Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139 - Page 84

omg! did he come with an accident!😕

Oh so beautiful and heart wrenching. I wish they come together again soon.

oh my god.. never seen pain described to this level.. it was like poem... so smooth and clear.. both in pain..

such a beautifully written part...

That was so heartbreaking if only he knew, im so angry with her for not telling him. I kinda hope Anjali either tells him or shouts at Khushi for not telling him. Pleased he didnt sleep with that girl. Brilliant but emotional update

awww soo sad the song selection was absolutely prefect luvd the update..:)

You've left me speechles again !!!!!!
That was a heartbreakingly beautiful update !!!!! *sniff* 😭
The lines at the beginning and also between the update were beautiful and were so apt for the situation !!!!!
Arnav is all heartbroken !!!! Cz Khushi was the first one who broke through all the walls he had built around his heart !! And he thinks she doesn't love him !!!! This line "After all what could be the reason for not being with the person you love." was so sad cz we know why she can't be with him and he doesn't !!!!
The saddest part was when he want to cry but teh tears werent cmng though I was crying !!!! 😭 It was also sooo sad when he threw the ring but was happy when he put it on again !!
The cake eating part was sooo emotional and also the way you described khushi's emotions !!!
Omg he got drunk and went to a prostitute !!!! But thank god nothing happened !!! And he finally cried remembering the kiss!!!
Loved how he wanted her to be next to him in the car and how she went out jogging in hope of meeting him even though she knew he was gone !!!! Felt bad for her when she cried lying on his bed !!!!!!
Reallly hope that Anjali or Khushi tells him the truth or he gets to know himself !!!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!! Thnx for the pm !! Update soon !!! I think I should stop cz the comment is too long !!! Sorry !! Love the story !!!!

Sublime. The inability to cry tears, the chocolate cake, the need to ease the pain...all so beautifully portrayed. Loved it.

U always tend to strike d right cords in my heart...make it sting in pain n yet feel bliss...der seperation was d worst at cud have ever happend but then your portayal made it d best one...dey r still yearning for each other...all dat needs to happen is the Truth needs to b out...dat will b a true exam of Arnav's intensity of love...

that was utterly beautifully written...