#1 The Chronicles Of Khushi Gupta C17 ON THREAD 2

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aakesha

@aakesha

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#421

nice update! thanks for the pm.

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#422

Phew !
Just finished reading all the chapters !
And I LOVE LOVE LOVE these chronicles !
Amazing !
Please update soon ! Please !

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#423

what the precap...and the update was beautiful...

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#424

Yay! You updated!

I liked their exchange! Intense, and full of feelings..

I love Anil Sharma! Was he about to say that Arnav is Khushi's boyfriend or something? When he stops sans says friend?

Did I see your note mentioning a kiss? Huh?

All in all... Loved the update... Thank you for the PM, too. 😃

Edited by Sjm15 - 13 years ago

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TeleFan

@TeleFan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#425

"do you work out a lot" ha ha i loved the spontainety of that... It perfectly captured what she was feeling. A bit scared for about shyam the creep but arnav will save her hopefully. Anil is a sweet heart an you are righg arnav does need a friend he is all alone thats why he is wound so tight.
I am still imagining him in the white shirt in the rain sigh!

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#426

Hey nice update albeit after ages :-) what happened go the twice a week update pattern? I actually went back and read all the chapters from start I like yr FF too much to loose the essence of it courtesy huge gaps!Ok now that I have finished being grumpy, awesome update as usual!

Loved the update ESP the developing equation between Arnav & Kkhushi. K of course is absolutely adorable! I want tO just give her a big hug! And i agree i do like Anil and poor Khushi, completely muddled between her crush on Anil and her attraction for Arnav!

And everyone save poor Khushi seems to aware of how she, Shyam and Arnav are connected! Waiting to read more..Hopefully sooner than later Phantom! :-))

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 13 years ago

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Sona

@mistyrains

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#427

Finally you updates. Brilliant stuff 😊

Arnav is such a flirt. And I really like Anil's character. Nice guy.

And Khushi is so cute. I wonder what would happen if Arnav read K's journal.

But, the rain part is nice. Update soon😊

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GalwayGirl

@GalwayGirl

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#428

Hey!

Let me start off with, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this fiction!

be it the Chronicle format, the Khushi here, the parallel characters which you've made on your own and Arnav of all!

I am so glad i found this FF! An involuntary smile pops up right after i see your PM!

Khushi is soo me! Not the diary part, but on the whole her reactions, i can always relate to! Arnav has this mysterious look in him, which is so inviting! One thing common in them (other than cuteness)is that they are unpredictable! and i like it that way!

Anil is such a sweetheart! No wonder K is dragged towards him! though my guess would be that this Crush would soon pass, may be a jealous part coming up??! ;)

I so wanted a Rain scene there! why Anil WHY did you come there??!!!

My fav lines:

He looked handsome, almost. Ish. Kind-of. Maybe.

"No I don't want you to leave me alone."

"Good, I wasn't planning on it."

Waiting for the Kiss-no-kiss part eagerly! Please update twice a week if time permits!

Ciao!

Edited by GalwayGirl - 13 years ago

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ASRism

@ASRism

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#429

It was really an interesting update...I loved her to do list😆

Jst loving it

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#430

You know, I was just thinking of your fic the other day. I was like, when is Shri going to update?? Hahahah glad you did today, otherwise you would have seen me spamming your thread demanding an update. Aren't I nice? ;) :D

Hahahah but coming to the update. Okay. Seriously woman, you know exactly how to get me from laughing to going o.O to blushing and grinning.

This bit of the part had me cracking up:

The rest of the car ride was silent, almost as if letting a storm brew- literally as well as figuratively. The sky had suddenly darkened and a roar of thunder broke the silence. I instinctively reached out to him, holding onto to the sleeves of his shirt.

Seems like even the Gods want Khushi and Arnav to get closer ;) Hahahaha excuse me if I am reading too deep into this. Stupid Year 12 English classes have destroyed me ever reading/watching anything like a normal person - without analysing, and analysing every freaking thing.

But anyway, is the storm an indicator of something that's going to happen. Like the dark cloud - Shyam, and the helplessness Khushi feels at not knowing anything?

Now coming onto the...*cough* THE SCENE.

Arnav. In a white shirt. Wet. Rain. Clinging. Body. Bloody hell.

I think a thousand girls probably fainted at that image. Maybe we should send that scene to the CVs, hoping they will incorporate it? :D :D

When he leans in close, OMG!!!! I was grinning so much, that if anyone had walked in, they would probably be freaked out by the wide smile on my face. Obviously they wouldn't understand since they weren't visualising Arnav...in a freakin' white shirt... wet...clinging to his body.. ☺️

*snaps back to reality*

Anyway, the preview for the next part has me excited.

Shyam making an appearance again!

I am actually excited since this might mean Arnav saving Khushi??? :D :D Orrr a very, hot, sexy angry Arnav?? :D :D

Either ways, I am pretty excited to see this mystery behind Khushi and Shyam unravel!

You have me hooked to your story! :D