ArhiFF:Price of freedom Thread 3 (T3)

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oops-whoops

@oops-whoops

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#831

oh i missed ur previous update so this comment is for both HOT HOT HOT being an indian u always luv hot stufff😆😆

i m loving the honeymoon period ... for a sec i thought thr is muderer in the house and r khushi and arnav will bring him down tgthr😆

i m loving it!!!!!!!!!!!

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@Chocoangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#832

haha...😆
i just read some bitz of d updates...😉

n OMG...she thought of camel kidnapping them...

🤣...only khushi could think of such things...😆

n about d hot stuff...😛...well i skipped it out...😉😉

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Neha

@melovemayur

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#833

Khushi is so innocent!! though not in bed ;p

Cute chapter!!

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#834

Lovely update Zara!

I was scared of the precap in the previous chapter but didnt expect it would turn out to be this hot!

Loved reading it! Thanls for the pm!

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#835

wat d hell...

i mean khushi ka dimaag bachche se bhi gaya gujraa hai...

camel kidanapping them...lol

asr...wat prank was it...??

morning mein jawaab dena pAdega dear...

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: Banginbengali
Okay can I just say I am so so sorry...I am like extremely late... my cousin got married yesterday n its been hectic since Wednesday...all the guests finally left...anyway loved the update it was hilarious!!!😆 😆

OMG I loved Khushi's outfit...so traditional yet modern loved 😛...n the way Arnav was playin Khushi by saying he didn't like it but loved it n the kiss haye!!!!😳

Its nice that they went to the market...loved all the description you gave...n awww the whole bangle scene was just so sweet!! Arnav lmao...really takin all his money out to buy Khushi all the bangles 😆...lmao Arnav sayin none of them are good for her n Khushi pouting...n seriously he picked the perfect one for her so elegant!!👏 Loved how he got mad at her when she was about to say thank you...but she made up for it with the kiss!!😳

Arnav is such a ssweetheart...givin all the happiness to Khushi...the pot scene was so sweet!! Her pickin the pot n showin it to Arnav n Arnav sayin yes n ahem ufff Arnav checkin her out!!😉! Lol I love it!!

OMG ASR!!!!!! Seriosly this part was to bloody good!! The driver describin it to Arnav...n Arnav lmao has a rival n enemy list on his ipad 😆 😆...OMG he kills me lol!! The driver describin its a pillow n Arnav knew exactly what it was OMG n he made sure by showin the culprits pic on his ipad..God Zara where do you come up with these idea to bloody good!!😆 ⭐️

Lmao...Khushi seriously lol hidin ASR...God would love to see Arnav fume over a stuffed toy for real lol...the way he was lookin for the bird...n Khushi is just to adorable her stompin her feet n lmao she promised Arnav she wouldnt touch ASR if he didnt do anythin to him...oh god classic lol!!👏

*whistle* the love scene...WOW!! Really nicely written...n Im still blushin...lol...the way he was teasin her ufff!!😳 😳

Precap is bloody scary...where is our Arnav baby...Zara this is to stressful...uggg hope he is alright!!😕

Sorry again for such a late reply...hope you havent come down with somethin...n if you have hope you feel better...loved the update...was just to funny!! Will be waitin on Thursday!!!😃

better late than never. thank you soo much i was thinking you didnt like it.lol. glad you got the time to comment.

thanks for liking the market and morning dress part. and yes i'm proud of the ASR discovery part too. i told you i laughed like 5 mins at my self when i thought it up.

glad you liked khushi's antic tooo. you remeber the spolier? thats the next part😉. scary time!

love you loads for the constant support i always feel like this when i get your long comment

😆 thank you.

xxx

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kethgauthami1

@kethgauthami1

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#837

update bahut achi thi and i really liked it

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#838

😆thanx for the pm

I have a research paper due tomorrow, but couldnt help but log onto india forums, then i saw ur pm

i was sooo happy that u updated...

Now coming to the update

it was very HOT!!!

the beginning was very sensual and passionate. Khushi's innocence is just too adorable, and arnav is just hotter by the minute...

the camel ride was awesome. Khushi's thoughts were so funny😆, truly made me laugh. especiallyvher thinking that the camel would take her away from arnav. I love arnav deals so patiently with khushi's innocence and bizarre ideas. they make the best couple ever😳

the scenery of the pool was sooo beautiful... and arnav must have had immense difficulty to concentrate with his gorgeous wife swimming, while he was working...

the ride back was equally cute, and i loved how khushi wanted to keep Iqbal, love her connection towards every detail whether it be animals, people or toys (ASR)😆. the line where arnav says I Love You literally made my heart swell to think that this guy is just perfect. I adore the way he loves khushi (credit goes to u for making it sound all the more perfect).👏

the last part made me literally hold on to my laptop screen, if khushi was scared, then so was I, i literally thought that something happened to arnav and that an intruder had come and picked khushi up. But I immensely loved the surprise which was Arnav. It was sooo HOT, especially khushi being sooo angry while he was kissing her😳😆

Overall, once again a great update, very well written and described. Continue soon can't wait for the sneak peek as well as the next part

Continue soon😃