KriYaansh: Piya Tu Kaahe Rootha Re!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: kriyansh24



to be true- missed ur writing so much. the descriptions are so perfect. the word u use r so perfect to describe. nothing better can be written.

one complaint. y did u stop here. plz jaldi se continue it.

hi i am vaishali, so friends?

awww VAISHALI😆..thats so sweet of u..i won't say i missed writing 😆..lol i have been writing frm quite a time now...😃
and thanku so much...m glad u loved it...getting my signature WORD USE apprecaition is awesome😆
i m gonna continue jaldi se...hehe stopped it coz my class had started so had to let go off my cellphone😆 and yeah frnds for sure
*shakes hand*😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: vshalikriyaansh

WOW! first of all! same pinch! am in luv wid dis song! keeps playin in my head..all d day!! 😛
and i dunno wat it is but evry time smone writes an ff and here we go again Kriyaansh is as Breathtaking as ever! evn in our stories!
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L 👏 gr8 writin! keep on writin more!❤️

AWW i m in love with the song...ahh always in my head as well...*Pinching you*😆
thanku😊
will write more for sure😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: 21Neha21

it was amazing...

it was so touching...
u write beautifuly..i could realy feel her pain..
waiting for d next part...

thanx neha😊...i actually want them to show something like this but ALAS they prefer axing a character *alas*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: yogini64

Awww . . . . She's in so much pain... & so are we,,, she's gone...
I hope she continues dancing & ends up in rey's arms... Hehehe... I'm a crazy fan...

me too a crazy fan😆..i so hope she ends up in rey's arms..r u listening CV's😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Aarti... so glad to see u back... n loved the way u described how Kriya was thinking about Rey n dancing🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sweetshine

OK first of all YAYYY i can comment on your OS properly 😃😆hahaha dat too lamba wale nd yipppeee sooo damn happy to read ur work coz i jus love all of dem😳

ready to get up on channe ka jhad aftr looong tym🤣🤣
FARAH😆🤣🤣🤣
hehe missed our LPHBs...shit IF was our home😭..but hatt we aren't rondus 🤣🤣🤣
btw thanku so much for the lamba channe jhaad wala comment...heheh LOVE IT🤣🤣🤣

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omg dis was really one of d BEST thing i have read😳⭐️...the way you wrote every step it jus perfectly moves with the song😳
hehe i din hear the song before but as soon as i strtd reading i played it on and damn with the music and the words filling up the imaginary picture WOW😳 😃it was sooo BEAUTIFUL nd soo Heartt-touching😳
I told u na the song is awe-frigging-some..😆...dash hahaha missed saying DASH..but the song is ah-mazing..😆..and thanku thanku..hayyee allah even i love the steps..bola na i like this OS.. :P self cenetred maniac is here😛
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and with that the curtains rose up...slowly and stealthily...crawling up with the music, unveiling the thin swan. Clad in a white Indian attire stomping her foot on the dilapidated stage with the ghungru tied on her feet..synched with the high pitched commotion...she looked up; the swollen eyes with smudged kohl around the eyes spoke of the misery...and the stern expression engraved the dire need of her soul!

Jus Love wat u wrote here it created the perfect image😳 nd hehehe yess totally imagined in a white churidar hahaha😆😃
hehe CHURIDAAR all the way..lol...ROFL...damn why can't we get such a scene in D3..i wanna watch D3..but i really can't😭
she stepped forward and tapped her foot on the ground keeping up with the thump of the beats and made the classic mudra with those fingers dipped in the Red ALTA of auspiciousness..

this was Ah-mazing the way you have written out abt the step and the movements its jus perfect with the music👏😃👏
*almost on the peak of channa jhaad* ROFLROFLROFL
With flashes of him tracing her cheek...looking at her with the eyes-filled with love..the sparks of aggressiveness grew in her..dancing through the widespeard area...her eyes caught the Band she wore..the Louian feign..her eyebrows twitched up and she spinned her body and removed the now unearthly band and wedged away the memories of him making her wear that with swiftly ducking down and up.

The pain which jus synced beautifully with the beats and then the flashbaks the way u have put it out in words it totally connected and soo touchingCry😳
awieee *HUGS*...lets cry ikhate..😭
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Driving away the thoughts of him touching her...tying the dori of her choli..the moments it held..taking a handfull of the red color lying ahead..she traced her arms with the same..and felt the cold blood pass through her veins in a quick manner. Dancing through the tears she kept on thumping her feet aganist the ground as if punishing herself for her deeds...

The aggressiveness and the pain u wrote here is jus mindblowing 👏👏👏

EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

spinning around with the music trying to escape from her past...the past she adored but left her all drained depicting the same with the red color spread all across her ensemble as if showing her stained figurine through it..

Its Beautiful seriusly words r very less to xpress😳 but the way its written wid the pain it connects soo well and touches ur heart😃😳

it is such an AH-MAZING OS the whole song and the dance its all perfect👏👏⭐️
plzzz continueee soon hehehe now dat u hav holidays hehehehe continue soon hehehe 😳😆
hehehe holidays..damn do din...maine adha din to waste bhi kar diya😭..chalo abhi thodi der me likhti hu and then will update hehe...hope u like it as always...and if i haven't said it before then YASSS..I LOVE U😆
😆😆😆😆😆😭😭😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Anyaa_012

wowww AWESOME!!!
I luvvv it yaa!!!;);)
ur writing is damn good yr !!:)
the way u wrote ..ahh!!:):)
plzzz update sooon!!:):)
an plzz add me in ur PM list!!:)

thanku..thanku😆😆..there is no list btw..i have another a/c..REYAANSH-KRIA..thats my PM account..add me😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
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Originally posted by: crazysky

aart its too gud...
n love the pain n dance u showed
its incredible dude
waiting u to continue

aww thanku so chetna...i m gonna continue it soon😊...and glad to see u here😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: snigdha143

luvly update u r very gud in xpressing d emotions...

thanku so much..hehhe keep reading plss😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

Aarti... so glad to see u back... n loved the way u described how Kriya was thinking about Rey n dancing🤗

thanku so much...but i don't remember u..m so sorry...😭😭😭😭😭😭
help me na...😭

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