Pehli Baar Mohabbat Ki Hai (SwaRon FF) - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: manasie

y... y... sharon.. kyu manna kar rahi h... ppwwweejjj make dem dance btw nice promo...


Will try!!!! 😊
Thankyou!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
PLz udpate soon loved the promo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Update Rachita..Wen are you update karing nxt part?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: -Nia-

Update Rachita..Wen are you update karing nxt part?


writing the next part!!!! If I finish will post it today!!!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
nice promo i loved it and thanks for the pm :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
It's amazing! Just mind blowing! Cnt wait for next update!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

PART 2

A new day starts!

Everyone meets at the rehearsal to see Sharon and Rey rehearse for their couple dance

Vicky:Kal Raat ke khane mein lagta hai kuch gadbad thi! Mera pet kharab ho gaya hai...

Nilesh:Ya Dude! Yeh log humko acha khana bhi nahi de sakte kya?

Neha:Kya Hua Babu,tum theek toh ho na

Vicky(to Nilesh, softly):Mujhe jhoot bolna zaruri hai kya? I mean dekh na, Kagu itni worried hai

Nilesh:Haan Vicky, plan par concentrate kar

Vicky(to Neha):Nahi Kagu,kuch nahi...tum tension mat lo.

Rey:Come on Sharon, lets practice...

Simmi:By the way, tum log kaunse gaane par perform kar rahe ho?

Sharon:Kuch Khaas hai!!!!!!!

Rini:nice choice Sharon!

Vishakha:Dude, what dance style do ull plan to do?

Rey:Humne sab styles ko mix karke, lyrics par steps bithaaye hai...

Bharat:Waah yaar, yeh toh kuch naya hoga...

Amar:Haan yaal(yaar) dekhao na please

Rey:Come Sharon...

Sharon goes to Rey and they take a stance...

The song start and they start dancing beautifully...

Barely after 10 sec, a lift has to be performed but while lifting Sharon, Rey gets hurt.

Rey:Ouch!!!!

Sharon:Kya hua Rey? Tum theek to ho

Vicky and Nilesh rush to see Rey

Pretending to check something

Nilesh:I think Rey ko sprain hua hai...

Vicky:Oh Shit Rey!!!! Tu aisi halat mein dance nahi karna... Par agar tu dance nahi karega toh kaun karega?

Rey: Nahi Nahi, Im fine... Ill perform

Sharon:No way Rey... Aisi halat mein tum dance nahi kar sakte

Rey: Par Sharon hamare couple dance ka kya hoga? I cant perform, Vicky and Nilesh ka pet kharab hai...

Sharon:We'll figure out a way Rey... But under no circumstances are u performing like this...

Rey:Tumhara partner kaun banega??????Bharat???

Bharat:Abe pagal hogaya hai kya...Main Sharon ke saath dance karunga!!! Meri kya shamat aayi hai..

Rey: Amar tum?

Amar:Arey Nahi Nahi... Mujhe Shalon(Sharon)ke saath dance karne mein bahut dal(darr) lagta hai, ek kaam karte hai na, Bharat aur Vishakha perform kar sakte hai na...

Rey(Voiceover):Arey yaar, yeh sab bigaad dega...

Rey:Aree Nahi... Not possible Competition shuru hone mein sirf 3 ghante hai, ismein nayi choreography, nayi team not possible... kisi ko Sharon ke saath hi team up hona padega...

Vicky:Lekin Kaun????

Nilesh:Swayam???

Swayam-Haan???

Nilesh:Swayam Karega na, Sharon ke saath dance... Karega na Swayam??

Everyone looks at Swayam


Swayam looks at Sharon and waits for her approval


Swayam: Agar Sharon comfortable hai toh


Everyone looks at Sharon


Swayam and Sharon have an eyelock


Sharon remembers the moments when they have danced together...


Sharon(Voiceover):Main phir se Swayam ke saath dance nahi kar sakti... Uske saath dance karke pata nahi kyu, par main apne emotions par control nahi kar sakti... No, I cant let myself give in to him this time... No...

Sharon:Guys,

Rey cuts her in between

Rey:Come on Sharon, team ke liye????

Sharon looks at Swayam

Sharon:But guys,

Rey:Sharon, humne team event or solo event cross kar liya hai, this is the last stage! We cant back out at this moment... Come on Sharon...

Swayam(Voiceover):Sharon

Sharon looks at him

Swayam(Voiceover):Sharon, agar tum comfortable nahi ho, toh main mana kar deta hu... Tumpar koi pressure nahi hai, aur kabhi hoga bhi nahi... Ill take the blame

Sharon looks at Swayam with confused expressions

Sharon(thinking to herself):Kyu Swayam Kyu? Kyu tum har cheez itni asaan bana dete ho...Kyu meri itni fikar hai tumhein... Tumhaare yeh kehne ke baad bhi main mana kyu nahi kar paa rahi hu...Kyu????

Swayam lifts his eyebrows asking for an answer for his question

Sharon doesn't respond

Swayam(to himself):Main jaanta hu Sharon ki tum mere saath dance karne mein comfortable nahi ho... Aaj tak maine tumhein kabhi kisi cheez ke liye force nahi kiya, aaj bhi nahi karunga... Mere liye sabse important tumhaari khushi hai.

Swayam: Rey I think...

Sharon:Lets do it...

Swayam looks at Sharon... Sharon nods in approval...

Swayam:Are you sure Sharon

Sharon nods...

Rey(Voiceover):Stage 4 complete!!!!! ThankGod!!!!

Rey winks at Nilesh and Vicky who smile in return

Rey:Okay Swayam come on... We have 3 hours... And we need to do this!!!!!

Sharon starts teaching Swayam the steps...

Sharon:Ok so...um...first step

Sharon keeps her hand on Swayam's shoulder after much hesitation

Swayam slowly slids his hand on her waist, hesitantly

Rey:Common guys! Yeh ek couple dance hai... U'll have to be closer!!!!

Nilesh:Ya Sharon and Swayam... Tum log strangers ki tarah kyu behae kar rahe ho

Swayam(little softly, trying to speak to himself):Strangers? Huh, hum hamesh strangers the, hai aur rahenge

Sharon hears this and looks at him...

(Pehla Nasha tune in the background)

They come closer... Sharon is aware of his presence... She hasn't felt this way with Rey while practicing with him...

Sharon(Voiceover):Rey ke saath toh kabhi itna awkward nahi laga...Toh Swayam ke saath kyu???? Common Sharon, be normal!!!!

She lifts her head with confidence but the moment she sees Swayam in his eyes, she's lost in them again

They have a eye lock which is perfectly ruined by Bharat's comment

Bharat:Arey yeh log toh stance pakadne mein hi time laga rahe hai, dance kya karenge

Both look in different directions feeling embarrassed at being caught in such a situation

Rey:Dont worry Bharat... Yeh dono ek doosre ko itne ache se jaante hai ki agar koi goof up bhi kar de, doosra use sambhal lega

Nilesh nods in approval...

The practice session starts with occasional eyelocks and romantic moments...

Just before the performance

Rey:Sab kuch set hai!!!!! Bas, now its upto u and Swayam!!!! Ull have to rock it!!!!! Ull have always been magic together!!!! Sharon, yaad hai na, maine kaha tha, trust!

Sharon:Hmm...

Rey: Sharon, tum uske saath aaj dance karne jaa rahi ho jiske saath, bina kuch kahe bhi, tumhaare ek rishta hai, jo tumhaari khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai. He helped u gain ur confidence back and usne badle mein kuch nahi maanga...Apne liye nahi toh yeh performance uske liye karna...

Sharon look at Swayam who is with his friends just a yard away...

Rey: Come on Sharon!

Sharon nods...

They join the gang!

Simmi:Come on Sharon, show everyone that ur the best

Vishakha:Come on Swayam!!!! I kno u will rock!!!!

Sharon and Swayam smile

Nilesh(To Swayam):Iss chance ka poora fayda uthana...

Swayam:Kya keh rahe ho guys? Hum sirf dance kar rahe hai

Vicky: Toh Kya Hua?????? Aaj toh Sharon ko dikhaade ki tu use kitna pyaar karta hai

Swayam: Nahi Vicky... Yeh sirf ek dance hai aur jo bhi tu keh raha hai na, woh ab kuch mayne nahi rakhta...so its best ki hum uske bare mein baat na kare...

Vicky and Nilesh go next to Rey

Vicky:Rey yaar, yeh Swayam toh kuch nahi karega, sirf dance karke aajayega

Nilesh: Haan yaar, humein laga tha ki kuch mauke ka fayda uthaega, but isse dekh

Rey:Guys, this performance will make a difference in their lifes... Toh kya hua ki Swayam kuch confess nahi karega, atleast yeh dance unhein close layega...

Host:"Now presenting the Hot Jodi of St. Louis College, Sharon and Swayam"

Rini:Go guys, tum logon ka naam announce ho gaya hai

Swayam:Ready Sharon?

Sharon(Hesitatntly): Ya...

Chorus:All the best guys!!!!

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Thats it for today guys!!!!!! Jaldi Jaldi comment karo jisse ki I can post a Promo soon!!!!! :)

Btw, Ull r gonna reallly enjoy the SwaRon part in the next part!!!!! :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Amazing n thanks for the update loved it thanks for the pm as well
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
arrghhh!!! u had to stop der...woman..u'll kill me...please update soon yaar...the promo...please...

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