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Posted: 13 years ago
at laaast! updated...aftr 1 whole decade! i thought i would turn 50 by d tym u updated d 10 part!

i luvd d way u described khushi's bonding wid d family members. n arnav's emotions n hisn track of thoughts was also stupendous! update d 2nd part soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful story..
just now read all d parts...
luved it...

thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
have been waitnig for you to update since ages
loved it update soon please
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loving the story!
And eagerly waiting for the next update! (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just read the whole thing!
YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER!

I love all your stories!
DO continue soon, and Please Pm me for the next update! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG This ff is amazing.. Different concept but you have stuck with characters personality..

I loved everyone bond with Khushi..

Could you add me to ur PM :) And congrats on 100 pages
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all Thank you for being such sweet person , honestly you make my day :D I was having bad day even today was such horrible day anyways but after seeing the dedication made me feel better :)) thanks again :D Big hug to you for such sweetheart 🤗🤗

so coming the update, it was so descriptive and honestly simply amazing yaar. the way you show her bonding with family through Arnav was just the best thing ... i like the way you started how he said pretty face ( he is attracted for sure ;) how he describe the relationship each member is just sweet , awesome ... i don't have words. I am kind of loss for words at moment but I must say you did absolutely amazing job with writing this update... i loved it!!!

three weeks and here she
she plays important part in the family , she bring smile on his Di and nani . her relationship with shayam and akash is super cute, adorable . mami and khushi rofl .. typical khsuhi haha :) I like how he said it took him ages to know that his mama is good teacher :) her fav mouse , i lobe how ad this painting and her cooking bit was showed how he is gotten use to her. he truly admire this girl. I want read more about breakfast routine :P i love each and every relationship you showed... you written beautifully!!!

i felt so bad how he try to avoid his Ma birthday with family ..it reminds me of something from my life, it's so hard to when you don't have them .
he hate emotion , esp he hate attachments and having close someone. I like how he said she have break the wall he have put for everyone so easily. I want see how he fall love with this pretty face girl , it's gonna be interesting. now he miss breakfast , feel cranky angry .. let see how he feels ahead ...

adi part makes me think something terrible happen with him ... did he just said let get marry . chalo i want see what's the hidden story with him yaar

khushi thinking about him , the littlest thing can make her happy aww...
now i know why she came back is when he assures her father , he will take care of her . Arnav is Arnav period.
i want see how much more Dia have told her about Arnav. it looks like both sisters were really close naaa..
hmhm.. here we come physical needs .. hayye meri choti see khsuhi . I am eagerly waiting to see how she will solve this problem.
I have feeling that she will guess that why Arnav avoided breakfast by the time he arrive home to prepare her for interview.

khushi reaction to this interview and particular one night stand hmhm... makes me wonder .I am sure his di will be shock to see her chote home early :))

I am super excited to read next part B .. update kar dena na yaar ...

I am too short for words for your writing , i just love love love it. i have read it so many times by now :)





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Posted: 13 years ago
how could i have missed reading this for so loong?? this is wonderful... oh khushi is a dream in this one. i hope you can manage to update all your FFs at least once a week.. see i am very realistic here :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok so as you can see I am on a mission to read all your ffs in one go..and this should prove how addicted I am to your writing :)

Coming back to this FF...I absolutely loved the concept and the entire idea..love the way you have shown some of the characters differently...the suspense and mystery and all the different p-o-vs definitely have me intrigued...

Finally I will be eagerly waiting for all your future updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
please please please update ::::::::::((((((((((((

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