The Life and Lies of Mr and Mrs Shergill-Upd:23/07

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Ayesha

@..-Ayesshhaa-..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Amazing update !

Loved it to the core and I'm really sorry for commenting late !

Do continue soon !

Love <3

Ayesha

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rija

@gunurlove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Very nice starting dear...Fabulous part it was...CS was really gud and very close to real MJHT...Sajan's frndship was written so nicely...overall a very sweet update...Continue soon and thanks for the pm Manjari...

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tanisha

@tanisha997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

awesome update🤗

loved it❤️

continue soon🤗

and pls pm me next time pls😳

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: MoNayaLover96
Awesome Blossom update ! Wow Samrat and gang in Morena !!! The 'bujha hua/lauta chirag' part was very funny😆 Last part was just hilarious 🤣 Bechara Benji...It really rewind all those golden memories again 😍 Loved this part <3

Looking forward to the next update...cont soon.. Thanks a lot 4 the PM 😊

Love, 🤗
Nila ❤️

Hi Nila!

Thank you so much for the reply and for liking the first chapter! 😃 LOL, I just LOVED that part in the show, and I just HAD to include it in my fic, since I had to incorporate a similar scene! And I'm glad to know that you laughed at the end of the chapter! I'm glad to know you were able to remember those golden moments of MJHT again!

The next update should be in an hour I guess? Once I'm done replying to all the messages! Will surely drop you a PM once again!

Cheers,

Rit 😃

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: -CreativeSoul-
awww awesome update ❤️ and who said you can't right comedy i laughed 😆 mayank and samrat's reaction upon sharing a room with uday was really funny 😆 😆 and seriously loved the part it brings back memories of mjht ❤️ the ek lauta charag dialogue brought back memories of morena miss that gang sooo much... do continue soon can't wait to read more and thanks for pm :D

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tanzeel

Hi Tanzeel!

Thank you so much for liking the update! LOL, glad to know that I was able to make you laugh, cause my friends often claim that I am not a very humorous person! Yes, I am trying to bring back a few memories of MJHT with this fic, and the fact that you were able to remember the show, is damn gratifying! The next chapter will be up in an hour or so, and will PM you again!

Cheers,

Rit

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan
dat was a beautiful update...loved it a lot!!!!!!!!!!1

Thank you so much! 😳

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: aashizin
ritchelle🤗it was wonderful upd enjoyed reading it 👏 loved gunur convo and samrat's surprise for sajan u penned down it beautifully bui was fun to read ek lauta chirag part was funny 😆can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm

Hi Aashi! 😃

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating the chapter, really means a lot! LOL, glad to know you liked the references to the actual show, I'm trying to keep the original essence of MJHT intact! Will be updating the fic in an hour, and will surely drop you a PM as well!

Cheers,

Rit

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: ..Ektaa..
Amazing Update Ritchelle ! 🤗
I Loved It ! ❤️ & I sumhow knew it dat Samrat wud same way definetly land up at Morena, so I was Right ! 😆
Awww, The Breeze scene & Dupatta & all was sooo Cute ! 😍 Mesmerizing SG Memories ! 😳

Loved MayUr here 🤣 Nupur is TYPICAL 😆 Evn m an SRK Fanatic so I can really really Understand her ! :P 😆

& The SaYank scene has to be THE BEST ! 🤣 The way they said dat, "We Cant Stay Witout Each Other" OMFG 🤣 🤣 Hillarious ! 🤣 🤣

& Now hehe, SG r gonna make MN meet up secretely ! 😆 Eagerly waiting for all the Fun & Masti 🤣 The Story build-up is Amazing ! Hats Off to You ! 🤗

Do Cont Soon & Thnx 4 the PM ! 😳

Eagerly Eagerly Waiting for the Next Update ! :D

Love,
Ekta 🤗

Hi Ektaa! 😃

Thank you SO much for liking the chapter! 😃 LOL, Sam and the entire gang just had to end up in Morena! I mean, how can all of them stay away from the Morena sisters for like a MONTH? 😛 Plus, the major turning point of the story has to take place here, which is why they all have to land up in Morena, and so they did!

Awww, thanks for liking the breeze/dupatta scene! IMO, no romantic show is complete without such a scene, and since I'm a SUPER filmy person, I had to like include such a scene! You'll see more of the eyelocks and the slip-trip-catch-eyelocks once SaJan are married and they begin to live together, but as of now this HAD to be there! Another reason for that scene is cause I personally believe that when a girl is in love, and her soulmate comes within a 5mile radius near her, wind blows, hair and dupatta flies and time stops for the lovebirds! 😆 So I just HAD to put in this scene in the fic!

ROFL ROFL I was actually shit scared when I wrote that part, and I was in double mind whether or not to include it, but I decided to let it be, and I'm glad that all of you liked it so much! 😃

Yeap, the next chapter is going to be a bit fun, peppered with bits of suspense as well, but the essence is the fact that SaJan agree to help MaYur! Though I'll warn you here, *SPOILER ALERT* the meeting of the couples is NOT gonna be a fun filled one, and that is where the drama will begin! But yes, this chapter is pretty light!

Thank you so much once again for the appreciation! The next chapter will be up in an hour or so!

Love,

Rit

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Manjari1104
Hii Rit 🤗

AMAZING Updatee 😃 Totally loved it :) Now I am just waiting for the REAL story to BEGIN! :) But seriously , you aren't too bad at JOKES. Trust me.

The Last Scene was amazing! Poor Benji! 🤣 Some how or the other, he is the one who always gets stuck with UDAY! 🤣

Samrat & Mayank Scene was totally hilarious! HOLDING HANDS! :O :O 🤣 Hilarious!

Please so Update sooon! && Give us some romance atleast :P Maybe just a little careless flirting! <3

Overall AWESOME!
Continue sooon <3

Love ,
Manjari :)

Hello Manjari!

Thank you so much once again for liking the update! Like I said, I'm surprised that you all liked the SaYank scene so much, I myself was terrified before posting it up here!

Next update is due in an hour or so, and yes, there is a scene that is SLIGHTLY inspired from the famous gajar-ka-halva scene! 😉

Thank you so much once again!

Love,

Rit

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: SM_317
Heyy Ritchelle🤗
wow just read ur updates..
awesomee cs nd prolouge..👏
i really liked d concept..😳
loved d 1st chp..
nd yaa it was funnyy😆😆
sajan's frndship so adorable..😍
wonderfully written updates..
cont soon nd plzz add me to ur pm list..
love
Shreya..