh… ja kaha sakti hai? 😕

Its when suddenly struck suhana where she cud be…

Suhana(instantly got up to leave)—ermmm shayad mujhe pata hai who kaha hai?

Raj—kahan?😕

Suhana—main waha jakar dekhti hoon …coz I am not sure if she wud be there or not…😕 agar who wahan hui toh I will inform u…

Raj—haan toh main bhi chalta hoon…

Suhana (stopped him)—ermm nahi tum rehne do…I will manage…mujhe usse baat bhi karni hai & uska dimaag theek karne ki zarut hai 😡…jo shayad tum hoge toh main nahi kar paungi…but don't worry will keep u informed. 😊

Raj(still not convinced)—par main…😕...

Suhana(sternly)—Raj plzzz…trust me…I promise…nandini ko wapis lekar hi aaungi…aur who nahi aayi then I will call u…coz I know usse tum hi convince kar paoge… 😊

Raj reluctantly agreed… 😊

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Suhana had guessed it right…😊 Nandini was right here… the place she had been whenever she wanted to be alone…when she wanted to hide herself from everyone…a bful place with calm & serene environment which nandini always said gave her peace & calmness…😊 its only suhana who knew abt this place …not even Jai…

Suhana saw her sitting there leaning against the tree…huddled to herself…she cud make out she had been crying since long…she moved closer & sat beside her.

Suhana—so , my guess was right…tu mujhe yahi milegi…(nandini didn't replied) tu humesha yahi aati hai jab duniya se bhagna chahti…hum sabse bhagna chahti hai..to be more precise khud se bhagna chahti hai... aaj tak jab bhi yaha aayi…sirf isliye kyunki tu akeli hoti hai…par aaj kyun…😕 aaj toh akeli nahi thi… (nandini still remained silent) tu meri baat sun bhi rahi hai? Aise achanak sab kuch chodke aane ki zarut kya thi…pata hai waha sab kitne pareshan hai…specially Raj…u shud have seen him…sabse zyada pareshan tha who…so worried abt u…

Nandini—aur aaj tak sabko pareshani ke alawa diya hi kiya hai…😭 & Raj adds to the list…Raj ko pehle hi kaha tha…par usne meri baat nahi suni…meri wajah se aaj usse kya kya nahi sunna pada…😭 (she got teary) sirf Raj ko hi kyun uski puri family ko…& meri wajah se itna sab kuch hone ke baad I cudn't face them & mujh mein himmat nahi thi un sab ka saamna karne ki…

Suhana(interrupted) --aisa nahi hai...

nandini--aisa hi hai...it had been all because of me ...

Suhana—kisne kaha sab kuch teri wajah se hua?

Nandini(irritated)—nahi koi bahar se aaya hoga… 😡 what a stupid question suhana 😡😡 meri wajah se nahi toh aur kis ki wajah se? kisi andhe ko bhi nazar aaega ki aaj jo kuch hua sab kuch meri wajah se tha…

Suhana—but no1 blamed u…😕 tu bekaar mein…

Nandini(angry)—bekaar mein… 😡 sab meri galti hai…its been my fault…I had been wrong all the way…main hi bhool gayi thi…ki mujhe khush hone ka haq nahi hai… ek sapne mein jeene lagi thi…(smiled sarcastically) bhool gayi thi…mujhe sapne dekhne ka bhi haq nahi hai…& I have been a fool ki sab kuch bhoolkar ek sapne ko sach samajhne lag gayi thi…

suhana(angry)--yes u have been a fool...😡😡 isliye nahi ki tune is rishte ko, is pyaar ko accept kiya...but for what u did today 😡😡tujhe aisa nahi karna chaiye tha 😡

Nandini(crossing her arms)--so, what u want me do 😡😡 ...sab kuch jante hue ...samajhte hue...meri aankhon ke aage hote huye apni aankhen band karlu...& pretend to be ignorant 😡😡 sorry mujhse yeh mujhse nahi hoga...😡


suhana--par kisine tujhse toh kuch nahi kaha...no1 blamed u...na hi Raj ne na hi uski family ne...

Nandini--toh yeh unki achai hai...i shud be thankful for that...(sighed)tum sab mujhe hazar explanations de sakte ho... mujhe har tarike se convince kar sakte ho...par safai kitni bhi achi ho, usse sach nahi badalta...tum sab mujhe convince karloge...par main apne aap ko kaise convince karu 😕😕 how shud i explain it to myself 😕... ki aaj jo kuch Mr.dixit ne kaha woh sach nahi hai...ya waha logon ne jo sawal uthaye woh galat the ...can i wrong them 😡😡 can i prove them wrong ki Mr.dixit ne ek bhi baat jooth kahi... log wajah janne nahi aaenge ki Rohan aur mera rishta kyun toota...what matters to them is i failed...log Mom se poochne nahi jayenge ki woh apne pati se alag kyun hai...what matters is that they have broken marriage... log mujhse wajah nahi janege ki main apne maa baap ke saath kyun nahi hoon...what matters ki main unse alag hoon...kisiko bhi explaination se matlab nahi hai...unhe sirf is baat se matlab hai galti kiski hai...& it had been me all the way 😭😭 only me 😭😭...


Suhana (shook her hard to stop her from blabbering)—tu pagal toh nahi hogayi…😡 aisa kuch nahi hua hai…kisi aur ki galti ke liye khud ko blame karna band karde…for god sake stop blaming urself…

Nandini—kisi aur ki galti…😕 huh?

Suhana (sighed)—aisa kuch nahi hai…koi tujhe blame nahi kar raha hai…& tu hi kehti hai na Mr.dixit doesn't exist for u…fir unki baaton ko itni seriously kyun le rahi hai? Why?unhe jo kehna tha keh gaye…let it be…us baat ko importance dene ki zarut nahi hai…unki wajah se kyun apne aur raj ki zindagi barbaad kar rahi hai…😡😡😡

Nandini(smiled sarcastically)its already a mess…😡 aur kya barbaad hogi…itni baar warn kiya tha Raj ko…usne meri baat kaha mani…huh! but Why blame him…maine apni khud baat bhi kaha mani…... U know…Raj ke aane ke baad ek baar fir rishton pe vishwaas hone laga tha…sapne ko sach manne ka mann karta tha…

Suhana(surprised) –tha matlab?(seeing her silent..she made her look towards her) don't tell me what I am guessing is right kahin tu…(she left rest unsaid)

Nandini(avoided looking her)—abhi maine socha nahi…

Suhana—good agar nahi socha hai toh…& dare u sochna bhi mat…😡 u know mujhe laga tha itna waqt Raj ke saath rehte rehte tu badal gayi hai... 😡😡 but i was right u are still same emotional fool 😡😡 jise khud toh dukhi hona acha lagta hai...auron ko bhi dukhi karna 😡😡 (calming herself) ek rishte mein is makam tak pahunchkar tu aise usse adhura nahi chod sakti…😡 apne liye na sahi but Raj ke liye sahi…u cant back out now…aur tujhe kis baat ka darr hai…jab tak Raj tere saath hai…

Nandini—mujhe Raj ka darr hai… mujhe pata hai jab tak who saath I have nothing to fear…par I fear for him…I know jab tak main uske saath hoon he has to fear...

Suhana(assuring her) —tu bekaar mein dar rahi hai…aisa kuch nahi hai😊😊 …I am sure this will be sorted out soon…hum sab milkar kuch na kuch soch lenge…ek baat humesha yaad rakhna jab tak tum dono saath ho koi tumhara kuch nahi kar sakta…😊 par agar tu hi Raj ka saath chod degi…who bhi akela kuch nahi kar paega…😕 I know this gonna be difficult time for both of u…tum dono ek dusre ki takat bhi ho aur kamzori bhi😊😊 …aur is waqt ek dusre ki takat banna zyada zaruri hai…😊😊 kisi bhi problem ka sabse asan solution hota hai usse bhagna...aur usse samna karna sabse muskhil…par jab koi humare saath hota hai toh who mushkil bhi asaan ho jati hai…😊😊 & I am sure never in life tu Mr.dixit ko sahi prove karna chahegi…who toh chahte hi yahi hai ki...😡😡 tu aur Raj alag ho jaye…aur who ek baar fir jeet jaye...jis tarah aaj tak tumhari Mom akele rahi hai…Mr.dixit chahte hai ki tu bhi akele rahe… par u have to prove him wrong…aur yeh sirf tabhi ho sakta hai jab tu Raj ke saath milkar unka saamna kare…😊😊

Baat sirf Mr.dixit ko galat prove karne ki nahi hai…baat Raj ki hai…jis insaan ne tujhe pyaar pe yakeen karwaaya…jisse khud se zyada tujhpar yakeen hai…😊 u cant let him down…aisa koi bhi faisla mat lena jisse jisne tujhe pyaar karna seekhaya wohi pyaar pe kabhi vishwaas na kar paaye… (Seeing nandini thotful) just think abt it…😊😊 (to lighten) god itne heavy dialogues ho gaye na…😆 dekha romantic films dekhna ka nateeja…😆 cant believe myself I can be so emotional😆😆 …tune mujhe bhi rula diya… 😭😭 (Nandini smiled a little & hugged her) cant believe i can cry too ...arjun yaha hota usse heart attack aajata mujhe rota hua dekhkar 😆😆😆

Suhana pulled back—so ab wapis ghar chale…sab bahut pareshan…specially aapke lover boy…😆😆 ab chale ya…yahi rehna hai…?

Nandini (composing herself)—ermm tu ja…main thodi der mein aati hoon… plzz… I promise(seeing her apprehensive leaving alone) …i will be fine😊😊 …(suhana turned to leave she knew nandini needs time for herself)ermm who

Suhana—kya ?(nandini just nodded in Negative saying nothing) waise don't worry main Raj ko bata dungi u are fit & fine…😛 bechara pagalon ki tarah sab jagah dhund raha hai tujhe…😊😊

Nandini(smacked her)—who pagal nahi hai…😳😳

Suhana—ofcourse pagal hai…😆😆 & mind u usse bada pagal nahi hai 😆😆😆 jo tujh jaisi pagal ladki se pyaar kiya…. Jo usse chodne ke bare mein soch rahi hai… & woh itna pyaar karta hai ki saari duniya se ladne ko taiyaar hai…😆 You shud have seen him there…sabki bolti band kar di thi usne… 😆😆 waise if you are having second thots…mujhe bata dena…wud love to have such a boyfriend…😳😛

Nandini—suhaannaaa….

Suhana(teasing)--oh bhool gayi thi 😛😆…aapke hone wale pati ko koi kuch kahe toh aacha nahi lagta… 😆😆

Nandini—ab tu ja…& main thodi der main aa jaungi…

Suhana—& jaldi means jaldi😊😊 …coz zyada der tere pagal premi ko nahi sambhal paungi…. 😆😆

Nandini was abt to hit her again…but she left from there

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Nandini sat there deep in thots…contemplating what all suhana said to her😊 …also reminiscing all moments she had shared with Raj till now…she knew its not gonna be easy for her even if she decides to walk out from her relation…& suhana is right it will be selfish of her to leave relation here after what Raj has done for her, he has been with her in all times…have been with her in her happier & sad moments…Had been with her whenever she needed him…There hadn't be a moment where she cudn't feel his presence or can stay away from him no matter how hard she tried…She smiled recollecting what Raj had said to him long back

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It had been few days after their official proposal…😊 being a weekend they had spend whole day out…but Raj disagreed with everything nandini suggested 😆😆😆 he made her do what he wanted 😛…by end of day Nandini was pissed off😆😆 …when Raj was planning for dinner he asked where she wanted to go…

Nandini(sarcastically)—u asking me?😲

Raj—ofcourse tumse hi pooch raha hoon …ab tumhare alawa yaha aur kaun hai?

Nandini— I meant jab meri baat manni nahi hai…toh mujhse poochne ka faida nahi hai…tum toh wohi jaoge jahan tumhe jana hai…so why even ask…(she turned her face)

Raj—kamal hai tumhara suggestion lo toh problem…nahi lo toh problem…Arjun is right ladkiyon ko samjhana namumkin hai…

Nandini(irritated)—bilkul mushkil nahi hai…its just tum complicated bana dete ho… pehle toh suggestion poochne ki zarut hi nahi hai 😕😕 kyunki I know tumne already decide kar liya hoga kaha jana hai?

Raj—wow dats smart…mere saath rehkar sachmuch smart hogayi ho…

Nandini(smacked him)—smart nahi its called common sense… jab subah se meri baat nahi maan rahe toh ab kaha manoge?😕 Subah se jahan bhi jane ko ker rahi uska ulta hi kar rahe ho…😕 who kaha lekar gaye the that adventure expo….diffrent rides & all that it was so scary… maine itna mana kiya tab bhi nahi mane 😕 …& that high jump in end... & kuch kami reh gayi thi toh that stupid horror movie…😡😡

Raj—wow!!…tumhe gussa bhi aata hai…(pulled her cheeks) really look cute all angry like this 😆😆 ...I thot maine seedhi ladki se pyaar kiya hai… jise jo kaho who maan jati hai… 😛😆

Nandini—toh jao… koi seedhi ladki ko hi dhund lo…😡 & chod do mujhe(she got up to leave)

Raj (caught her hand & made her sit again)are you sure 😛? main koi aur dhund lo…😉😉

Nandini(annoyed)—haan…

Raj (teasing)—sach mein…😉

Nandini—haan jao…kyunki meri baat toh manni nahi hai

Raj(coming closer) Sorry par is baar bhi tumhari baat nahi maan sakta…😛 kyunki na tumhe chod sakta hoon…& will make sure tumbhi mujhe chodkar na jao…

Nandini—really…😲 aur tum aisa kaise karoge… 😛

Raj—bahut easy hai(nandini looked at him confused) tum jo kaho who chup chap manta jau😛😆 …I am sure fir kahin nahi jaogi mujhe chodkar...(Nandini looked down blushingly)😳😳 aur gai bhi…toh I am sure….wapis lautkar mere paas hi aaogi…

Nandini(just shook her head)—tumhara main kya karu…(she pushed him back)

Raj(teasing)-- pyaar karne ke alawa kuch kar bhi nahi sakti…😆😆😆 (laughed) ab seriously batao kaha chalna…& mind u maine kuch nahi decide kiya tha…coz I know pura din I forced u to do it my way…now its ur call…fir mat kehna didn't asked u 😆😆

Nandini—its OK…tumhe jaha le chalna hai we will go…& ek secret batau ?(raj nodded yes)I njoyed it today…got to do all that jo shayad main kabhi nahi karti… so thank you…

Raj—you are welcome 😊😊(mischeiviously) tumhe njoy karwane ke liye I think mujhe treat milni chaiye…

Nandini—treat kaisi treat?

Raj—ermm dinner ke bajai…hum log salsa nite chalenge😛

Nandini(shocked)—salsa night …who bhi main?…no way…😲😲

Raj--dats not fair...itni mushkil se toh passes mile the & i planned it all aur tum (sulked)

Nandini(pushed him back) --dekha i was right all the way ...tumne sab plan kiya hai...& mujhse itne innocently pooch rahe the kaha jana hai 😡 so mean of u

Raj—arre abhi toh tumne kaha…jaha main le chalu…chalogi…

Nandini—haan ...dinner ke liye kaha tha…not for dance…

Raj—haan toh theek hai… fine waha jakar salsa mat karna…par dinner pe toh chal sakti ho...

Nandini—ermm...

Raj (with puppy face)—plzzz…😛 mere liye… 😊😊

Nandini(sighed) –fine!! …tumne apni baat toh manwani hi hai...

Raj(proudly)—who toh hai😛 …ab tum mujhe Na nahi keh sakti toh… its not my fault…😛😆😆 haan toh kehna hi padega…aur baat bhi manni padegi… 😆😆

Nandini(laughed)—modesty thy name is Raj Mehta… 😆😆

Raj—ab chale…

At the dinner place….

After dinner they made their way out of the restaurant. As they walked through the lobby of the hotel…groups of people, scurried across heading towards one of the halls. Nandini looked curiously at them…😛

Nandini—yeh sab log aise where they rushing ?😕

Raj(smiled)—ermm …salsa nite…you wanna see…

Nandini—nahi..its fine ...ermm ...der ho jayegi…

Raj—nahi hogi its still time😊😊 …chalo…thodi der mein wapis challenge…(dragged her towards the hall) Come…

They entered the hall and found it to be jammed packed with people…dancing away to fast paced… peppy music. Was a real party atmosphere in there.

Professional dancers were on the dance floor, dancing away …Male dancers lifting their female partners high up in the air…spinning them around…Nandinini looked them in awe!😊😊 She laughed when she saw an elderly lady dragging her husband to the dance floor…😆😆 getting him to dance.😊

Raj—Nice na…. 😊

Nandini (nodded): yeahh …Sab log kitna accha dance kar rahe hai…😊there having so much fun.


Raj-- u wanna dance?


Nandini (shook her head)---Are ur kidding…😲Salsa aur mein…? nahin?


Raj-- Come on…we'll have some fun…now that we're here.
(looks around) See others are joining in...lets try it😊😊 (made her stand) come


Nandini—Raj…Noo plzz…main yaheen pe theek hoon.


Standing up straight in front of her…took his jacket off… flung it over a chair nearby… put his hand out to her

Raj—Come on …mazaa ayaega! Ab yahaan tak aye hai toh thodi masti karte haina. & don't forget its my treat…😛😆😆 .

Nandini still shook her head, thinking Raj has lost it😆😆 She still hesitating…but Raj gave her that sweet look…😳😳 and she gave her hand in his …He led her to the dance floor others cheered them on. Nandini looked very embarrassed…but Raj told her to relax.

Raj-- Ok now…its easy …& very simple…u just need to mirror what I do…😊 ok…when I move my left foot forward…u move ur right foot back…and so on…ok? 😃😃

Nandini nodded…then tried to…but ended up stepping on his foot! 😆


Raj: Oww!


Nandini--Sorry sorry!!! 😕


Raj(laughs): its fine don't worry…😆😆 ...hota hai…come try again….


This time Nandini got the hang of it…😃😃 she kept looking down at her feet to get into the rhythm.😊😊 She smiled to herself… then looked at other who were dancing very fast…their steps were amazing…so skilled and perfect. 😊


Raj-- See…not too bad…ur doing good…wanna dance faster?


He increased the speed…she held him tightly…😊 her smile widening...she was really enjoying this. Raj pulled her a little closer…her body flush against his.


He spun her around…making her squeal ….then pulled her back in his arms…twirled her around..again and again… Her hands firmly on his shoulders…she threw her head back and laughed😃😃 …Everyone cheered them…& clapped as the song ended.😊


Nandini(laughed) : Wow!dat was fun!😊😊 !!(breathing heavily) & you were too good…tumne pehle se aata hai na...u learned it na?…😊😊


Raj(sheepishly) –ermm not learned exactly 😆 it was long back… had taken some lessons before…😆😆 Muski ko kuch saal pehle Salsa ka bada shauq hua tha😆 …uske friends were not free they were busy with theri studies& ghar pe koi saath nahin jaa raha tha...😆😆 she needed a partner so I filled in. 😃😃😃 It was real fun…😃😃 Now, wanna dance some more?…or u had enough for one day?😊


Nandini(smiled)- Had enough…but really enjoyed … was real fun….😃😃

As they walked towards the car…laughing and smiling…they had really enjoyed that…😃😃 Nandini joked about how she thought her heel would break any minute the way he was spinning her around like that😆😆😆 She leaned against the car…throwing her head back in laughter remembering abt old lady.😆😆😆 ..her poor husband slipped twice on dance floor 😆😆😆 ….she had never laughed so much had so much fun.

Raj watched her intently…then stood close to her…Nandini stopped laughing…smiled sweetly😊

Nandini--kya hua?aise kyu dekh rahe ho?

Raj.(moved closer…putting his hands around her neck…cupping it to bring her face close to his…her eyes grew wide.)-love it when ur happy. It makes me feel good inside…(kissed her cheek softly) U enjoyed urself?

Nandini--bahut😃😃 .


Raj(teasing)—So, What did u enjoy the most? The dinner or the dance? Or me…


Nandini(instantly)—ofcourse tum?😳😳

Raj(laughed)—its good then😊 …so shud take u to salsa nites more often…😛😛 (pulled her closer) issi bahane mere paas bhi rahogi…door jana bhi chaogi toh nahi ja paogi…😛😳😆woh waise bhi nahi ja paogi in any case 😛

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Nandini smiled remembering the moment😃 …it was his trick to take her out for salsa nite 😛😆…dinner was just an excuse…😆😆😆

Nandini—tum sahi the Raj chodkar bhi jana chahu toh nahi ja sakti…aur gai bhi wapis tumhare paas hi aana hai…(sighed)

She was interrupted by a phone call…asking her to be at the hospital…


At the hospital

Nandini turned motionless… she was too shocked too even react…seeing him in this condition…She cud feel whole surroundings fading away…she wud have almost fallen down if the inspector hadn't caught her in time…

Insp.—are you Ok? (he had to call her twice to get response from her) … (she just nodded) aap janti hai na inhe?(nandini just manage to nod yes) then its good…

Nurse—so mam aap inke papers pe sign kar sakti hai …we need to treat him…

Nandini(still fearful)—main…I mean(taking deep breath) main inki family ko inform kar deti hoon…

Nurse –aap sign kar dijiye …fir aap aram se family ko bula lijiega…

Nandini—par main …kaise? I cant sign …I mean… 😕

Doctor joining them from behind—aap kyun nahi sign kar sakti Mrs.Mehta(nandini looked back surprised to same doc from Bangalore who mistook her as Raj's wife) hi…me Dr.Mathur 😊😊 …coincidently we meet once again…😊😊

Nandini—par main…😕

Doctor—its just a formality😊😊 …patient ke treatment ke liye hospital needs signed papers 😊 …& don't worry Raj theek hai I have seen him😊😊 …there is nothing major to worry about…infact within days he will be discharged😊 … So,plzz…sign karne mein koi problem nahi hai…go ahead…😊😊

Nandini signed the papers on his assurance…but still she feared deeply of loosing Raj… she knew she can handle all this alone… Nandini dialed Arjun's number…& called him to hospital urgently…

Arjun reached there within half an hour…since suhana was with him when nandini had called…she also came along…

They both saw a worried nandini standing there in corner lost in thots…she only came out of her thots when Arjun called her name…

Arjun—kya hua tumne aise achanak bulaya…phone pe bataya bhi nahi hua kya hai…😕 (arjun was shocked to see her so lost & weak as if she lost her world…he cud make it from her eyes that she had been crying since long)

Nandini (looked around surprised)—tum akele aaye ho? Tumhe kaha tha uncle aunty ko bhi lana…

Arjun—who aa rahe hai…Jai bhaiyaa ke saath… tum itni tensed lag rahi thi isliye i came first 😊 …isliye maine unhe bhi inform kar diya…now tell me hua kya hai?

Nandini told him about the accident & how she got the call from police.

Arjun(surprised)—par accident…😕😕 aise kaise…I mean Raj is a safe & careful driver…

Nandini(still tearful)—ofcourse meri wajah se…

Arjun—what? Tumhari wajah se kaise…how is it possible tum uske saath thi bhi nahi…infact who tumse hi toh milne aa raha tha…

Nandini(sadly)—still its been because of me…

Suhana(sighed)—nandini tu phir shuru hogayi…😕😕 iska matlab tujhe itna samjhane ka koi faida nahi hua…

Arjun(interrupting)—ek min suhana(to nandini) nandini plzz…stop blaming urself...sirf isliye ki woh tumse milne aa raha tha doesn't mean yeh tumhari wajah se nahi hua… har baat ke liye apne aap ko blame mat karo…its just a accident…

Insp. Gaurav (interrupted them)—its not just a accident…

Arjun (looked back surprised)—matlab? & aap?

Gaurav—Inspector Gaurav 😊 ...maine hi nandini ji ko inform kiya tha…abt the accident… which actually is not accident…coz cars ki break tampered hai… so Mr.Raj kitne bhi safe driver kyun na ho…accident hona hi tha…fortunately its been not too harmful & thankfully unhe zyada chot nahi aayi hai…but its been an intentional accident…kisine jaanboojkar kiya hai…. Hopefully we will find out soon.😊

Arjun just nodded …& Gaurav just left from there…

Nandini(cud feel her temper rising)—aur agar mera guess sahi hai…toh main janti hoon aisa kaun kar sakta hai…😡😡

Arjun(getting to whom she is indicating)do you realize tum kya keh rahi ho?...

Nandini—I know…(sighing she decided to leave from there) ermm…main abhi aati hoon(she turned to go)

Suhana (stopping her)—ab kahan ja rahi hai? nandini are u mad…tum

Nandini(smiled)don't worry I will be back…main kahin bhaag ke nahi ja rahi…tum dono yaha par sambhal lena…

Arjun(still apprehensive to let her go)par nandini its…I mean tum…main saath aau…main…

Nandini—Arjun…tum yahi raho…I will manage…& tumhari yaha zarut hai…& I need to go…

Arjun—par sab tumhare bare mein poochenge & sabse pehle Raj poochega….usse pata chala tum aise akele gayi…he gonna kill me…

Nandini(interrupted)—I know tum manage kar loge… & aakar main Raj ko samjha dungi… tumhe kuch nahi hoga…(sighed) aur shayad is waqt main uncle aunty ka saamna bhi nahi kar paungi…

Suhana—nandini tum…😕

Nandini rushed even without answering….

Few moments later Raj's family & jai also joined arjun-suhana…

Doctors informed them Raj is fine they can meet him as soon as he gains consciousness…😊

Jai asked arjun about nandini…he just told him she wud be back…Arjun also informed it what nandini & inspector had said abt accident...also abt what nandini is suspecting...which tensed Jai more…coz he can easily guess where she had gone but how can she go alone without informing…

…to be continued… 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Puri
Update was gud..👏👏
Nandini was somewat right .she can't see every1 getting upset just beacuse of her.Raj and every1 was so worried over her.
Suhana was able to drill some sense in Nandini.she is actually lucky to have people who love her so much.
Nandini cud see that she just can't imagine living without Raj and she knew he wont ever leave her.
I dont understand Raj ka accident engagement se pehle hua hai na..😕😕 Nandini was so worried over him and that was the final straw for her.
she was blaming herself for all this mess.
Wat wud she do now???
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Update was very good
Nandini feels bad because raj and his family had to suffer because of her. Suhana did the right thing by knocking some sense into nandini.
Raj's accident was the finaly straw, nandini cannot bare to see his life endangered because of her.
please continue soon

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