ArhiFF:Price of freedom Thread 3 (T3)

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yusam

@yusam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#841

asusual nice n hawwtt...

from their loving morning, to the camel ride, swimmingpool.. n she wants to keep iqbal wid her.. loll..shes soo funnyy..

i really thot someone barged in ther maan.. u scared me... arnav is sooo nottyy n hottty... ;)

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kushiasr26

@kushiasr26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#842

awesome update

hot and passionate

kushi thought him as the murderer

iqbal nice name

y she kept the pot with her all the time will the camel going to kidnap us 🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

#843

Originally posted by: arhi101

😆thanx for the pm
I have a research paper due tomorrow, but couldnt help but log onto india forums, then i saw ur pm
i was sooo happy that u updated...

Now coming to the update
it was very HOT!!!

the beginning was very sensual and passionate. Khushi's innocence is just too adorable, and arnav is just hotter by the minute...

the camel ride was awesome. Khushi's thoughts were so funny😆, truly made me laugh. especiallyvher thinking that the camel would take her away from arnav. I love arnav deals so patiently with khushi's innocence and bizarre ideas. they make the best couple ever😳

the scenery of the pool was sooo beautiful... and arnav must have had immense difficulty to concentrate with his gorgeous wife swimming, while he was working...

the ride back was equally cute, and i loved how khushi wanted to keep Iqbal, love her connection towards every detail whether it be animals, people or toys (ASR)😆. the line where arnav says I Love You literally made my heart swell to think that this guy is just perfect. I adore the way he loves khushi (credit goes to u for making it sound all the more perfect).👏

the last part made me literally hold on to my laptop screen, if khushi was scared, then so was I, i literally thought that something happened to arnav and that an intruder had come and picked khushi up. But I immensely loved the surprise which was Arnav. It was sooo HOT, especially khushi being sooo angry while he was kissing her😳😆

Overall, once again a great update, very well written and described. Continue soon can't wait for the sneak peek as well as the next part

Continue soon😃

i just sent in my course work too. glad your getting the time to comment on my ff. 😳

thanks for finding arnav and khushi's relationship endearing. really key to me that. and arnt khushi's crazy thinking just craaazy😆

yh i think arnav fell into that one. wife swimming and work...not good idea😉.

awww thanks for saying so! i always try to balance the emotions and words between arhi. glad you love it.

yep the sexy hot scary moment is one i'm proud of. glad you told me how you reacted. makes me glad i wrote it.

thanks for the epic comment.

obviously we're sisters, but you get my point😆

xxx

Edited by -Zara- - 13 years ago

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#844

loved it zara

too hot

i m blushing lol

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monkeydog18

@monkeydog18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#845

Loved it!!
Hot and passionate!
Khushi is so innocent with the camel, cute!
Arnav is a devil..scared her!!
Is there really a murderer??!

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#846

Woah!

Man that was WILD 😉

Knew it was Arnav. =P

Poor starved husband. LOL.

Loved how she thought somebody broke in and the next Arnav falls on his prey as if he was deprived of his wife for god know how many years!

In one word Zara that was MIND-SHATTERING <3

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Downhill

@Downhill

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#847

simply fabulous loved it...the camel ride part was cute...

when the murderer track was coming , i was just holding my breath , half afraid that something may have happened to A or may happen to K, but then u sprung up a shocking surprise of A trying to scare her and getting naughty with her...it was damn good...

loved the update

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#848

First note on the entire update.

1. I liked the initial love making.. That was both sensual and a shy Khushi asking Arnav was fab

2. Camel kidnapping seriously only Khushi can come up with it.

3. Aww i liked both the poolside scene and also the camel scene too.

4. Aww man that final scene was so wild and i really was like what the when they made love.

5.Thanks for the PM>

And for such an awesome update i will give you this one

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TeleFan

@TeleFan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#849

Wow a very bold Kushi and a very hot update. Lovely to see them so happy and carefree... they deserve it

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#850

zara WHAT AN UPDATE GIRL !!!!! i loved it to core... khushi i sometimes think how much more can this girl be innocent... she thought camel will kidnap her and arnav ... and she named it as iqbal... nice name... and she asked arnav to buy it but he was right where will they put it... 😳 and when she thought that murder was in the house her first thought of safety was for arnav ... i liked it so much... she will put her life in front of his when required thats shows hoe much she loves him ❤️⭐️ and arnav what was that ... poor girl almost got heart attack when he was banging the door... superb hot and passionate update

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