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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

thank god krish cleared everything and made A see the truth...and i am finally happy that all MU has been cleared and A has given K her rightful place...
simply awesome with a befitting end...loved it
keep writing

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Electric_BuBBle

@Electric_BuBBle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Awww! This is ending already, no fair 😭

I'm glad Arnav knows the truth, I want someone like Krish to be in the show so he can reveal the truth, possibly NK, I guess.

I really loved the ending. Really cute and sweet, they way he put her on the bed.

Thanks for the PM, Z! Loved this SS alot :)

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Addie07

@Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

amazing part zee... thanks a million for continuing.. love the guy...

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exoLarmy

@exoLarmy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Love the way you have made Krish's character. whoa! He's so calm and dangerous at the same time! i loved it 😉 It was funny how he pissed Shyam off by saying the "Truth" out loud for the psychopath to hear clearly.

The guy is pulchritude! love his amazing lucid mind and heart!

I like the way you have made Arnav regret. it's almost like he's caught in penitentiary of his own terrible behaviour with Khushi in the past.

Loved it :)

Thanks for the pm lovey!

xxx

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blah_blah3

@blah_blah3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Just read all the parts in one go, and I absolutely loved it! ⭐️

Loved the way Krish understood Khushi's silence, how he threatened both Shyam and Arnav.

Love how Arnav found out Shyam's truth, and went to Khushi feeling guilty and wanting to repent his mistakes.

It's really true that big brothers make everything better!

Fabulous SS hon, absolutely amazing!

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amber (nick amy)

@misslaugheasily

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Hey Zara!

since i'm another late-entry to this thread, i'll comment separately for each part...😊

firstly; are you crazy or what?? what do you mean by "not that great"? hell, it was the best ArHi SS ever!

i loved krish a LOT, he is just the kind of brother khushi is likely to have; he is just like her-- likely, fun and very passionate (uh..i don't have any double meaning to that description..😉)

and finally, there's a character who has brains for once... i was getting sick of the people of RM not getting the hint.. sometimes i feel that maybe maami is the smartest of all the raizada's.. at least she notices that there is tension between the two..😆

the second part was totally epic! i loved the way khushi spilled the beans and krish threatened/dealed with arnav without really going on the offensive..😊

and the last part was so awesome that i can't sum it all up in one word... i loved the way krish revealed the truth infront of arnav-- and i loved the way you described his painful regret even more!

and yet, i couldn't help wishing there was more!😭

zara, you're a fabulous writer.. i can't believe i didn't come across your pieces before..

and if you have any more wonders lying there, undiscovered by me, please, please, please pm me!😳😳