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illusiveworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1081

Originally posted by: barunlove
Dis is so ASR...dicy wid his judgements n emotions always...loved dis part...plzzz update soon👏

Agreed! The boy is silly when anger takes over and every emotion is extreme for him. He needs to get that under control!

But thank youuu for liking the chapter :D

I shall update on/after the 7th!

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illusiveworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1082

Originally posted by: vidya.sanjay
Great one.
True ,u didn't leave us at a cliff hanger ,but again at cross roads.worried for Arshi again.
Thanks for the PM.

Merci XD

Ahahaha, I think it became a habit. I only had time to update this amount of chapter. & it felt right to end with Khushi's thought. Hopefully next chapter will end differently :)

You're most welcome! And thank youuu for reading and liking the chapter!

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illusiveworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1083

Originally posted by: e_enigma
Oh mann!
That was amazing.
But so sad. The way he yelled at her is so totally plausible that its scary!
loved it!

Thank youuu for reading and liking the chapter XD

I am SOOO glad that you could see the actual possibility of this happening! ASR is not a man of words and when he does speak, most of the time it's wrong timing and wrong place & wrong person!

Nonetheless, thank you for the comment :)

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illusiveworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1084

Originally posted by: arshi314
Aww :( no !! So sad for khushi!! Bichari :(

Agreed :( Khushi has gone through so much and now this too!

Nonetheless, thank you for reading and liking the chapter :D

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illusiveworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1085

Originally posted by: bobeeta
Nahiii ...bachari khushi...!! Arnav is a dummy...lol... love it continue soon x

Agreed! Arnav needs a slight nudge telling him what's wrong and what's right! Dummy would be the correct adjective for him atm! Khushi :(

Thank you sooo much for liking the chapter and for the comment :)

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Sana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1086

Really thanks for the early update 😃

What a powerful and amazing chapter! 👏

Just for a second I thought Khushi was shot.. thankfully creepy Shyam was shot 🤢 🥳

And ya Arnav crying for Khushi.. 😭 heart- wrenching...

Atlast Arnav kicked him yipee... I guess you removed all your anger on Shyam in that part right? 🤣 Justified 😃 I would have done the same...

And Anjali commiting suicide.. I did not expect this.. shocked me.. Poor Arnav.. The way he shouts at Khushi.. I feel really bad for her... 😭 I hope he realises soon that it was not her fault.. this had to happen... 😭

Continue soon and thanks for the pm and sorry for this extremely late comment 😃 😊

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illusiveworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1087

Originally posted by: uamaz
What an absolutely fabulous update !! My heart went out to poor Khushi ...Whilst I appreciate Arnav is angry and you kept him in character I hope Khushi breaks her promise of not leaving him and does go because just a few minutes ago she risked her own life for his Di's and now he is accusing her of killing her. Yes he is made but still kushi didn't need that.

Hope she leaves him ... making him realise how he keeps breaking her whilst all she does is protect him ... Hope Anjali once recovered keeps Arnav a tight slap !! Here her marriage has been broken because of the snake she married and Arnav is set on destroying the marriage he received as blessing from DM and hurting the very girl who loves his sister so much ...

Thank you so so so very much for liking the update and for the comment too :D

Thank you for appreciating that Arnav is just being in character! Khushi definitely will not let him go easy for this one - whether she leaves or stays back!

He needs to realize and who better than Anji baby herself?

Loved your last line about marriages. Ironic isn't?

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illusiveworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1088

Originally posted by: -Drishti-
You know at times like this .. I truly hope for a separation!!
I'm out at my cousins, so will write my long comments by monday! But I got SO happy when I saw your PM that I HAD to read!!! And omgg, next chapter will be on the new thread.. Congrats Rachita!!!

Hello Drishti!

Awww, you read the chapter even at your cousin's! Means so much to me XD

You're right - they need to be separated - physically, emotionally, mentally..

Yayyy :D Can't wait for your long comment :D As nerdy as that sounds, I desperately look forward to them :$

OMG you're rightt! We finished one thread? HOLY!!! :O *gasp* Thanks for pointing it out:D