Originally posted by: cute_rockstar
it was hot! fun! excitement ...and much more!
cant believe you just deleted it and wrote once more...you're sooo nice cutie-pie zee!
worked so hard for us! :D
ok ok the update!
it was awesome as usual! a perfect arhi-filled atmosphere and passionate encounters...
it was surfing! cool!loved the idea!
khushi really wore...it! omg! i soo loved the update!
i think the limelight of the update was these lines...
when we humans go through experiances like a death of a family or friend...or what we went through...but the test is for us to learn and move on arnav. but you have to trust me when i say that as long as i'm with you...nothing else matters arnav.
this is so true...i bet everyone must have gone through such things in life and you just gave a little hint how to deal with such acquaintences! hats off to you for that!
the beginning was so nice!arnav waking up and khushi giggling and merrying around!
it was beautifully written! every part was so nicely written that it looked as if i was watching it..specially the beach scene...i bet i wanna go there right now! thr pics were amazing! made the chapter alive! it was just perfection..
the surfing scene was amazing! arnav assuring khushi that everything's gonna be fine until he is with her...he wont let the shark bite her! how cute!
the last tit-bits around the beach i mean the sunset scene was beautifully written!
loved it to the core cutie-pei zee!
i just loved all the parts where they embrace into each other...it's so romantic! :D :)
the precap! its ASR right?
haha...:) i'm so looking forward to it!arnav's jealousy! and ASR's honeymoon...so cutely paired and written!
and ya the part in which you wrote you arent a pro writer...i was like " look who's saying this! the girl who writes the FF to which i am hooked to and keeps on checking it to read more of it! and i write somethings which i dont even know that i actually wrote them! i'm so ,mad for ur work zee! you have the ability to keep things hooked! and i completely adore every of your work and every word you wrote in it...:) you're the best! remember that always! and we love you!"
thanks a ton for the pm zee!
thanks for the long and awesome update again!
keep rocking always!
love...
esha. <3
Hey esha.
thanks so much for your long comment. really adore it thank you.😳
so glad you liked that part. really hold that close to my heart too.
i'm glad you liked the beach and pool part too.
yes i have let loose ASR again. just watch him create havoc.😆
awww thats so sweet of you. thanks for saying so. 😳
thank you so much for the comment. 😳
xxx
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