Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#751

OHH.. HOW SAD.. WHER THY JUST SHARED THE MOST BEAUTIFUL MOMENT N THN THY SEPARATED.. N KHUSHI IS NOT EVN KEEPIN HIM IN ANY PRETENTIONS OF FALSE WORLD... I THOT SHE'D SAY THE FULL TRUTH.. POOOR GIRL..

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#752

heartbreaking 😭

wonderful writing though, keep it up!

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#753

so beautiful...sigh..heartbreaking...
just so wonderfully written..waiting for the next update...loved it..

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#754

i am speechless! felt like i was reading poetry... the flow of words and emotions so perfectly in sync.

i am so overwhelmed by the play of emotions that i am unable to express anymore in words...

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#755

Missy, how on earth do you mage to write such lines? Ever considered writing poetry? Also where do you get the kind of inspiration- the ambience, the rains and the weather is almost the third protoganist in the 2 FFs you are writing. Do you live somewhere really beautiful?

You are going to live your life Khushi, not live, survive, she corrected her thoughts mentally. No matter how fatal losing Arnav was…fresh hot tears seared her cheeks again, she looked up into the skies, …he had been snatched away right from her hands, leaving her completely changed, with only the outer layer of skin above from before, she would continue to play out her life in the same way she had chosen a long time back, in silence.

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#756

wow ...fanatstic ...it would have killed kushi to let him go ...beautifully written

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#757

I love the little poem at the end, did u write it? Love the update, it was heart breaking but it had to be done... Now I a

Wanna see how they deal with this!

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jazzpreet

@jazzpreet

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#758

so beautiful and bittersweet. i hope arnav finds out the truth soon :/ thank you for the pm :)

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#759

AWWW! NOOO!

i knew this moment was coming so i had mentally prepared myself not to break down but aww the words, the love and the passion broe down all walls I had built... its just so sad, i had to breakdown... why... so sad... but written so beautifully that it evoked these emotions... :)