KriYaansh: Piya Tu Kaahe Rootha Re!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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HELLOOO!!😆
so this is an INCOMPLETE OS that i wrote whilst travelling😆...i m in LOVE with this song frm KAHANI and have been imagining this...will continue it later...i hope its liked...do comment and press like if u actually LIKE it... and leave suggestions that would help me improving😃

and IGNORE THE TYPOS😆



The dimmed auditorium spoke of a latent voice, the music blew out of the unraised curtains, the classic thumping of irregular beats depicting the various ragas in the voice of pain, the music changed its pace and an erratic sound was heard...and with that the curtains rose up...slowly and stealthily...crawling up with the music, unveiling the thin swan. Clad in a white Indian attire stomping her foot on the dilapidated stage with the ghungru tied on her feet..synched with the high pitched commotion...she looked up; the swollen eyes with smudged kohl around the eyes spoke of the misery...and the stern expression engraved the dire need of her soul!

piyaa tu kahe rootha re...

she stepped forward and tapped her foot on the ground keeping up with the thump of the beats and made the classic mudra with those fingers dipped in the Red ALTA of auspiciousness..

piya tu kahe rootha re...nigoda jag jootha re...chali kos kos mai akeli...mose bujhi jaye na paheli...fir ha bani mori saheli..

Twirling in and out..stretching her tired body...she kept on tapping her foot on the ground getting flashes of the good times...the time which WAS and the twinkling ghunghru sweetened her damp shadow and the swollen eyes moistened again...

With flashes of him tracing her cheek...looking at her with the eyes-filled with love..the sparks of aggressiveness grew in her..dancing through the widespeard area...her eyes caught the Band she wore..the Louian feign..her eyebrows twitched up and she spinned her body and removed the now unearthly band and wedged away the memories of him making her wear that with swiftly ducking down and up..and sprinting around the lone big stage increasing the speed with which she thumped the ground..ghunghru creating the squeaky noise and adding to her rage filled with ache!!

The loud sound trespassed her and she spinned all around like a defunct soul..she kept on revolving in the skimpy area, with images of him catching her; escaping the fall and then the harsh way she hushed him...with a thud she fell down...crawling on her knees...she shut her eyes..and let the tears of yearning wash away the love-deprived ones.

Uplifting herself up...she stood up again.

mai jaagu sote sote jaise mohe lage badan mera tune hi ho mera chuaa..

Driving away the thoughts of him touching her...tying the dori of her choli..the moments it held..taking a handfull of the red color lying ahead..she traced her arms with the same..and felt the cold blood pass through her veins in a quick manner. Dancing through the tears she kept on thumping her feet aganist the ground as if punishing herself for her deeds...

Mai jo hu tori baat baat..chale sath sath...gehri ka dia...tu jo ghar aaye...daras dikhaye...garba mai tore lag jaye...

She moved her limbs gracefully, taking turns, twisting her petite frame back and forth..her tears kept on flowing remembering how she hugged him in fear..in dark...her home was what his arms were, his soft touch against her dainty flesh. His soft fingers used to touch her bare arms which now were stained...stained coz of her own karma as its said..she ran her fingers through her arms splattering the red color..and running the same through the draped cloth around her waist and spinning around with the music trying to escape from her past...the past she adored but left her all drained depicting the same with the red color spread all across her ensemble as if showing her stained figurine through it..

TO BE COMPLETED😃
AARTI

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luv_arsha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aarti its too good see you on the forum again🤗
and the os is mind blowing as always ...you are too good in narrating the emotions while reading your os i was easily able to imagine kria dancing on the song and this song is indeed very good👏
loved it very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_arsha

aarti its too good see you on the forum again🤗

and the os is mind blowing as always ...you are too good in narrating the emotions while reading your os i was easily able to imagine kria dancing on the song and this song is indeed very good👏
loved it very much

thanku so much...ahhh i miss forum😭..but LIFE is busy as hell and waise bhi kriyaansh's exit has made me bid adieu to D3 as well..but KriYaansh is deeprooted in my soul...😃
and hellloz😆
hehehe i have holi holiday so wandering here😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!
i loved the way u described kriya dancing n thinking of rey!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow and thanks for coming back after a long time I missed u tons

loved it and pm me polzzz
Edited by The007Shivani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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alisha kalisha😉
kidhar che re kamini...Fb pe bhi ni hai😆😆😆...i michhh u😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3

wow!!
i loved the way u described kriya dancing n thinking of rey!!!

thanku so much tania😃😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: The007Shivani

wow and thanks for coming back after a long time I missed u tons


loved it and pm me polzzz

oh thanku so much shivani😃
yeah i miss forum alott and all of u guys...damn wat a sad end to such an amazing journey...SUDDEN DEATH😕😕😕😕😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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arti its good to see to on forum after long tym😊
n da way u describe kriya's feeling is jst mindblowing...my eyes are moist...n its too beautiful
n pls pm me wen u update nxt part of dis😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aarti its simply awsm..m in love wid song too...d startng narratn was so beautiful n her dance esthatic...putn red colour al around her n dn remincisng d earlier past is another xample of comendblty...d best part was wen she turnd round n fell on d floor shedng her tears to pour down her heart...ah-mazing..try to continue it asap

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