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velangini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#661

incredibly awesome update

waiting for part b

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zarmina asad

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#662

Ahmazing! I have just read the whole thing, it had me riveted.
Brilliant plot and characterization, and there is such an awesome element of suspense in it that show how well thought out this is.

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cupcakez

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Posted: 13 years ago

#663

OMG for some reason I have this feeling that this girl NIharika or whatever her name is going to bring ARnav and Khushi together. He is worried about what she'll think and she is going to be really upset obviously. Arnav is going to be sad for hurting her and then they'll get in an argument and hopefully kiss and make it okay.

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP really really EXCITED for this one.

Expectations TOO HIGH! 😕

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Anamika100

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Posted: 13 years ago

#664

Gargee - you are such a good writer and I am such a huge fan that a mention from you is very flattering. Thank you!. In my comments below are a lot of questions. Hope you will answer in the post.

Now for the comments.

Arnav likes how Khushi is with his family and has noticed a lot of details about her actions, relationship and her personality. In fact, he may be watching her a lot more than he realizes. So. Now he is afraid he may be feeling attachment and affection and is running scared. But what are his thoughts on a physical relationship...did you tell us and I missed it or has that not been revealed yet? He feels attraction but was he/is he prepared to go all the way? Did he intend for this to be a real marriage in all aspects? Why did I think Not!

As for Khushi, she sounds so cute and loving and caring. she has thrown herself wholeheartedly into this relationship with this man and is trying her best. It's funny that she has forgotten about the physical aspect and now thinks that Arnav may be upset about that. Why do I get the feeling that Arnav never intended to fulfill that part and will be shocked if she suggests it. Of course with Khushi suggesting it, I can envision a most hilarious and ultimately painful conversation.

Why does Arnav think that Khushi is handling his crap as if 'she was used to it'? That is disturbing because she is such a kind, nice, gentle, beautiful being. The idea of anyone not treating her right is disturbing.

So Arnav had a one night stand with Niharika. Is he a playboy? Or we're all his 'relationships' like this because he preferred it that way? Does Khushi even realize that he is 'experienced' in such things and has had past relationships? I would think she knows but then again...may be not because she is such an innocent.

Adi and Dia relationship, I am finding a little psycho.

Edited by Anamika100 - 13 years ago

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@fanAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#665

I feel like saying Update soon karo jii

then I remember i need to edit ... I will soon :)

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@fanAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#666

100 PAGESYAY!!

Congratulations🤗

you write beautifully yar, LOVE IT!!!
keep it up.

Edited by fanAR - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#667

Okay so 10A was superbly written!

typical of Arnav to withdraw just as Khushi gets closer to him.

Loved the way u described her relationship with all his family members! My favorite is Akash and Khushi! thats jus too cute!

continue soon :)

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prachi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#668

wow this had been really an amazing update...

loved the way khushi bonding with all the raizada's///

thanks for the pm and update

continue soon

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Angels11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#669

Thank God u updated. It was worth the wait. Kushi must ve realized the significance of this day aft seeing the arrangements for shraath.

hmm so arnav is falling 4 his lovely wife. can i go & personally clobber him on the head. guys all around the world w'd give their right arm 2 b blessed with a wife like kushi. And this guy is so thick headed. SIGH!

Me likes the train of thought being followed by kushi. He he. consummation. way 2 go kushi kumari raizada. me & my gutter thoughts 😳

and & sorry couldnt comment or ur other 2 stories. read both of them & hit the like button but couldnt comment due 2 hectic work in office 😳

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#670

wow... this is definitely one of my favorite stories... can't believe i was missing out on all this... very good story, a very different concept.. reminded me of love actually... bits and pieces of different stories, but somehow related to one another... i loved it!!! pleaseee pleaeee update me with the pms :) wouldn't wanna miss this!!! :D