AR/ARSH OS#21:Chahyee Hai Tanhai-pg143/New Thrd link- pg148 - Page 46

Originally posted by: cool_SK

I was serious mahua n farwa k agar app ne comment na kia tau bhool jao last part ko...and as u havent, abh bhool jao usay pakka...

I guess i m lacking somewhere that u guys dont find my work to worth comment on...

Take care...

hawww!!! humari kya galti hai??? humne kya kiya??? humei kyu punish kar rahi ho????
apne toh iska pm v nehi veja...fir v dhund nikala and read it...and now u r saying tht u won't complete it... that's not fair...

sorry for delayed comment dear i loved the whole part dear so wonderful so amazing, how riddhima is thinking about him thats just so much beautiful and armaan's texts is extra ordinary beautiful in this whole part because its having that reality touch and then their first meeting and riddhima's enthusiasm aww taht was seo sweet typical and practically newly fiance and muskaan and sapna loved both of them loved the complete part when riddhima all the way ran and the reaching near door catching her breaths so sweet and then the ending scene tea vendor and tea and helping armaan and clicking that picture perfect with sun set just so superbly described flawless hope kii next part jaldi milega continue soon please...

Hey sorry i havent commented for the second update. I wanted to give a full review of the story when it was finished, but if you wanted short comments after each update then i will do so :)
Sorry i havent been regular with comments, lets just say that there is a lot of things which are messed up in my life at the moment. But i promise that i will give you a comment.
Now coming to the story so far, i think its shaping up very nicely and as u mentioned somewhere earlier, I also like stories on arrange marraiges. After u finish this ff maybe u should start up a ff on arrange marrieges :)
The parts have been amazing so far, simple yet elegant :) i like the way you portray the characters in your OS (i havd re read all your OS a million times now)
I wonder when we will get so read some romance happening between them ;)
Cannot wait to read the next update :) and my name is Shivani by the way (i read your comment and shivi was mentioned there so i thought to give u my real name)
Pls pls pls plsss update tonight, i will be waiting eagerly :D

hey dear
both parts r mindblowing
loved them so much...
loved AR r cute n adorable
i loved arrange marriage stories
plzzz update soon

haye Allah... I thot poora hona pe comment krun gi... Acha miss blackmailer i ll do itt aaj inshallah

abhi kya mahua aur meri jaan lo gi.. Update kr do.. Mai comment krne lagi hun

this is soo fantastic... So purrreee... I just loved their innocence.. How do u manage to write with simplicity yaaar...

I hope u get an amazing life partner as welll... I fell in love wd them all over again... Their sweeet moments msgs...the way they see each other chup chup kkk... Everythng is awesomeee..
Waiting for u to complete itt...plzzz...nd shilpa nd muskaaan are the best support one cn get...

Aww this is sooo cute <33
Its like a fairytale. All sweet and pretty! I am in Love with this! Try updating soon :D