Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139 - Page 74

she finally said it...though not the truth but at least part of it

Nooo, dont say he was gone. Gone forever !!!! That cant happen..

It was just perfect, their dialogues!!!

Loved it...I think she is going to meet him again during Akash's wedding

That was depressing, on her birthday too!
I guess Anjalis going to tell him about her cancer?
Excellent update though :)

d update wuz PERFECT.. bt sad for arnav n khushi..

I have always chosen to bea silent reader on this particular fanfiction strictly because I feel once I open my mouth it won't close and once I dictate how I feel about all this I won't stop! But todays chapter has almost compelled me in a way to tell you how I feel
I cried...really I cried, I always told myself I will a writer who would make me feel the character as if its my own story and as if I can feel the character as much as it feels itself and I found one but no way in hell did I think I was going to find another one! You are the other one. Everything in this chapter and the previous ones was and is so b e a u t i f u l I cant even put it into simple words I can just gesture and show ad that is something powerful. Tobactually make someone feel as tho I have just is real amd pure t a l e n t . Not that anyone else cannot do it just because I have posted it here but this is how I feel about your work in particular this. You have blown me away

The quote at the beginning was an excellent foreshadow of the chapter and the ending poem was a fantastic way to gie it all in I am so in love with everything you have created here! m a g n i f i c e n t! the way you describe this is so stunning and marvelous your narrative is b e a u t i f u l

See I told you once I started I would not have stopped!

Please do continue soon and forgive me for never commenting previously!

-Aashifa

Beautifully written! Another awesome update ❤️

You keep amazing me with every update !!!!
It was heartbreakingly beautiful !!!!!! The beginning quote was enough to say about what was to happen !!!!!
Arnav's pain, anger and rage were superbly described !!!!!
Thank god she said that she loves him !!!! So that in the future after knowing everything he'll remember it !!!!!
The last two or three paragraphs were beautiful !!!!
The way you wrote about Khushi's feelings was brilliant !!!!!
Can't wait to read what happens next !!!! The last quote was marvellous !!!! It summed up everything !!!!
Thnx for the pm !!!! Update sooon !!!!!