Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

Just Wow!!
It was sad...but very well written...and lovely song!!

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bluetaj

@bluetaj

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#862

u write beautifully, felt all the emotions while reading past 2 updates. both are so sad.

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kiran deep kaur

@sikhni_

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#863

awww very sad n heart touching😭. 👏...i really really loved dis ff thnkss a lot dear 🤗

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imran78

@imran78

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#864

it was sad. poor arnav and khushi.
totally breakdown after such a sensual kiss.

Thanks for PM

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namedx

@namedx

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#865

Woah, the emotions are pouring out! And you've captured them wonderfully! 👍🏼

Kudos for the update! x

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#866

very nice thank u for pm me

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#867

Loved the update! Thanks for the PM! :)

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#868

beautiful update

thnx for the pm

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@guggu

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#869

Hey!

I just read through your entire story in one go and gosh! I loved it! You are a terrific writer. Hats off to you! *bows*

I just love the way this story is progressing!

Can you PM me for the next update? Thanks in advance!

Swati :)

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Rabba_Ve

@Rabba_Ve

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#870

Quote: " The stormy grey skies were a witness to the beautiful, young girl, stuffing her mouth with small pieces of cake, and tasting each grain, as if they held precious treasures. Khushi didn't want it to finish, ever. But she knew better than anyone that all good things would come to an end, sooner or later." wow... Loved it. Amazing writing!!!
So much pain and sadness for two people who are in so much love... Hope it is replaced soon by lots of happiness.
Also, apt use of song... Love the lyrics. ⭐️