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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: taylenaloverx03


I'm going to type now :)
So maybe in the evening :)



oh thnkxx buddy 😳

ur name ??

im narmada 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nams_arsha



oh thnkxx buddy 😳

ur name ??

im narmada 😊


No problem
I love updating😊
And i'm Sneha😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 12:

Dedicated to kriyansh24 (vaishali) 😃

Recap: You all know.. :P

Kria and Sharon sat at the beach, Sharon consoling her but Kria not ready to listen. "Kria! It's okay! I'm sure she didn't mean what she said." Sharon said. "No, She meant every word she said!" Kria said. "But how will I be without talking to Rey? I'll see him everywhere. In English class, at Lunch, Dance practice, at Work!" Sharon was actually surprised to see how much Kria likes Rey. "It's okay Kri!! You can talk to him, tell him everything that happened. I'm sure he'll understand. You are going to talk to him, alright!" Sharon said. "No, after everything that happened do you think I'm going to?" Kria said. Sharon sighed. "Kria, forget about it now. Let's go home!" Sharon said, tugging at Kria so that she would get up. "No Sharon! I'm not going back! I don't know how I'm gonna face her now." Kria said. "C'mon Kria. I'm sure she doesn't hate you and all. Trust me." Sharon said. "No, she said it herself. She hates me these days. If I talk to Rey, she'll hate me forever. They're the only family I have!" Kria said. "I know hun! That's why I'm telling you to go back. And talk to her. Do you think you're parents are gonna let you go? No. Do you think Aisha is going to let you go? No way! She'll pull you inside. She's so strong!" Sharon said. Kria smiled a little. "C'mon Kria!Get up! Get up!" Sharon said, pulling her hand which forced Kria to get up. Sharon and Kria sat in Sharon's car and they went back to Kria's house.


It was already 10 p.m. Aashi had returned from her date with Rey. When Aashi went to her room, Dhruv was waiting for her. "What?" Aashi asked. "Why did you say all those things to Kria?" he asked. "I had to alright. All of you love her more than me." Aashi said. "It's nothing like that. We love you. Her parents left her when she was 6. Do you think she doesn't think about it now? Do you think she doesn't cry because of it. Ofcourse she does. She never tells anyone." Dhruv said. "Look, I really like her alright. But sometimes, I have to speak up for myself." Aashi said. They started fighting and Dhruv got really angry and slapped Aashi. "Dhruv, I never thought you'd do this. But I don't care now. I really don't. I'm gonna stand up for myself. I don't need anyone for support." Aashi said, crying because she had never in her life imagined that her big brother would slap her. Dhruv went back to his room and started packing because he had to go back to college.


Rey went home after the date with Aashi but he was thinking only about Kria. Questions circled his mind like Why did she cry? Why didn't she tell him? Why didn't she want to talk to him? He called his best friend Swayam as he was the only one to whom he could tell these problems to. "Hey! It's me..Are you busy?" Rey asked. "No not at all. I think you're upset. What happened?" Swayam asked. Rey narrated what happened about how Kria had left him and gone crying. "I'll ask Sharon what happened and call you back Rey." Swayam said. He called Sharon but her number was busy. He called again. Finally she picked up the phone. "Hey..Rey jus called..." Swayam started, and asked her what the problem was. "Nothing, I'll tell you later." Sharon said, looking at Kria who was looking outside the window. Sharon hung up the phone. "You're not telling anyone anything, specially not Rey and Swayam." Kria said, still looking outside. "But Kria..!" Sharon started, but Kria turned to her. "Please.. Please.. listen to me Sharon. Please don't tell them." Kria said. "Okay, I won't. But I still think you're doing the wrong thing." Sharon said. "It's fine." Kria said.


Kria came home and she didn't talk to anyone because everyone had already slept. She climbed to her room, and went and just slept on the bed. She checked her mobile. 10 missed calls from Rey. She was dying to call him back, but she couldn't. She threw her phone onto the bean bag and slept.


Next morning, she was hesitating to go to school. Rey will surely come talk to her. Her exams were over and she had to meet him everyday for dance practice. She changed to school and without waiting for anyone, she began walking to school. Sharon said she'd come pick up her up but she refused. She needed time to think. Finally she reached school and as she had thought, Rey came running to her locker. When she saw Rey coming, she immediately turned and started walking towards her first period classroom. "Kria!! Wait! I need to talk to you!Kria!!" Rey called after her, but she didn't stop. She didn't even turn. She didn't go to the cafeteria for lunch. She avoided everyone as much as she could.


Now they had dance practice. She couldn't avoid him now. "Kria, why are you not talking to me?" Rey asked, while they did a simple twirl around step. "I just don't want to. Is it a problem?" Kria asked, closing her eyes. "Sorry Rey!" she thought in the mind. "Yea it is a problem. I can't be without you talking to me." Rey said. "But I can rey! Let's just talk professionally for dance. That's all. Don't ask me anything else." Kria said. "But Kria..." Rey started. "Please rey!" Kria said sternly that Rey couldn't ask her anything more.


Days passed without them talking. Everynight she cried and he was really upset. He didn't know why she wasn't talking to him. Even Sharon refused to tell him. He didn't know what to do, or what to say. Why was Kria doing this? Wasn't she the one who told that they'd be best friends forever. Where is the promise now? 😕

Precap: Kria!! Just because you are not talking to me, doesn't mean you have to....


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So how did you all like the chapter? I don't know when i'll be able to update next.. I'm going out of town.. So i might be able to update only after i return..😆

Till then i want you all to think about the precap.

My demand : I'll update next only if the comments cross Page 45. 😛

I've really got lotsa scenes... I even took my time choreographing Kriyansh's dance in my mind. So if you want me to write about the dance, then fulfil my demand😉

.😊 Keep waiting for them to confess...😆 I'm in no hurry to update. 😈

-Sneha ⭐️

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Edited by taylenaloverx03 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved the update... glad that dhruv slapped aashi... sharon's really having a heart of gold... always there for her best friend... hope reyam get to know about aashi's true face soon... can't wait for their confession...(both kriyaansh and swaron)
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvd it !😛
nyc update bt i want all d misunderstandin 2 b cleard b/w kriyansh !

Edited by kriyanshluver1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

its okay

we can wait until ur back

bt it was really bad to see KriYaansh condition both wanna talk to each other but cant

i hate that Ashi😡

m juz waiting for them to get all their misunderstandings cleared n be 2gthr


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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome i loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
so cul... just waitin 4 dem to confess...
luv shariya's frendship...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
it was very emotional, kria hurting rey and herself because of aashi's stupid demand😭😭😭😭😭
ahhh cant see kriyansh like this

waiting eagerly for next part

and enjoy your trip and have fun

will be waiting for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
love da update...glad dat dhruv slapped aashi she desreve dat only...idiot aashi...i m rili pissed of her
n feeling bad 4 both love birds rey n kriya...aww i want dem together...plss jaldi se kch kro na

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