~*KAHANI PYAAR KII PART 1*~ SUJAL KASHISH

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1151

R.S yaar me here with my comments on the part you have posted.... is baar main jaldi aagayi.... hope you like the comment.... 😃
tho yaar part was very damn splendid... mujhe yeh part bohat zyada achcha laga.. it was very damn sweet yaar... sachchi shoo cute...tumhari story bohat hii achche se jaa rahi hai... and me loving it competely yaar.... it is simply rocking , amazing , awesome , brilliant , marvelous , fantastic , jhakkas , bindaas , super duper cool , par exceelence , stupendous... actually teri story ko describe karne ke liye main kitne bhii adjectives use karoon woh sab mujhko kum hii lagenge... your story is completely mindblowing.....tho part wahaan se shuru hotha hai jahaan sujal , kashish ke beech romance aur unki meeti-meeti baatein chal rahi hothi hai.. kashish ki aankhon mein nami bhi hothi hai aur khushi bhii kii sujal uski zindagi ka ek atoot hissa hai... hye..hye..is dono ke pyaar par tho main vaarijawaan... bohat hii achcha hai un dono ke beech ka rishtha... har sach se sachcha hai inka pyaar... they mean the entire world for each other... un dono kii jaan sirf ek doosre mein basthi hai sujal hai tho kashish hai , sujal nahii tho kasdhish bhi nahii.. yarr me completely loved the scene it was very damn cute , indeed very very sweet.. sujal ka usse mooh dikhayi ka poochna kashish ka sharmana.. all were just stupendous..ab agle din subah sujal mahashay getting all romantic with his biwi.. and kashish madam is not in mood of any romamce..aahh.. how boring could she get... ab sujal gets upset.. aur kashish apne priy-pati-dev ko manana mein jhut jaathi hai... and then there is a sweet-tweet moment between them.. phir unka woh hug... hye..hye..main mar jawa gudh khake... kya mast tha yaar... sachchi jawaab nahii tera yaar... sujal , kashish ke beech ke itne pyaare pyaare sweet sweet moments padke mujhko tho sharam aa rahi hai.. unke chehro par woh muskaan kya baat hai...they have a sense of satisfaction...a sense of being complete o their faces and i love it completely..😳
ab the scene between prerna , sujal and kashish it was damn good... it showed such a good devar bhabie relationship.. it showed the family bond joh usne beech exists between them... sujal ka prerna ko chidana.. then even prerna observing kii sujal is very happy and kashish ke chehre par ek chamak sii hai.. and then prerna telling sujal kii he is her son... and the emotional moment between the..yaar way too good.. bohat achche se you have described this scene.... too gooddd.. 👏
then coming to the scene between angad , kripa , sujal , kashish and prerna... angad sulking kii sujal is holding 2 beautifull ladies at a time aur kripa usse ek bhi ladki ko at a time pakadne nahii dethi.. aur kripa ka usse kehna kii usko ladkiyo ke alawa aur kuch soojtha hii nahii.. this scene was really damn funny yaar.. angad ka sulking.. hahahahaha... 😆 😆
ab then coming to the meete meete scenes between sujal and kashish... sujal ka airport ko late aana thodi si daant khana..then kashish ka sujal se naraaz hona.. sujal ka usko manane kii koshish karna... then he singing for her... aur atlast kashish ke dil ka pighal jaana.. they having a walk at the beech haatho mein... bas unke beech khamoshi hai... aur woh khamoshi unke pyaar ko bayaan kar rahii hai.. ab they having a romantic candle light dinner.... hye..hye... kya baat hai... then ghar aake kashish ka sulking over the matter kii sujal hamesha files mein hii dubah hua hotha hai... sujal then holding her close to himself and woh zara kashish koo chaid na.. kashish ka sharmana......sab kuch was just too marvelous... then un dono ka ek doosre ke baahon ke ghehre mein so jaana... they being so close to eachother like woh hamesha hamesha aisa hii rahenge... then agle din kii unki beech kii baatein..sujal taking her to the farmhouse he gifted bajaj.. wahaan par dono ka spending time with each other and knowing each other better.. aur wahaan ke unke beech ke scenes the dialogues the aankhon se aankhon ka bolna.. aur unke beech ka romance the song maula mere all were too damn perfect..sachchi yaar it was damn rocking.. i was like aww man.... it's soo achcha... me liked each and every bit of it kasam se..it was just too amazing... par excellence... ☺️
R.S dear ab next part ke liye mera guess yeh hoga kii shayad sujal , kashish ke aur bhi kareeb aayenge.... aur i also think kii un dono kii is sachche achche se rishthe ko kissi ke bure saaye kii nazar padegi.. shayad sujal , kashish ke beech koi tho ghalatfaimi paida karne kii poori koshish karega and shayad woh kuch hadh thak kamiyaab bhi ho jaye.. lekin i think kii un dono ke beech kii durriyaan kitni bhii kyun na badh jaye un dono ka dil tab bhi sirf ek doosre ke liye dhadkega... woh dono ke liye sabse zyada important sirf ek doosre kii khushi hogi... something like how many ever differences crop-up it will be like united we stand.. and woh dono ke beech romantic moments bhii honge zaroor.... ab R.S dear bolo mera guess kaisa laga me sahii ya nahii... 😉 R.S dear please do post the next part soon... waiting for it eagerly.. hope you liked the comment.. 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1152

amazing part sorry for the late reply well done. Its just beautiful. pls cont soon. WAiting for it hope it comes up soon

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#1153

No thanx suri yar i just luved ur comments😊😊😊 hope u like the next part too which m going to post😊

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Loki

@sambharchutney

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#1154

hi jaaan

Please create a new topic for your fanfic because it crossed over 150 pgs. Thats the rule tat why. Please do it asap.😳

Take Care,

xx Shailee xx

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#1155

Originally posted by: golu_1677
amazing part sorry for the late reply well done. Its just beautiful. pls cont soon. WAiting for it hope it comes up soon

Thanx Golu😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#1156

Guyz I'd created a new topic 4

Kahani Pyaar Kii

next part is posted there it is called

Kahani Pyaar Kii # 2

check it out here is the link

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=599936&T PN=1&#10164544

willbe w8ing 2 know ur comments on part.
& sorry shailee 4 being L8 in creating a new topic but what to do my net is not working properly now u can close this topic.

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Loki

@sambharchutney

Rocker

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1157

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8

Guyz I'd created a new topic 4

Kahani Pyaar Kii

next part is posted there it is called

Kahani Pyaar Kii # 2

check it out here is the link

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=599936&T PN=1&#10164544

willbe w8ing 2 know ur comments on part.
& sorry shailee 4 being L8 in creating a new topic but what to do my net is not working properly now u can close this topic.