New Abhi Nikki FF - From You to Me-Completed - Page 31

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww so romantic!!! What a perfect first date :) Absolutely loved it!!!! :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg i couldn't read your updates for a week and there are like 3 updates.. i love it :)

Story has progressed so much and in each part there was something happening, be it A sending N back to work and they longing for each other or A overhearing N and Sid talking to each other, the way he called her bhabhi.. those were some moments..

Sid is such a good bro :) he planned that awesome date for himself mainly to give A and N time alone... And what that does to AN was brilliant.. N's height comes to A's aid :) that was one smart helping :) what a hot and passionate scene and obviously N cant help but tell him how she feels.. There was war between them :) A wants to hear it again so he could believe and N wants to hear it from A ... Finally both give up and stick to action :) that was one good scene :) i am the lucky one to get to read it in one shot without any break :)

Sid - this is one character i think you have nailed it since start.. he is so understanding, and there is that fun mischievous side to him.. gauging if his intentions are succeeded and then taking off before he becomes haddi in the kabab :) perfect guy... only if Tamanna sees it (i know she has started to) :)

hmm.. so another day goes and A and N still cant get themselves to put it in words, then again i am not sure if they will ever be able to :) they are action people compared to talk.. and that is best they can do..
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Posted: 13 years ago
prash amazing part loved the romance cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

@Mitzi , yes that line goes great with the song's stanza . However, I was thinking from Abhi's POV when he watches her go , towards the end . But , its good to see it fitting for both of them . Even better!

@Meera , thanks so much sweetie . Glad you found it romantic and yes it kind of turned out to be a perfect first date , even if unofficial😛 .

@Jyothi , thanks a lot sweetie . Glad you loved the romance in the update 😊.

@ariel , angel_sub,ruch , hemvb , Muni , many thanks guys.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

omg i couldn't read your updates for a week and there are like 3 updates.. i love it :)

Story has progressed so much and in each part there was something happening, be it A sending N back to work and they longing for each other or A overhearing N and Sid talking to each other, the way he called her bhabhi.. those were some moments..

Sid is such a good bro :) he planned that awesome date for himself mainly to give A and N time alone... And what that does to AN was brilliant.. N's height comes to A's aid :) that was one smart helping :) what a hot and passionate scene and obviously N cant help but tell him how she feels.. There was war between them :) A wants to hear it again so he could believe and N wants to hear it from A ... Finally both give up and stick to action :) that was one good scene :) i am the lucky one to get to read it in one shot without any break :)

Sid - this is one character i think you have nailed it since start.. he is so understanding, and there is that fun mischievous side to him.. gauging if his intentions are succeeded and then taking off before he becomes haddi in the kabab :) perfect guy... only if Tamanna sees it (i know she has started to) :)

hmm.. so another day goes and A and N still cant get themselves to put it in words, then again i am not sure if they will ever be able to :) they are action people compared to talk.. and that is best they can do..

Hey Pri , Your comment made up for all the drabness of my day so far 😊. Thank you !!!
I too was wondering and thinking of you since I did not see any comments since the last two parts , you know a little anxious . Good you read all three together finally.
And yes , Sid has turned out to be pretty good here . Sweet , understanding , helpful , respectful and of course fun and naughty and as you rightly said , he knows when he is not needed 😊 which unfortunately Nikii's other beloved friends did not . And don't worry his new GF has already started to see all his sterling qualities 😊.
Finally both give up and stick to action :)
Haa haa haaa ! This line is the best. . I can't stop laughing .That's the exact thought I had when I was writing that part . AN's passionate moments were always breathtaking and if you remember in the show , most (or probably all) of them were before their confession 😊. Glad you liked the scene in all its "uninterruptedness".
And yes , AN were never good with words and I think they don't need to be too . As you say , they are all about action😉 .
Thanks so much for the lovely comment sweetie .
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pra i am dead now after reading this part 😳👏
i only thought of one song for AN after reading this part

Tere haath mein mera haath hoo
Sari Janatein mere pass hoo
Tu jo pass hoo tou kya hai ye jahan
Tere ishq mein ho jaon Fanaa
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Posted: 13 years ago
Jibsi , thank you sweetie 😊. And yes , those are some very nice lines for AN.
cukish , thanks again
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow wow wow n wow such a hot date
Lovely update plz update next part soon n looking forward to read more AN romance
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cmon ..read it fast .. so we move on ...
Prash ...when are you updating !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update... oyee.. Abhi just dnt want to let go... 😳 😍
my passionate AN.. lekin achha hua Niks controlled herself..
yes he needed rest! 😉
aww d picture of her feeding him. .. lovely. :)
enjoyed ur update.. very nice.. conti soon.
sorry 4 d late reply. :)

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