ArhiFF:Price of freedom Thread 3 (T3) - Page 75

awesome update!

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Firstly you are such a fantabulous writer seriously bravo to you...you writing this for the second time shows how much dedication you have towards your writing! 👏 What makes your writing truely amazin is the fact that you come up with the ctraziest ideas 😆..n they weave into the story so beautifuly!! I love your story seriously, n Im sayin this as a reader..I love readin books n ur FFs are no less then that ..Allah gave you an amazin brain😉...trust me if it was me wouldn't even know how to start out!! I have the great privilage to read your work..you have no idea how excited I get on Thursday n the weekends lol because of your FF. Anyway thank you so much for takin time out of your busy schedule n makin us apart of your world!! *okay sorry senti hogaye* 😆 lol! Love you n your FF!! <3

This was so freakin good...loved how Arnav got annoyed that he couldn't tease Khushi 😆..n Khushi so sweet to make breakfast...the petals n Arnav starin at Khushi was just so lovely...n then *ahem* God can they get any hotter!!??! 😳! Ufff Im still blushin...n finally their talk...it was very smartly done Zara...they way Khushi told him that this is life...you can't forget such a big incident...you just have to learn from it n move on (story of my life lol)...the way Arnav was felt so strongly about her hidin it from him n askin her not to ever hide anythin again...I absolutely loved!! They are so passionate for eachother its unbelievable!! 😳

So they went surfin...Sweeet!! 😃 Arnav ufff I would die to see him in a swim suit...first specs now this..God Im lovin your brilliant imagination Zara!! 😆 Khushi lmao...feelin awkward in a swim suit n Arnav sayin that she looks Hot...OMG Jews I still can't get over it lmao 😆...n how he said hes the only who can bite her...eeep 😳... I died when he picked up Khushi...n finally Khushi got the hang of it n Arnav felt proud aww...I absolutely loved the water fight...CUTE!!! 😳N aww the kiss...n seriously Arnav you wanna do it right there lmao!!

Ufff the pool...love her Khushi shy about the bathin suit eventhough its just her n Arnav was so innocent <3..n ufff Arnav comin in the pool haye...another brilliant job Zara...bringing an emotional part...loved how Khushi explains how she n their parents are proud of him (can you please tell Arnav we are very proud of him as well lol). 😆.n aww Arnav askin how she knows n Khhshi just simply sayin she know n so does he...him gettin emotional..the kiss...ufff fabulous job with the emotions displayed 👏...n the OMG moment..Arnav rough lol...sweet God this was nice!! N the robe part...😳 😳

N OMG precap ASR is back partay 😆 😛...lol lmao can't believe Khushi brought him to the honeymoon...can't waite to read what Arnav does lmao...this is gonna be good!! Okay Im already dead with this hot chapter I dont think I can take anymore...but I'll be brave n say bring it on Zara...lol!! 😆

Zara you out do yourself each time seriously...to damn bloody good!! The way you bring the emotions in..n u switch from HOT ...to full on emotions is just to die for Brillantly outstandin ⭐️ (okay Im gonna stop before I get my butt kicked my grammar police lol)...Swwweeett update ...thank you for always keepin your story a lil hatke n truely beautiful!! ⭐️ Thanks so much for the PM...cant waite till Thursday!!

Nver want t leave alone I see...

Very hot update ...

Loved the surf and jacuzzi scene...

Oh m god did she bring asr along...

OMG love ur patience, despite the update being deleted u still re-did it.😃

Coming to the point. I will break my comment into parts of the update:

Morning scene- Loved every bit of the morning scene khushi and arnav are just too HOT to handle. ur update made me blush throughout earning myself weird glares from my dad who thought i was crazy😆. Arnav is just sooo adorable, totally love the way u write his possessiveness and care for khushi. I love how u also weaved khushi's character who is innocent yet u made her nature innocently bold😳. I love how khushi is now used to arnav obviously since they r married now😊.

Surfing/Beach romance- First of all thrilled to read about arnav surfing. I could actually picturise the whole surfing done by the hottie😳. Once again i adored the way khushi was scared yet in the end enjoyed the surf with arnav. It was fun to read. Their romance is sooo pure mixed with arna's mischief which makes it all the more interesting to read😊. I love how arnav treats her with care especially when he is romantic, it shows how much he loves her. I also love how khushi cares for arnav also showing khushis love for arnav👏.

Swimming- Geez this part was sooo romantic and hot. Arnav is sooo adorable and so is khushi. Loved the part to bits. they make such an amzing couple even in this ff. 😳

Precap- the precap sounds hilarious. khushi actually brought ASR with her on her honeymoon. Poor arnav he has to share his honeymoon company with his rival. Loved how arnav called ASR a flipping bird😆. The precap seems all the more interesting making me anxious to read what will happen to khushi once arnav gets his hand on her for not only bringing ASR along, but also playing hide and seek🤣

thank u for the great update it was awesome to read. Can't wait for the next part, hopefully khushi isnt in too much trouble😆. Continue soon. Looking forward to reading it soon 😉

And I looovvveeddd it..! From where we started; to where we are now... Uh-mayyy-zinnnggg!!!

Thanks for the PMs and sorrriiee for being late!