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@Chocoangel

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

awsum concept with an equally amazingg update..

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

I like your concept, adjoining the indian beliefs and all!!

The update was really very interesting. I wonder how Arnav will react after seeing Neethi.

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e_enigma

@e_enigma

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

oooh! I loved it!

please pm me when you continue!

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Electric_BuBBle

@Electric_BuBBle

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: pc17
Fantastic but come one you can't leave us hanging. Next update asap! Please! 😉

ps. I know I am becoming very demanding but you said you wanted someone to nag you so...have no fear, pc17 is here! Nagging is my specialty! God help my future children 😆

Normally, if my mother would say that in order to make me clean my room, my responses would be like "No! Never! Not In This Lifetime!"

But since I said that I need someone on my back now to start nagging me. It's pretty understandable and I probably wouldn't say "lifetime" to you guys because it would make half of you guys faint 😆

But other than that, thanks a ton! Now keep on doing that because I have a habit of forgetting things too 😆 And about the update, I'm in my lazy mood, maybe one next week. 😃 Then again my schedule is currently booked with lazy conferences. 🤣 Yea, I'm a tough cookie.

God help me!

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

The update was really good!! But in one part found it a bit confusing ""Fine, I'm gonna go eat all the jalebi that Ma made!" Veera replied. "Okay, I'm up!" Khushi shouted, hurrying into the bathroom.
"that must be Neethi right in place of Khushi?!! Apart from that the entire chap was really good..Cont soon :)

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ErichPawJane

@ErichPawJane

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

its sad but i love it, cant wait for the next update :-)

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guyinoblivion

@guyinoblivion

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

i must tell you, its a unique thought process and storyline. Hope to hear more form you

Edited by Cheta - 13 years ago

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

pls continue cant wait for next one

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

you certainly changed the prologue...sounds different but am not sure yet about neethi and this reincarnation thing...confused ...waiting to see what you come up with...