The Memories of a Butterfly-ch 12 PG142 Updated!

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

awesome update loved loved how arnav came in to her room ans saw her art and saw what she saw in his eyes the hurt the pain the betrayal hope they start bonding akash fall for payal the first time he see her so cute and i think it dia khushi sister pov thanks for the pm

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ruchshah

@ruchshah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

Oh...u took long to update this time around...missed khushi n arnav...😭

but u made it up by giving a nice update...its pleasing to read how khushi n arnav both can read each other so well...

Payal's entry...aakash's reaction😃 fabulous...

please update the next one soon...please...😊

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christmas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

i want to sat the last part might be the run away sister?

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

Hmmm.. even before you mentioned abt the last POV, I wondered who it would be. It couldnt be Khushi. Is it Dia? WIll we know what she has been upto?

Loved the update. And the description of Khushi's room. I was kind of reminded of a scene in Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na. When she finally sees her brother's bedroom? Except this time the paintings were more fairytalish.. :D

Eyes being the window to their soul. I can totally imagine that. Even in the show most of the emotions between Khushi and Arnav are conveyed through their eyes rather than through words.

Cant wait for the next update!

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velangini

@velangini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

lovely update😊

i think the last pov is of lavanya or may be payal

arhi are falling for eachother without their knowledge😉

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SedonaScarlet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

I wanted to cry when it ended :( .I want more -I need more *Wails* .

It was amazing! :D (Duh!)

Will you update soon? *Puppy dog eyes*

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#407

you always give an awesome update, I juz waiting to c love blossom between A & K and I hope his past will not destroy their lives.

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

Yayyy!!! You updated!!!

I love, love, loved it!!!

You know, Gargee. . . When I start reading an ArHi FF, the love between them shown in beautiful play of words is all I expect. . .

But! The way you described the concentration with which Khushi's hands created a portrait of her Arnav when he was at his angry, raging best. And the way she talked to the portrait and cried for it was just awesome. Totally A.W.E.S.O.M.E!!

And this section just made me all. . . . You know how overwhelmed you feel when you witness any kind of love. You need not even be connected with the two lovers. You just need to see it and you'd go all Aww. . . . . That's how I felt when I read this:

"Why?" she said- as if asking the painting- in that soft melodious voice; and he gazed at her, dumbstruck- unable to move or make a sound. "I can understand the rage, the fury- even the accusations.,," his eyes widened, "but why the pain, why the hurt- and why betrayal? What happened? What happened that stirred such hate in you? Why are you running away from the memories- when you should be keeping them close to your heart- the only other thing that you have of her?"

He stared at her. Her words ran through his mind- again and again and again. Hurt, pain, betrayal...betrayal... Betrayal!

Did she read that from my eyes? The emotions that only I could ever feel- that I tried to mask so hard from everyone all these years- could this girl read them so easily?

And he still stared at her- stared, as a lone tear escaped her eye and travelled down her milky cheek- and in that instant, he knew... knew that that tear had been for him- for his suffering, his pain, his hurt.

"Khushi."

Really Gargee, you're one of the most amazing writer that I've known. . . 👏 ⭐️

And the last part could have been from anyone of the three women. Khushi, or Lavanya or maybe even Dia!! 😲

But I wanna believe it is Khushi's POV. So I'll choose her. 😃

Thanks for such a beautiful update, sweetie, and for the PM that you'd send too.. 🤗

Edited by -_-harsh42 - 13 years ago

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Maira

@MairaKhan1180

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Posted: 13 years ago

#409

Chapter 7 made me cry buckets of tears, no kidding!
And this chapter was written so beautifully that I actually felt the emotions and see the words unfold them in to a film playing right before my eyes. I love your writing and the concept of this story. Gargee, I say you deserve a round of applause for such creativity. If possible, continue soon:)