Kriyansh FF-twilight style chapter 6 pg26 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG soni its awsm..wen i startd readng i thout u just the story bt wait u had beter plans up ur sleeves coz it was just a dream..lovd how u dscribd d whole updatd..update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
awesome start!
cant wait to see how ur going to proceed with the story!
continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Awesome first part!! :D
Can't wait to read more
Thx for the pm 😳
- Cyutie
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
OMG!! It ws jus osme..totaly in luv wid ur FF!!
U described da view perfctly..!
Cntinue krnaa n mujhe Pm krna mt bhulnaa..<3<3!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
that was such a good update and thanks for the pm :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was an awesome start...
can't wait to read ahead...
update soon and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OSUMMM...I LOVED IT !!!!!
nd thx for the PM...
eagerly waitin for ur next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i love the way u write...it's so professional👍🏼

loved the update n thnx for the pm😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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First day

"I am already here" neha shouted loud enough for me to hear'

"Yup m ready give me 2 minutes" I said. I was just putting on sum mascara, I m not a person who is into makeup and suff but today being the first day I just thought of putting on some, I looked into the mirror. I was wearing a light blue jeans with a checks black and white three fourth shirt which had a hood attached to it "perfect" I said grinned at myself but the word reminded me of him "Ohh no, not again" I frowned n ran down stairs avoiding my thoughts.

After having our breakfast and we ran to leave.

"Bye take care and be good it's your first day" she said waving giving the typical mothers speech as we waved back.

We got into her bike and rode our way to college.

"I m so nervous kria I hope all goes well" her voice was indeed reluctant but I was all the more worried coz she was driving.

"Don't worry I am sure we'll have a great day neha and why are you so scared. I mean you boyfriend is like the star of St Louis, you're gonna be welcomed like a princess" I chuckled, trying to calm her down and it did work, within no time she was blushing.

"Stop it for god sake" she said blushing, as I giggled.

"By the way where is your hero, I hope he'll be there on time, punctuality and Vicky are two opposite poles" I said looking around.

"Don't worry, I already warned him not to be late" she said with a gist of pride in her voice.

"Okay, someone gone all responsible" I taunted, as we reached the college safely in her bike

We entered the gate and there he was.

"Hey girls" Vicky shouted loud enough for the whole college to hear and within no time we were the center of attraction, thanks to Vicky, damn that was embarrassing but not for neha obvious reasons.

"There he is, on time" neha grinned.

"Not bad" I said, with raised eyebrows. I was actually glad he made it on time'

We were walking towards him and all of a sudden a Porsche came in from nowhere and was on the verge of hitting us

when neha pulled us back, her hand tightly gripped to my ankle. We were terrified coz who so ever that was almost got us killed, it was all so fast. Within seconds couldn't even react properly.

"ohh shit! We are alive" she sighed in relief.

"What the hell are u blind or what?"I yelled, my voice was full of anger.

"Watch it dude" said shouted right after me.

"Guys ignore please we r getting late, come on let's go"Vicky snapped in a hesitant manner.

"But Vicky those idiots" I complained.

"kria you'll find such people here, rich brat's and all those show off's, so it's better to ignore them" Vicky said trying to calm me down but I was not the only one he had to convince, as soon as he completed.

"Wow, What a welcome, Mr Vikram Mehra" neha said sarcastically.

Poor her, I told her she'll be welcomed like a princess and this is what she got. I am a very bad predictor I thought to myself.

"Baby it's not like that, it's just that you ran into the wrong people" Vicky said trying to cover up.

"My friends are not like this, they r totally cool, come lets go and meet them, I am sure you'll like them" he said it with so conviction that she had to give up they were so engrossed in their love talks that I finally tried distracting them.

"But we have lectures".

"You'll are anyways early for the first lecture" he said as he got hold of neha's hand n guided us to the college building.

While we were walking towards the college building my eyes ran into the parking area where that Porsche was parked. I was peeping just to get a glimpse of that idiot. The door opened, n a girl came out of it. She was wearing black knee length one piece.

I couldn't see her face as she was facing the other side as she closed the door and was about to turn we crossed the college building and she was out of sight. What was that suspense? I smirked.

😊srry for the small update but 2mrws update will be big 1 promise...coz 2mrw both the vamps and werewolves will be introduced.

Edited by Kriyansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cute update soni vicky aka archie rocksss vihaa obv rocksss cutest ever nd kria love her good start loved it nd waiting for d __________ i think u know for wat i am waiting update soon really i need longest update tmw...
thnx for d pm soni love u...❤️
Edited by sujucoolstar - 13 years ago

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