The Memories of a Butterfly-ch 12 PG142 Updated!

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Aparamegha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

wonderful as always...you are such a talented writer..i always feel the urge to read more and more...plz update soon

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purplekid

@purplekid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

Loved it! Please update soon!!!!

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Cytherea

@Cytherea

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Posted: 13 years ago

#333

Oh God I feel so bad for Khushi..Though I'm glad she has a backbone and didn't just forgive him.. And accusing her of stealing..Arnav really does stop thinking logically when hes angry.. I'm glad she refused to take him along with her to her home..Arnav better work hard to earn her forgiveness

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@fanAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

you update when i am not even around lol did u even check my reply to last one .. no like or even reply hmph

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saiqa

@saiqa4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#335

wow...just loved how u have protrayed khushiand arnav in this ff

i can actually see the story unfolding in front of my eyes...awesome

thanks for rthe pm

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queenie11

@queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#336

Whoa, this story is great

I love how you write Khushi as a strong person with her own will who's standing up to Arnav

Thank god she's not looking past his reactions to the kangans

I look forward to reading more and to seeing where you go with this story!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#337

great update cant wait for the next one

thanks for the pm

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 13 years ago

#338

Great story idea !!!!

Khushi 's plight is so clearly shown as well as her strength of character. Loved the following statement.

Aur ek baat Mr. Raizada, I don't mind what you think about me- but I won't tolerate even one wrong word against my Babuji. And you don't have to worry about what I want or don't want- I'm quite capable of taking care of myself and my wishes- I don't need you to fulfill them."

While I love that Khushi can take care of herself, I wonder what has gone on in her life until now that she has had to take care of herself?

Also liked Arnav's initial reaction to her entrance in the room. He really finds her attractive and can not ignore her if she is some baggage he got as part of the DEALL!!!!

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#339

keeps getting better...and just the tip you say...

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#340

Another beautiful update...u do have a mystery box filled to the top...one escapes thru the slightly opened box during each update...I do not mind it at all...bring it on gal...I'm all ready.And I have to tell u this ur Khushi is absolutely fantabulous so far